Gar ye sanjog hamara hota___ghazal

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Gar ye sanjog hamara hota___ghazal

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Adaab!

Aik naya kalaam le kar hazir hui huN. Ye ghazal do teen maah se likhi hui thi, socha aaj post kar hi dooN. Umeed hay aap sab ko pasand aayegi.

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1. Gar ye sanjog hamara hota
Kya zamane ko gawara hota

2. Chaandni raat me hum tum hote
Aur samandar ka kinara hota

3. YaaN maiN jaane ka irada karti
WaaN woh rukne ka ishaara hota

4. Sari dunya ko bhula dete hum
Bus woh ik shaks hamara hota

5. Zindagi bhar woh taRapta rehta
Jo tirey hijr ka maara hota

7. Kash tum dair na karte itni
Hum ne jeevan bhi na haara hota

8. hum k dunya me to barbaad hue
Akhirat ko hi sanwara hota

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anmol jee
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very nice
thanks for sharing
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saari dunya ko bhuladete hum
bus wo aik shakhs hamara hota
bahut khubsurat ghazal ka bahut khubsurat share.... or tumharee ghazal tu kya hee ghazal hai

tumhare share k jawab main aik share hazir hai.


saari dunya ko bhula beThe tum
warna har shakhs tumhara hota
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Anmol sahiba bahut khoobsurat ghazal pesh ki aane , Mubarakbaad :)
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Handsome wrote:WOW zaberdast
Wow thanks. :grin: Aap ki besaakhta daad bohot pasand aayi. Actually i should say, baRi handsome daad thi. :wink:
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zmufti wrote:anmol jee
aadaab
very nice
thanks for sharing
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Adaab Zarqa ji,

Bophot shukria pazeerayi ka. :grin:
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Tiger wrote:
saari dunya ko bhuladete hum
bus wo aik shakhs hamara hota
bahut khubsurat ghazal ka bahut khubsurat share.... or tumharee ghazal tu kya hee ghazal hai

tumhare share k jawab main aik share hazir hai.


saari dunya ko bhula beThe tum
warna har shakhs tumhara hota
:-) Thanks Tiger. Tumhari daad se khushi hui.
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Mahtab Qadr wrote:Anmol sahiba bahut khoobsurat ghazal pesh ki aane , Mubarakbaad :)
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ThanQ Sir,

Aap ki shabbash paa kar achha laga. :grin:
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Anmol wrote:Adaab!

Aik naya kalaam le kar hazir hui huN. Ye ghazal do teen maah se likhi hui thi, socha aaj post kar hi dooN. Umeed hay aap sab ko pasand aayegi.

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Ghazal

1. Gar ye sanjog hamara hota
Kya zamane ko gawara hota

2. Chaandni raat me hum tum hote
Aur samandar ka kinara hota

3. YaaN maiN jaane ka irada karti
WaaN woh rukne ka ishaara hota

4. Sari dunya ko bhula dete hum
Bus woh ik shaks hamara hota

5. Zindagi bhar woh taRapta rehta
Jo tirey hijr ka maara hota

7. Kash tum dair na karte itni
Hum ne jeevan bhi na haara hota

8. hum k dunya me to barbaad hue
Akhirat ko hi sanwara hota

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Woh fantastic :grin:
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sara_j wrote:
Dear anmol,

salaam.

bohat din baad tumhara kalaam parh ker bohat khushi hui,

hamesha ki tarah bohat ache ashaar likhi ho, aur bhi intezar rahega.
zor e qalam aur ziyada.

sara.
ThanQ so much Sara dear. Khush raho. Tumhari raaye se hamesha hosla'afzayi hoti hay. :grin:
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Amoodi wrote:Woh fantastic :grin:
Bohot shukria Amoodi Bhayya,

Achha laga k tum ne meri ghazal paRhi aur pasand ki. :-)
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