Hamari aaNkh jo purnam nahiN hai
woh yeh samjhe hameN ab gham nahiN hai
gham.e janaN, gham.e dauraN ka baNdhan
tou phir kya hai agar saNgam nahiN hai
mira Haal ab woh akSar poochte haiN
“mujhe itna sahara kum nahiN hai”*
Hamara unse rishta bus yeh samjho
taAlluq hai magar paiham nahin haiN
maiN mehv-e yas hooN lekin khushee hai
keh unki bazm meN matam nahiN hai
yeh jada mera jada, toba toba!
yahaN tou naam ko bhi Kham nahiN hai
mahaz.e jung jeeta HausloN se
hamare paas aitom bum nahiN hai
woh ai Jawaid bole sher sun ker
tumhari shairee meN dum nahiN hai
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Mohtaram Jawaid Badauni Saheb
mahaz.e jung jeeta HausloN se
hamare paas aitom bum nahiN hai
Meri daad aur mubarakbaad arz hai.
mahaz.e jung jeeta HausloN se
hamare paas aitom bum nahiN hai
Meri daad aur mubarakbaad arz hai.
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moHtarmee Bashwar SaaHabsbashwar wrote:Mohtaram Jawaid Badauni Saheb
mahaz.e jung jeeta HausloN se
hamare paas aitom bum nahiN hai
Meri daad aur mubarakbaad arz hai.
bahut bahut shukriya....
Nacheez,
Jawaid
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Hamara unse rishta bus yeh samjho
taAlluq hai magar paiham nahin haiN
Waah ji Waah.. kya tarhi ghazal pesh kii aapne. Puri ghazal ka ek ek sher qaabil-e-daad hai magar mandarza bala sher mujhe behad pasand aaya....... pata nahin kyon mujhe es main Meer Taqi Meer Saheb ka rang nazar aaya.
Daad pesh-e-khidmat hai qobool farmaayein.
Munir Armaan
taAlluq hai magar paiham nahin haiN
Waah ji Waah.. kya tarhi ghazal pesh kii aapne. Puri ghazal ka ek ek sher qaabil-e-daad hai magar mandarza bala sher mujhe behad pasand aaya....... pata nahin kyon mujhe es main Meer Taqi Meer Saheb ka rang nazar aaya.
Daad pesh-e-khidmat hai qobool farmaayein.
Munir Armaan
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Munir Arman Naseemi SaHabmunir-armaan-nasimi wrote:Hamara unse rishta bus yeh samjho
taAlluq hai magar paiham nahin haiN
Waah ji Waah.. kya tarhi ghazal pesh kii aapne. Puri ghazal ka ek ek sher qaabil-e-daad hai magar mandarza bala sher mujhe behad pasand aaya....... pata nahin kyon mujhe es main Meer Taqi Meer Saheb ka rang nazar aaya.
Daad pesh-e-khidmat hai qobool farmaayein.
Munir Armaan
Ghazal ki pazeeraayee ke liye beHud mamnoon HooN.
Jawaid