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sara_j wrote:har shaakh-e-gul ko dhoonda, dekhi kali kali mein

lekin teri adayein paayi nahi kisi mein


lekin / mein


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kahaaN laa ke mara hay aap ne bhi sara j sahibaaaaaaaaaaaaa!!!!!!!!!!!! :o
ab aap hi is pe dijiye
koee she,r
mujhe to koee esa yaad naheeN jo
''lekin'' ya '' meiN'' se shuruu, hota ho :oops:
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najma wrote:
sara_j wrote:har shaakh-e-gul ko dhoonda, dekhi kali kali mein
lekin teri adayein paayi nahi kisi mein


lekin / mein
mujhe to koee esa yaad naheeN jo ''lekin'' ya '' meiN'' se shuruu, hota ho :oops: :P
maiN ne bhii pichhli baat bahot jhak maarii thii...bil_aaKhior mujhe fil_badeeh she'r kah kar peechhaa chhuRaanaa paRaa thaa ](*,)

ab AAPKI BAARI hai, ham dil thaam ke baiThte haiN
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sara jeeeeeeeeeeeeeee :evil:
ab fil-badee, jo keh sakii keh diya
aur aap par bohat gussa bhi aarahaa hay========== :evil: tamaatar :P
lekin tumhii batao k lik.kheN to kya likheN
tum ne to aazmaane ka Thekaaa hi le liya
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najma wrote:sara jeeeeeeeeeeeeeee :evil:
ab fil-badee, jo keh sakii keh diya
aur aap par bohat gussa bhi aarahaa hay========== :evil: tamaatar :P
lekin tumhii batao k lik.kheN to kya likheN
tum ne to aazmaane ka Thekaaa hi le liya
najma
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Hashmat Usmani wrote:
najma wrote:sara jeeeeeeeeeeeeeee :evil:
ab fil-badee, jo keh sakii keh diya
aur aap par bohat gussa bhi aarahaa hay========== :evil: tamaatar :P
lekin tumhii batao k lik.kheN to kya likheN
tum ne to aazmaane ka Thekaaa hi le liya
najma
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aur kya======
sara ki bach,chii daal daal kach,chii
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hamaari dousti ne kitne rangeeN gul khilaaye heiN

Miri deewanagi per bhii wo akcar muskuraaye heiN.


iiri/heiN

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yaqeeN mohkam, amal paiham, mohabbata faatah-e-aalam
jihad-e-zindagaanii meiN ye haiN mardoN ki shamsheereN

jihaad/shamsheer
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sara_j wrote:
najma wrote:yaqeeN mohkam, amal paiham, mohabbata faatah-e-aalam
jihad-e-zindagaanii meiN ye haiN mardoN ki shamsheereN

jihaad/shamsheer
:shock: mujhe tou nahi milraha koi shair aur filbadeh bhi nahi samjh aa raha so filwaqt to yehi pesh hai:

jazba-e-be_iKHtiyaar-e-shauq dekha chaahiye
seena-e-shamsheer se baahar hai dam shamsheer ka


lekin Ustad ji ka intezar hai voh zaroor kuch likhdenge :P

to phir aap ne haar maan lii naaaaaaaaa :P
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seena-e-sad-chaak kya hoga rafuu
kis tarah unko maiN chara-gar kahooN
bafis ahmad siddiqui

kis/kahooN
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mehfil meiN un kii aaj bhi ham ajnabii se thay
ab aabroo-e-ishq, yahaaN tak chalii gaee

nafis ahmad siddiqui
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mujhe aarzoo thi siki, wo muqaam aagayaa hay

mire dil kidhakanoN meiN tira naam aagayaa hay


mire/hay
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khaaN ye martabah mera, ke takleef-e-sharakat dooN
magar mehmaaN hueyhaiN baadshah,akcar faqeeroN ke

magar/ ke/faqeeroN
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chale to kat hi jaeyga safar aahita aahita
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''aahistah''
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najma wrote:chale to kat hi jaeyga safar aahita aahita
-------------------------? :grin:

''aahistah''
aapkaa she'r na mukammil hai. aur aaKhiri lafz to "aahista" hai magar dusre misr'e kaa pahlaa lafz kia hai?

please aap ise delete kar ke koii nayaa she'r dijiiye. shukria
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Aahistah chalte chalte vahaaN aagaye heiN ham

koii bahaanah sunne kii Aadat nahiN rahi.


(koii/rehi)

Nasir.

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koee ummed bar naheeN aatii, koee soorat nazar naheeN aatii
maut ka ik din mu,ayyan hay, neen kyuuN raat bhar naheeN aatii

maut/aatii
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