Sher ke doosre misre ke pehle/aakhri alfaaz se sher kahiye!

Post by **Hashmat Usmani** » Wed May 18, 2005 4:55 am

raah aasaan ho gaii hogii
jaan pahchaan ho gaii hogii

Saifuddin Saif
JAAN / HOGI

Abdullah Nazir · Post by **Abdullah Nazir** » Wed May 18, 2005 4:55 am

reh gaii baat adhuri miri waqt-e-rukhsat

tum se kehdoongaa wo dobaarah mulaaqaat ke bad.

tum /bad

Nazir.

Post by **Hashmat Usmani** » Wed May 18, 2005 5:06 am

tum aa.Nkho.n se duur ho hu_ii niind aa.Nkho.n se duur
mere saathii Gam kii choT se huaa dil kaa shiishaa chuur

Azeez Kashmiri
MERE / CHUUR

Post by **najma** » Wed May 18, 2005 12:36 pm

mire dil ki dhaRkanoN se tira Gham hay aashkaara
keh yehii Gham-e-muqaddas, mire dil ka hay sahaara
najma

keh/ sahaara

Post by **Hashmat Usmani** » Fri May 20, 2005 1:28 am

salaam Hamsheerah saaHiba,

kaii dinoN se lafz-e-"sahaara" par she'r na mila so Had darja majboori fil_badeeh yeh she'r kahnaa paRaa lol

sahaaraa mil gayaa hotaa, agar terii moHabbat mil gaii hotii
kinaara mil gayaa hotaa, agar terii 'inaayat mil gaii hotii

Hashmat usmani
KINARA / HOTI

Post by **najma** » Fri May 20, 2005 2:03 am

baat niklii, to baat chal niklii
baRh gaee baat, baatoN baatoN meiN
najma

Post by **najma** » Fri May 20, 2005 2:10 am

kar gaee kaam pehlii fursat meiN
haey wo ik nazar, mohabbat-paash

najma

haey/mohabbat-paash

Abdullah Nazir · Post by **Abdullah Nazir** » Fri May 20, 2005 2:12 am

baRhgaiee Hasrat-e-deedar tiri furqat meiN

Aur tuu hei kei ke miri dil-shani per qaayim.

Nazir.

Post by **najma** » Fri May 20, 2005 2:14 am

WEBMASTER wrote:

baRhgaiee Hasrat-e-deedar tiri furqat meiN

Aur tuu hei kei ke miri dil-shani per qaayim.

Nazir.

she,r to haey/mohabbat-paash se shuru hona chahiye tha

:P

Post by **najma** » Fri May 20, 2005 2:25 am

subh hoti hay shaam hoti hay
umr yuunhii tamaam hotii hay

umr/ hay

Post by **Hashmat Usmani** » Fri May 20, 2005 4:26 am

'umr jalvoN meN basar ho, ye zaruurii to nahiiN
har shab-e-Gham kii saHar ho, ye zaruurii to nahiiN

Khaamosh Dehlavii

Post by **najma** » Fri May 20, 2005 12:49 pm

sara_j wrote:har shaakh-e-gul ko dhoonda, dekhi kali kali mein

lekin teri adayein paayi nahi kisi mein

lekin / mein

kahaaN laa ke mara hay aap ne bhi sara j sahibaaaaaaaaaaaaa!!!!!!!!!!!!

ab aap hi is pe dijiye
koee she,r
mujhe to koee esa yaad naheeN jo
''lekin'' ya '' meiN'' se shuruu, hota ho

:P

Post by **Hashmat Usmani** » Sat May 21, 2005 1:21 am

najma wrote:
sara_j wrote:har shaakh-e-gul ko dhoonda, dekhi kali kali mein
lekin teri adayein paayi nahi kisi mein

lekin / mein
mujhe to koee esa yaad naheeN jo ''lekin'' ya '' meiN'' se shuruu, hota ho :P

maiN ne bhii pichhli baat bahot jhak maarii thii...bil_aaKhior mujhe fil_badeeh she'r kah kar peechhaa chhuRaanaa paRaa thaa

ab AAPKI BAARI hai, ham dil thaam ke baiThte haiN

Post by **najma** » Sat May 21, 2005 1:29 am

sara jeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

ab fil-badee, jo keh sakii keh diya
aur aap par bohat gussa bhi aarahaa hay==========

tamaatar :P
lekin tumhii batao k lik.kheN to kya likheN
tum ne to aazmaane ka Thekaaa hi le liya
najma

Post by **Hashmat Usmani** » Sat May 21, 2005 1:31 am

najma wrote:sara jeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
ab fil-badee, jo keh sakii keh diya
aur aap par bohat gussa bhi aarahaa hay========== tamaatar :P
lekin tumhii batao k lik.kheN to kya likheN
tum ne to aazmaane ka Thekaaa hi le liya
najma

Sher ke doosre misre ke pehle/aakhri alfaaz se sher kahiye!

reh

baRh

Re: baRh