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tahira Masood
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tahira ji adab

apnay mauzoo kay atbar say too aap ki ya nazm geet hi hay taham apni hayat (form) kay lihaz say isay ziada say ziada nazm a muarra kaha ja sakta hay kun ka is main radeef aur qafiay ki khas tarteeb nahi hay. agar aap is koo ghazal ki form main likhain tab bhi theek hay aur agar aap band bana kar likhain tab bhi theek hay lakin radeef qafiay ka iltizam har sher ya band main hoona chahy

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Post by najma »

waah tahira sahiba
bohat khoob khayalaat hain
d.rizwan sahib ki raey se muttafiq hooN
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