Tanwir Phool Saheb ki Nazm ka Charba

[raushanjahan]

Tanwir Phool Saheb ki yeh Nazm mahnama "Ghuncha" Karachi , February 1964
ke page No.17 par chhapi thi.Us ke baad yeh Nazm mukhtalif resalon aor akhbar
ke bachchon ke edition main chhapti rahi.Yeh Nazm kulliyat "Khushbu Bhini Bhini"
main bhi shamil hai jo July,2009 main chhapi aor jis main April.2009 tak ka kafi
matbua kalam shamil hai. Is Nazm ka charba Rafi Yusufi Mahram ke naam se
6 March,2013 ke roznama "Jang" ke children edition main chhapa jis main
original Nazm ka koi hawala naheen hai.Attachments mulahza keejiey.
Mukhlis : Raushan Jahan

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[sarwar]

Waah , aap ne to kamal kar diya !
Khaksar : Sarwar

[Tanwir Phool]

Shukriyaa Raushan Jahan Sahiba
aur Sarwar Sb. Du'aaoN maiN yaad rakhi'ey

[Muzaffar Ahmad Muzaffar]

MoHtarmah Raoshan JahaN SaHibah tasleemaat!

janaab Tanweer Sb kee nazm ko itnee bebaakee se chura kar apne naam se pesh karne par be Had dukh huwa aesi Harakat yaqeena" nihayat sharmnaak amr hai, kamyaab Book wale chaheeN to roznamah Jand ko agah kar ke muqadmah bhee chala sakte haiN chunkeh jumlah Huqooq to baharHaal un ke paas meHfooz haiN.

wese aap apne taor par jang ko is Harakat se yeh muwaad arsaal kar keh agah kar deN ta keh is mutshaai'r kee nishaandahee ho sake.

khaer andesh
Muzaffar.