"ek aafat hai yeh jawaani bhi"taza tarhi ghazal aapkay hawaa

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"ek aafat hai yeh jawaani bhi"taza tarhi ghazal aapkay hawaa

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Assalaam o alaikum
dosto

hum apni taaza tarhi ghazal aapki bacaaratoN ki nazr kar rahay haiN.


gar qubool uftad zahay....

arz kiya hai......

jaavedaani bhi aur faani bhi
kya 'ajab shaye hai zindagaani bhi

cheen layta hai zindagi akcar
baadaloN say barasta paani bhi

naujawaaN aaj ka yeh kahta hai
ek aafat hai yeh jawaani bhi

maana 'aurat khuda ki rahmat hai
nah bujhay pyaas aisa paani bhi

haq ki aaghaush jannati jhoola
"neend bhi raat bhi kahaani bhi"

apni haamid haseen guzri hai
zindagaani bhi aur jawaani bhi

nateejaye fikr
haamid baaqari
al hamdulillah



jaavedani:immortality
faani:mortality

mai.n to karta nahi.n kuch aur ebaadat ke siwa
paas mere nahi.n kuch aur mohabbat ke siwa
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Re: "ek aafat hai yeh jawaani bhi"taza tarhi ghazal aapkay hawaa

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moHtaram H. Baqri SaaHib aadaab!

Aap ne nihayat dilkash aor rooHparwar kalam se nawaza hai. jis ke liye maiN aap kaa mamnoon hooN. sabhee asha'aar qaabil-e-Sad daad-o-taoSeef haiN. Allah kare zaor-e-qalam aor zeyaadah!

jaavedaani bhi aur faani bhi
kya 'ajab shaye hai zindagaani bhi

waah Waah!

cheen layta hai zindagi akcar
baadaloN say barasta paani bhi

Waah Waah!

naujawaaN aaj ka yeh kahta hai
ek aafat hai yeh jawaani bhi

Kiya kehne!

maana 'aurat khuda ki rahmat hai
nah bujhay pyaas aisa paani bhi

Waah!

haq ki aaghaush jannati jhoola
"neend bhi raat bhi kahaani bhi"

Waah khub girah lagaee hai.

apni haamid haseen guzri hai
zindagaani bhi aur jawaani bhi

Kya kehne Waah Waah! Bohot khoob!

Wassalam
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Muzaffar Ahmad Muzaffar wrote:moHtaram H. Baqri SaaHib aadaab!

Assalaam o alaikum
muzaffar bhaaii sahib

kaise haiN aap?

hamaara pc kharaab tha isilye idhar kuch dinoN se hum net per nah aasake.jawaab meiN deri keliye hum muaazirat chaahtay haiN.


Aap ne nihayat dilkash aor rooHparwar kalam se nawaza hai. jis ke liye maiN aap kaa mamnoon hooN. sabhee asha'aar qaabil-e-Sad daad-o-taoSeef haiN. Allah kare zaor-e-qalam aor zeyaadah!

jaavedaani bhi aur faani bhi
kya 'ajab shaye hai zindagaani bhi

waah Waah!

cheen layta hai zindagi akcar
baadaloN say barasta paani bhi

Waah Waah!

naujawaaN aaj ka yeh kahta hai
ek aafat hai yeh jawaani bhi

Kiya kehne!

maana 'aurat khuda ki rahmat hai
nah bujhay pyaas aisa paani bhi

Waah!

haq ki aaghaush jannati jhoola
"neend bhi raat bhi kahaani bhi"

Waah khub girah lagaee hai.

apni haamid haseen guzri hai
zindagaani bhi aur jawaani bhi

Kya kehne Waah Waah! Bohot khoob!

Wassalam
Muzaffar A Muzaffar
aapki musalsal hausalah afzaaye keliye hum aapke behad mamnoono mashkoor haiN.

allah(sbhnwt) aap per rahmatoN ki baarish kare.ameen

aapka apna
haamid baaqari
mai.n to karta nahi.n kuch aur ebaadat ke siwa
paas mere nahi.n kuch aur mohabbat ke siwa
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Haqeeqat, haqeeqat,
Kahaani, kahaani,
BuRhaapa, buRhaapa,
Jawaani, jawaani!!!
(na maloom)

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