is HAFTE kaa lafz hai ... "RAAT yaa SHAB" par ash'

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is HAFTE kaa lafz hai ... "RAAT yaa SHAB" par ash'

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salaam dosto,

maiN ne moHtaram janaab-e-Syed Bilal "Armaan" saaHib kaa kaafii der intezaar kiyaa...lagtaa hai mausoof kahiiN amshGhool haiN aur idhar ka chakkar nahiN laga sake.

is liye, majbooran maiN ne is hafte ke liye lafz chunaa hai...RAAT yaa SHAB.

to please aap log ash'aar raqam kijiiye...shukria.


kaamraan yuuN thaa meraa baKht-e-javaaN kal raat ko
jhuk rahaa thaa mere dar pe aasmaaN kal raat ko


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raat bhar sooraj kisi ke sir pe manDlaata raha
din me tare toRne ki rasm dohraaee gaee
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Husn jab thaa 'ishq ke ghar mahmaaN kal raat ko
uTh chukaa thaa har Hijaab-e-darmiyaaN kal raat ko


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raat kaaNToN pe basar ho to Ghazal hoti hay
shab-e-hijraaN ki sahar ho to Ghazal hotii hay
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raat aankhaoN se mirii neend churaate kiyooN hou

aur tanhaa mujhe phir chouR ke jaate kiyuN hou.



Nazir.

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kaash ban jaatii Hayaat-e-jaavidaaN kal raat ko
kis_qadar maHbuub thii 'umr-e-ravaaN kal raat ko


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assalam walekum.
hashmi sahab! app ka shukriya ke app ne is martaba ka unwan diya. tabiyaat ke na saaz hone ki wajhe se main kai dinoun se nahi a paya maffi chahounga.

raat ayi tou chand sa chahera
le ke aya sharab ankhoun main
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raat sone lagii, subHa hone lagii
shamm'a bujhne lagii, dil machalne lage
waqt kii raushnii meN nahaaii huii
zindagii pe 'ajab saa nikhaar aa gayaa


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pareshaaN raat taari hay, sitaro tum to so jao
sukoot-e-marg tarii hay, sitaro tum to so jao
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shab tum jo bazm-e-Ghair meN aaNkheN churaa gaye
khoye gaye ham aise k aGhyaar paa gaye


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donoN jahaan terii mohabbat meiN haar ke
lo jaarahaa hay koee shab-e-Gham guzaar ke
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dil agar tanhaa meraa tiir-o-kamaaN kii zad pe thaa
dil kii zad par bhii rahe tiir-o-kamaaN kal raat ko


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shaam dehleez pe aaeygii lye shab ka khiraaj
zar-fishaaN sub,h ki jab pehlii kiran hay itnii
khawar qureshi
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ik wo, keh shab ko soorat-e-rang-e-sahar kareN
ik ham, keh jinko raat pe, din ka qayaas hay
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tum raushni meiN raat ke asbaab ki tarah
ham teeragii meiN kirmak-e-shab-taab ki tarah
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