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assalaamoa'laikum !

aik aur Ghazal.numaa ke saath bilaa.tamheed HaaZir-e-khidmat hooN :fcors:-bai.lauc HaZraat se darkhwaast hay keh bilaa.takalluf apnee aaraa kaa iZ'haar karaiN, agar aasaanee se ho sakay to -giraanee ki Soorat maiN voh ma'zoor haiN , door se salaam qubool kar laiN -

"urdubandhan" kaa khuSooSee shukrguzaar hooN keh nasta'laiq ki sahoolat muhayyaa kee -

yasir



غزل نما
! عشق بھی اک عجیب چیز ھے شاہ
! دھوپ چھاؤں سے بےتمیز ھے شاہ

دھوپ اس کی ھے سو ھے خوب ھمیں
! چھاؤں بھی اس لئے عزیز ھے شاہ

! ترک دنیا تو کر براءے خدا
! ! یہ طوائف تری کنیز ھے شاہ
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Ghazal.numaa
i'shq bhee ik a'jeeb cheez hay shaah ! (1)
dhoop ChaaoN se bai.tameez hay shaah !

dhoop us ki hay so hay khoob hamaiN
ChaaoN bhee is liye azeez hay shaah !

tark-e-dunyaa to kar baraa.ay khudaa ! (2)
yeh t'avaaif tiree kaneez hay shaah ! (3),(4)

(1)i'shq =muraad ma'loom hi hay magar phir bhee itmaam-e-Hujjat ke liye a'rZ kar dooN keh

apnee manzil judaa chaahtaa hay
i'shq to bas khudaa chaahtaa hay


(2)duniyaa=u'lamaa ke nazdeek dunyaa voh hay jo Allaah se Ghaafil kar day so mairee bhee muraad hay


(3)t'avaaif=go yeh lafz' buraa hay magar buzurgoN ke nazdeek dunyaa ke liye bat'aur-e-micaal musta'mil hay

(4)shaah= mairay naam maiN juRaa hay aur is kaa lafz'ee isti'maal kartaa hooN,,yeh jo yahaaN ma'navee isti'maal hay to bataa dooN keh idhar muraad "shaah-e-faqr" yaa "faqeeroN kaa shaah" hay(faqr bhee a'rabee nah ke urdoo 'aam baul chaal vaalaa) -sawaal paidaa hotaa hay Phir faqeer ki kaneezaiN kahaaN hotee haiN to jawaab yeh hay keh kaneez kaa isti'maal "shaah" ki ri'aayat se hay nah ke "faqr" ki ya'nee muraad "khaadimah" hay -
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Shah Saheb... Masha'Allah aapki Ghazal.Nume ka to Jawaab hi nahin. Teeno ashaar behad pyaare hain magar mujhe yeh sher behad pasand hai...

tark-e-dunyaa to kar baraa.ay khudaa ! (2)
yeh t'avaaif tiree kaneez hay shaah ! (3),(4)

Ek baat batayein yeh (2), (3),(4) ka nishaan aapne kyon lagaya hai. Meri samajh main nahin aaya.

Khair-talab,

Munir Armaan
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munir-armaan-nasimi wrote:Shah Saheb... Masha'Allah aapki Ghazal.Nume ka to Jawaab hi nahin. Teeno ashaar behad pyaare hain magar mujhe yeh sher behad pasand hai...

tark-e-dunyaa to kar baraa.ay khudaa ! (2)
yeh t'avaaif tiree kaneez hay shaah ! (3),(4)

Ek baat batayein yeh (2), (3),(4) ka nishaan aapne kyon lagaya hai. Meri samajh main nahin aaya.

Khair-talab,

Munir Armaan
assalaamoa'alaikum!
bhaai Muneer! :-)


aap ki bailauc HauSilahafzaae kaa dil se mamnoon hooN - aur khuSooSan mazkoorah she'r ko pasand karnay kaa shukriyah ,,yeh mujhay bhee pasand hay jooN "t'awaaif" kisee ki naheeN duniyaa bhee kisee ki naheeN -


aur SaaHib yeh 2,3,4,neechay HaaShiyoN ki t'araf "mushaarun ilaihi" haiN- :-) samjhay keh naheeN ?

jazaaKAllaah

yasir
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