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tum hi batlaayo ki ab ham kyaa karein;guz #5
Posted: Sun May 15, 2005 4:51 pm
by zaamin
kyaa alam dil ko jo jii ayaa karein
tera apna jab kabhii ayaa karein
terii hastii ke nishaan hain ja bajaa
bhoolne kyonkar tujhe da'awah karein
tu hi har ja aastaaN dair-o-haram
kis ko chhoRein aur kise puujaa karein
bhuulane kehte ho aur marna mana'a
tum hi batlaayo ki ab ham kyaa karein
yoon bhii ho fursat mayassar tu bhii aur
saamne biThlaa tujhe dekha karein
rang-saarii-ye-chaman tujh se 'ayaaN
phool baaGhon mein tiraa charchaa karein
tum se raghwat aur lagaawat ke 'ewaz
ham bhii itraate phirein mehka karein
jaagate hon to tassawar jaaN liye
khwaab bhar aankhon usay soyaa karein
mar bhii jaayein tujh pe hi marne to hain
jeenaa hai tere liye jiiyaa karein
zakhm lein terii nazar ka baar ho
yaad ke dhaage ko le siiyaa karein
terii mahtaabii pe hi hoga zarar
chaaNdanii raatein aur ham royaa karein
zaamin[/b]
Re: tum hi batlaayo ki ab ham kyaa karein;guz #5
Posted: Tue May 17, 2005 6:07 pm
by crcd
zaamin wrote:kyaa azar dil ko jo jii ayaa karein
tera apna jab kabhii ayaa karein
terii hastii ke nishaan hain ja bajaa
bhoolne kyonkar tujhe da'awah karein
tu hi har ja aastaaN dair-o-haram
kis ko chhoRein aur kise puujaa karein
bhuulane kehte ho aur marna mana'a
tum hi batlaayo ki ab ham kyaa karein
yoon bhii ho fursat mayassar tu bhii aur
saamne biThlaa tujhe dekha karein
rang-saarii-ye-chaman tujh se 'ayaaN
phool baaGhon mein tiraa charchaa karein
tum se raghwat aur lagaawat ke 'ewaz
ham bhii itraate phirein mehka karein
jaagate hon to tassawar jaaN liye
khwaab bhar aankhon usay soyaa karein
mar bhii jaayein tujh pe hi marne to hain
jeenaa hai tere liye jiiyaa karein
zakhm lein terii nazar ka baar ho
yaad ke dhaage ko le siiyaa karein
terii mahtaabii pe hi hoga zarar
chaaNdanii raatein aur ham royaa karein
zaamin[/b]
aadaab,
ghazal mujhe achi baqi, par pehla shair kuch waa'zay keejeeye plz....
khair andesh,
crcd
kyaa azar dil ko jo jii ayaa karein
tera apna jab kabhii ayaa karein
kya?[ kiya?] azaar [takleef?]
tera apna jab kabhi ayaa karey? karein?
Re: tum hi batlaayo ki ab ham kyaa karein;guz #5
Posted: Tue May 17, 2005 10:14 pm
by zaamin
crcd wrote:zaamin wrote:kyaa azar dil ko jo jii ayaa karein
tera apna jab kabhii ayaa karein
terii hastii ke nishaan hain ja bajaa
bhoolne kyonkar tujhe da'awah karein
tu hi har ja aastaaN dair-o-haram
kis ko chhoRein aur kise puujaa karein
bhuulane kehte ho aur marna mana'a
tum hi batlaayo ki ab ham kyaa karein
yoon bhii ho fursat mayassar tu bhii aur
saamne biThlaa tujhe dekha karein
rang-saarii-ye-chaman tujh se 'ayaaN
phool baaGhon mein tiraa charchaa karein
tum se raghwat aur lagaawat ke 'ewaz
ham bhii itraate phirein mehka karein
jaagate hon to tassawar jaaN liye
khwaab bhar aankhon usay soyaa karein
mar bhii jaayein tujh pe hi marne to hain
jeenaa hai tere liye jiiyaa karein
zakhm lein terii nazar ka baar ho
yaad ke dhaage ko le siiyaa karein
terii mahtaabii pe hi hoga zarar
chaaNdanii raatein aur ham royaa karein
zaamin[/b]
aadaab,
ghazal mujhe achi baqi, par pehla shair kuch waa'zay keejeeye plz....
khair andesh,
crcd
kyaa azar dil ko jo jii ayaa karein
tera apna jab kabhii ayaa karein
kya?[ kiya?] azaar [takleef?]
tera apna jab kabhi ayaa karey? karein?
ji crcd ji
azar ko aap kih rai mutabiq theekkar diyaa hai;azaar behr ke mutabiq na chalega;
kyaa ke k per harkat nahin aa saktii ;k is lafz main saakin hai;aur karein ka matlab jahaan yeh hai kih yeh jo mera dil hai,tera apna hai,jab chaho chale aayo;aur tarahi misra bhii yahii demand karta hai
aap ki paziraaii ke liye mamnoon hoon
zaamin
Re: tum hi batlaayo ki ab ham kyaa karein;guz #5
Posted: Thu May 19, 2005 5:01 pm
by najma
zaamin wrote:kyaa alam dil ko jo jii ayaa karein
tera apna jab kabhii ayaa karein
terii hastii ke nishaan hain ja bajaa
bhoolne kyonkar tujhe da'awah karein
tu hi har ja aastaaN dair-o-haram
kis ko chhoRein aur kise puujaa karein
bhuulane kehte ho aur marna mana'a
tum hi batlaayo ki ab ham kyaa karein
yoon bhii ho fursat mayassar tu bhii aur
saamne biThlaa tujhe dekha karein
rang-saarii-ye-chaman tujh se 'ayaaN
phool baaGhon mein tiraa charchaa karein
tum se raghwat aur lagaawat ke 'ewaz
ham bhii itraate phirein mehka karein
jaagate hon to tassawar jaaN liye
khwaab bhar aankhon usay soyaa karein
mar bhii jaayein tujh pe hi marne to hain
jeenaa hai tere liye jiiyaa karein
zakhm lein terii nazar ka baar ho
yaad ke dhaage ko le siiyaa karein
terii mahtaabii pe hi hoga zarar
chaaNdanii raatein aur ham royaa karein
zaamin[/b]
achi koshish hay, zaminsahib!
allaah kare zor-e-qalam aur ziyada
khush rahiye
Re: tum hi batlaayo ki ab ham kyaa karein;guz #5
Posted: Thu May 19, 2005 7:11 pm
by zaamin
najma wrote:zaamin wrote:kyaa alam dil ko jo jii ayaa karein
tera apna jab kabhii ayaa karein
terii hastii ke nishaan hain ja bajaa
bhoolne kyonkar tujhe da'awah karein
tu hi har ja aastaaN dair-o-haram
kis ko chhoRein aur kise puujaa karein
bhuulane kehte ho aur marna mana'a
tum hi batlaayo ki ab ham kyaa karein
yoon bhii ho fursat mayassar tu bhii aur
saamne biThlaa tujhe dekha karein
rang-saarii-ye-chaman tujh se 'ayaaN
phool baaGhon mein tiraa charchaa karein
tum se raghwat aur lagaawat ke 'ewaz
ham bhii itraate phirein mehka karein
jaagate hon to tassawar jaaN liye
khwaab bhar aankhon usay soyaa karein
mar bhii jaayein tujh pe hi marne to hain
jeenaa hai tere liye jiiyaa karein
zakhm lein terii nazar ka baar ho
yaad ke dhaage ko le siiyaa karein
terii mahtaabii pe hi hoga zarar
chaaNdanii raatein aur ham royaa karein
zaamin[/b]
achi koshish hay, zaminsahib!
allaah kare zor-e-qalam aur ziyada
khush rahiye
mohtaram najma sahiba:
aap ne waqt nikala aur merii is koshish ko parhaa aur apni rae dii,mamnoon hoon;aainda bhiaa rahnumaaii ata farmaate rahein
zaamin
Re: tum hi batlaayo ki ab ham kyaa karein;guz #5
Posted: Thu May 19, 2005 10:03 pm
by najma
zaamin wrote:najma wrote:zaamin wrote:kyaa alam dil ko jo jii ayaa karein
tera apna jab kabhii ayaa karein
terii hastii ke nishaan hain ja bajaa
bhoolne kyonkar tujhe da'awah karein
tu hi har ja aastaaN dair-o-haram
kis ko chhoRein aur kise puujaa karein
bhuulane kehte ho aur marna mana'a
tum hi batlaayo ki ab ham kyaa karein
yoon bhii ho fursat mayassar tu bhii aur
saamne biThlaa tujhe dekha karein
rang-saarii-ye-chaman tujh se 'ayaaN
phool baaGhon mein tiraa charchaa karein
tum se raghwat aur lagaawat ke 'ewaz
ham bhii itraate phirein mehka karein
jaagate hon to tassawar jaaN liye
khwaab bhar aankhon usay soyaa karein
mar bhii jaayein tujh pe hi marne to hain
jeenaa hai tere liye jiiyaa karein
zakhm lein terii nazar ka baar ho
yaad ke dhaage ko le siiyaa karein
terii mahtaabii pe hi hoga zarar
chaaNdanii raatein aur ham royaa karein
zaamin[/b]
achi koshish hay, zaminsahib!
allaah kare zor-e-qalam aur ziyada
khush rahiye
mohtaram najma sahiba:
aap ne waqt nikala aur merii is koshish ko parhaa aur apni rae dii,mamnoon hoon;aainda bhiaa rahnumaaii ata farmaate rahein
zaamin
jii zaroor insha allaah
aap bhi zaroor apni nigarishaat se nawazte rahiye
khush rahiye