Sher ke doosre misre ke pehle/aakhri alfaaz se sher kahiye!

Abdullah Nazir · Post by **Abdullah Nazir** » Sun Apr 03, 2005 5:31 pm

Woh kyaa suneNge kisi benawaa ke ranj o alam

fughaaN hei jin ke liye naghmah o Tarab kii TaraH

(fughaaN / Tarah)

Nazir.

Post by **Hashmat Usmani** » Mon Apr 04, 2005 4:05 am

fuGhaan-e-be_sharar seene meN baaqii rah gaii
hosh bhii ruKhsat huaa, jaatii rahii taasiir bhii

'allaamah Iqbal

hosh/gaii

Abdullah Nazir · Post by **Abdullah Nazir** » Tue Apr 05, 2005 1:32 am

Housh se kyaa kaam hei raah-e-muHabbat meiN mujhe

her qadam per yeh gumaaN houtaa hei minzil aagaiee.

(her / aagaiee)

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Nazir.

Abdullah Nazir · Post by **Abdullah Nazir** » Tue Apr 05, 2005 7:25 am

hansti rahii wo meri tamannaye-e-shuq per

izhaar-e-Haal-e-dil kii nah jur'at houii mujhe.

(izhaar / mujhe)

Nazir.

Abdullah Nazir · Post by **Abdullah Nazir** » Tue Apr 05, 2005 2:22 pm

kabhii manzil kii tamanna meiN qadam baRhte heiN

Rouk dete heiN kabhi paaouN ke chaale mujhko.

(rouk / mujhko)

Nazir.
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Abdullah Nazir · Post by **Abdullah Nazir** » Wed Apr 06, 2005 12:08 pm

mere meHboob ne dii quvvat-e-izhaar mujhe

warnah dunyaa se bhalaa kyaa hei saroukaar mujhe.

(warnah / mujhe)

Nazir.

Post by **Hashmat Usmani** » Thu Apr 07, 2005 2:57 am

tu is taraH se merii zindagii meN shaamil hai
kahiiN bhii jaauuN, yeh lagtaa hai terii meHfil hai

kahiiN/hai

Abdullah Nazir · Post by **Abdullah Nazir** » Thu Apr 07, 2005 5:37 pm

karte rahe paiham usi zaalim se muHabbat

jisko nah khabar housaki shoreedah saraoN kii.

{jisko / kii)

Nazir.

Post by **Hashmat Usmani** » Fri Apr 08, 2005 1:19 am

kii mire qatl ke ba'd, us ne jafaa se tauba
haaye! us zood_pashimaaN kaa pashimaaN honaa

haaye/honaa

Post by **Hashmat Usmani** » Sat Apr 09, 2005 3:04 am

phool kii patti se kaT saktaa hai heere kaa jigar
mard-e-naadaaN pe suKhan-e-narm_o_naazuk be_asar

(doosra misraA yooN hounaa chaahiye):

mard-e-naadaaN per kalaam-e-narm o naazuk be acar.

mard/asar

Post by **Hashmat Usmani** » Sun Apr 10, 2005 4:41 am

deleted by me...irrelevent she'r...sorry!

Post by **Hashmat Usmani** » Mon Apr 11, 2005 1:54 am

hotaa aayaa hai ki achchhoN ko buraa kahte haiN
phir mujhi ko hii to kiuN log buraa kahte haiN?!

Hashmat Usmani

phir / haiN

Post by **Hashmat Usmani** » Mon Apr 11, 2005 3:20 am

hai Khayaal-e-Husn meN, Husn-e-'amal kaa saa Khayaal
Khuld kaa ik dar hai merii gor ke andar Khulaa

Khuld / khulaa

Post by **Hashmat Usmani** » Tue Apr 12, 2005 4:16 am

tu jahaN jahaN chalegaa, miraa saayaa saath hogaa
tu jahaaN jahaaN rukegaa, meraa saayaa saath hogaa

tu/hogaa

Post by **najma** » Tue Apr 12, 2005 10:10 pm

''tuu''

tuu ne nazar bacha k bhi dekha naheeN mujhe
meri nigaah-e-shauq to tujh par lagii rahii
najma

meri/rahii

Sher ke doosre misre ke pehle/aakhri alfaaz se sher kahiye!

woh

"housh"

hansti

"kabhi"

"mere"

"karte"