Wah Tahira jee waqaii bahut hi khoob...asal likhna to ise hi kehte hain jo roz marra ki zindagi mein hone waale waaqiye/haadsaath pe likha jaaye...bahut hasb-e-haal ghazal kahi hai aapne...aap ke jazbe ki qadr karte hue meri jaanib se daad qubool farmaayein! Allah hum sab ko apni hifazat mein rakhe..Ameen!
Shumaila
Koi pooche humse hamaari haalat ka sabab
to ashk baha kar bhi baat adhoori reh jati hai
Waqt jaise kahin thehar sa gaya hai
Na Gham jaata hai na khushi aati hai
Shummu wrote:Wah Tahira jee waqaii bahut hi khoob...asal likhna to ise hi kehte hain jo roz marra ki zindagi mein hone waale waaqiye/haadsaath pe likha jaaye...bahut hasb-e-haal ghazal kahi hai aapne...aap ke jazbe ki qadr karte hue meri jaanib se daad qubool farmaayein! Allah hum sab ko apni hifazat mein rakhe..Ameen!
Shumaila
Dearest shummu
salaam
aap ki beHadd mamnoono-omutashkkir hoN maiN. her derd maNd dil rekhne waala eski derd ko samjah saktaa hai. Allah Ta'Aalah aapko ajr-e-Azeem Ata fermaaey.Ameen
aapkii taaza ba taaza almiya musalsal Ghazal paRhii. aapke jazbaat ne waqa'ii hilaa ke rakh diyaa mujhe. waqa'ii yeh aisaa Khauf_naak manzar thaa ki bas har bashar Allah kii panaah maangtaa hai dil o jaaN se. aapke karb-e-bayaan, kasha kashii-e-Haalaat aur kash ma kash e aafaat ne ek naa_Khatm hone waalaa asar qaa'reyiin par chhoRaa hai.
bahot Khoob. Allah kare marHoomeen o marHoomaat ko jannat ul firdaus aur pas-maand_gaan ko sabr e jameel ataa farmaaye...aameen.
aap ki ghazal ne bahut mutaa'ccir kiyaa, aap ne jis khoobi se khayaalaat aur jazbaat aur waaqe'aat ko yak-jaa kiyaa hai , yaqeena" yeh aap ka kamaal-e-fan hai . mujhe aap ki poori ghazal ne mutaa'ccir kiyaa aur maiN taa der aap ki ghazal k seHr maiN jakRa raha. Allah kare zor-e-qalam aur ziyaadah ! aameen. DheeroN daad qabool kejeye. shukriya
mokhliS : Zia Baloch
Dikhaadi shaan, phir ahl-e-chaman ko, Be-niyaazi ki
Khamoshi se jhatak kar, aaj phir, dast-e-sabaa maiN ne
aapkii taaza ba taaza almiya musalsal Ghazal paRhii. aapke jazbaat ne waqa'ii hilaa ke rakh diyaa mujhe. waqa'ii yeh aisaa Khauf_naak manzar thaa ki bas har bashar Allah kii panaah maangtaa hai dil o jaaN se. aapke karb-e-bayaan, kasha kashii-e-Haalaat aur kash ma kash e aafaat ne ek naa_Khatm hone waalaa asar qaa'reyiin par chhoRaa hai.
bahot Khoob. Allah kare marHoomeen o marHoomaat ko jannat ul firdaus aur pas-maand_gaan ko sabr e jameel ataa farmaaye...aameen.
Hashmat
MoHteram Hashmat bHaii
salaam-e-khuloos
aap k aHssasaat jaan ker bohat achaa lagaa. insaaniyyat kaa dukh meHsusu kernaa bhi aik bohaT beRee naiki, balkeh main kehoNgi keh s'Aadat hai. Allah Ta'Alah hameiN haqeeqi m'AnoN maiN apni ahimyyat auroN ki qader aur Uski n'Amaton ko pehchaan'ne ki taufeeq Ataa fermaaey.Ameen
. mujhe aap ki poori ghazal ne mutaa'ccir kiyaa aur maiN taa der aap ki ghazal k seHr maiN jakRa raha. Allah kare zor-e-qalam aur ziyaadah ! aameen. DheeroN daad qabool kejeye. shukriya