آئی ھولی خوشی کا لے کے پیام

[aabarqi]

آئی ھولی خوشی کا لے کے پیام

Aaii Holi khushi ka la ke payaam
Dr.Ahmad Ali Barqi Azmi

Aaii Holi Khushi ka le ke payaam
Aap sab doston ko mera salam

Sab hain sarshar kaif o masti mein
Aaj ki hai bahut haseen yeh shaam

Sab rahein khush yahi dua hai meri
Har koi dosaron kea aye kaam

Bhaaii chare ki ho faza aisi
Badah e ishq ka piyein sab jam

Ho na tafreeq koii mazhab ki
Jashn ki yrh faza ho har soo aam

Amn aur shaanti ka ho mahaul
Jang ka koi bhi na le ab naam

Rang mein ab pare na koi bhang
Sab karein ek doosare ko salaam

Rahein mil jul ke log aapas mein
Mera Ahmad Ali yahi hai payaam

[munir-armaan-nasimi]

My Dear Dr. AAB Azmi Saaheb,

Salaam o Rehmat...!! Holi ke mauqe par aapki yeh nazm bohat achchi hai magar........ dukh ess baat ka hai keh kisi bhi member ne apne tassurat nahin diye...... meri samajh main nahin aa raha hai keh.. Holi samajh main nahin aaya ya phri aapki nazm.......

Main ne bhi ek ghazal kab se post kiya hai magar........ kisi ne to door aapne bhi kuchh comments nahin diye... jab aap doosroN kee takhleequat pe apne tassurat nahin denge to........ aap ki takhleequat pe tassurat bhi kam hote jaayenge........ (shayad yahi wazah mere liye bhi hai magar main to jab se moderator ka job kar raha hoon..... har mumkin koshish karta hoon keh apne tassurat likhoon)

yeh link dekh liziye aur apne suggestions zaroor diziye....

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