tahira Masood wrote:Sabki Khidmatt meN salaam-e-khloos

moHtermah Sara ji ki irshaad per Haaizir hoN

Mashallah moHteram Abdullah Nazir Saheb ne bohat hi khoobsurat " misra-e-terHah diay hai. bohat dilnasheeN hai.

aik naacheez si adna koshish Haazir hai, gar qabul aftadd...

waqt Haa'il hai dermiyaaN yaaro!
"tum kehaN aur meN kehaaN yaaro!"

dil kee Haalat bayaan kerne ko
saath deti nahiN azbaaN yaaro

mauj mastee k din ga'e ab tau
dil meN reht'e heN gham nehaaN yaaro

aisee be-gaanagee ki surat hai
khud kaa miltaa nahiN nishaaN yaaro

weHshat-e-dil thakan musaafat ki
mere lehje se hai AyaaN yaaro

kuch kahe koee de mujhe aawaaz
yuN nah lo aur imteHaaN yaaro

le ga'ee umr saare suud meray
haath meN reh ga'e ziyaaN yaaro

aa k peeri meN yeh huaa idraak
ikk khudaa ki hai bas amaaN yaaro


aapni raaey se zaroor mutle fermaaiaye gaa

intezaar rahe gaa

wassalam

Mahtab Qadr wrote:Tahira bahen aapki ghazal bahut achi lagi , mashallah Allah kare zoore bayaN aur ziadaa :)

sara_j wrote:tahira ji,

salaam.

bohat din baad apki tehreer dekh ker dil khush hua.

aapki ghazal bohat pasand aayi, sabhi ashaar bohat ache hain

daad aur mubarakbaad qubool keejiye.

sara

Salaam

saara ji

bohat bohat aur bohat shukeriyah :rose
maiN mamnoon hoN aap ki

wassalam

Ibn-e-siddique wrote:tahira aapa

salaam arz hai

aap ki ye kaawish bahot pasand aayee, maashallah bahot ache mazaameen nikaale haiN aap ne

meri jaanib se daad qubool kijiye,

amjad