aankheN

Post by **tahira Masood** » Mon Apr 11, 2005 7:31 pm

sabki Khdmat meN salaam

aik adna si kaavish Haazir hai. apni aara se nawaiy gaa.
wassalam

Post by **Mahtab Qadr** » Mon Apr 11, 2005 8:26 pm

tahira Masood wrote:sabki Khdmat meN salaam

aik adna si kaavish Haazir hai. apni aara se nawaiy gaa.
wassalam

wah waah bahut khoob achi aNkheiN haiN aapki :) waise sher no. 2 mai agar yoN karleiN to ziada munasib hoga

raah dikhlaa ke loot leti haiN
kisqadar beamaan aNkheiN haiN

kioN ke eimaan ka qafia yahaN wazan ke aitebaar bazaher suit nahi karta agar koi gunjaishe asatiza nikal laiN to dosri baat hai. baharhal ye aik raye hai .
shukria

Post by **waqar_masood** » Mon Apr 11, 2005 8:31 pm

raah dikhlaa ke loot leti haiN
kisqadar beamaan aNkheiN haiN

wahh.....wah waah ja pori ghazl ki jaan meray khayal mein yeh sheer hay ..buhut acchay , mujh haqeer say maddah ki janib say daad wusool kejay ..

waqar masood

Post by **tahira Masood** » Tue Apr 12, 2005 12:46 pm

Mahtab Qadr wrote:
tahira Masood wrote:sabki Khdmat meN salaam

aik adna si kaavish Haazir hai. apni aara se nawaiy gaa.
wassalam

wah waah bahut khoob achi aNkheiN haiN aapki :) waise sher no. 2 mai agar yoN karleiN to ziada munasib hoga

raah dikhlaa ke loot leti haiN
kisqadar beamaan aNkheiN haiN

kioN ke eimaan ka qafia yahaN wazan ke aitebaar bazaher suit nahi karta agar koi gunjaishe asatiza nikal laiN to dosri baat hai. baharhal ye aik raye hai .
shukria

Mahtab Bhaii

salaam

shukeriyah aap kaa.

aur aap ki tajveez ach lagee.
Jazakomullah.

Khush rehiaye.

wassalam

Post by **tahira Masood** » Tue Apr 12, 2005 12:50 pm

waqar_masood wrote:raah dikhlaa ke loot leti haiN
kisqadar beamaan aNkheiN haiN

wahh.....wah waah ja pori ghazl ki jaan meray khayal mein yeh sheer hay ..buhut acchay , mujh haqeer say maddah ki janib say daad wusool kejay ..

waqar masood

Slaam Waqar bhaii

Waqar mere bete kaa naam bhi hai. Uskaa pooraa naam bhi Waqar Masood hai.
aji aap bohat mo'at bar heN aur aap ki raaey bhi. aap ko ghzal kaa yeh sh'er pasand aaya. khushi huee.

khush rehiay.

wassalam

Post by **najma** » Tue Apr 12, 2005 2:02 pm

tahira sahiba
apki ye kaawish bhi achi hay, zara alfaaz kaheeN kaheeN bab rahay haiN.asaatizah kiraam apki rah-numaaee farmaeingay.maiN to sirf waah waah hi kar saktii hooN.

daad qubool kijiye

Post by **tahira Masood** » Mon Jun 06, 2005 3:11 am

najma wrote:tahira sahiba
apki ye kaawish bhi achi hay, zara alfaaz kaheeN kaheeN bab rahay haiN.asaatizah kiraam apki rah-numaaee farmaeingay.maiN to sirf waah waah hi kar saktii hooN.
daad qubool kijiye

shukeriya Najmah ji

aap ki mamnoon hoN

khsuh rehiye

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