Meri munfarid Ghazal...................

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Meri munfarid Ghazal...................

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Dosto! Aadaab

Ek muKhtacar see ghazal bahut hi munfarid aur tung qawaafee meN
hazir hai. Ummid hai pasaNd farmayeNge. Aapki aara ka muntazir hooN.

Mukhlis
Jawaid Badauni


Ghazal


AaNkhoN ko kabhie oos ne bhigoya hi nahiN tha
Lekin yeh Ghalat hai keh woh roya hi nahin tha

Such poocho to Khuwab oos ne hi dekhe thay ziyadah
Aaram se ik lamha jo soya hi nahiN tha

Qismet ke dhanee hain jo milee fasl-e mohabbat
Yeh beej kabhie aap ne boya hi nahiN tha

Kuch aur hi kashtee ki tabahi ka sabab hai
ToofaaN ne kabhi hum ko duboya hi nahin tha

DhooNdha hai oose hum ne shub.o.roz yeh such hai
Aur yeh bhi bajaa hai keh woh khoya hi nahiN tha

Mumkin hai masarrat se nikal aaye hoN aaNsoo
“Jawaid” kabhie ranj meN roya hi nahiN tha


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mukarramee Jawaid SaaHeb: aadaab!

"Ek muKhtacar see ghazal bahut hi munfarid aur tung qawaa,if meN
hazir hai."---jahaaN tak mujh` ko i'lm hai (aur meree luGhat is kee taSdeeq bh`ee kartee hai) :qaafiyeh: kee jama' :qawaafee: hai. aap ne :qawaa,if: likh`aa hai. mumkin hai keh kisee luGhat meN aisaa hee ho. waZ^aaHat kar deN to logoN kee Ghalat^fehmee kaa imkaan naheeN rahe gaa.

Sarwar A. Raz "Sarwar"
yooN aur bohat a'ib haiN :Sarwar: meN wa-lekin
kambaKht muHabbat meN to yaktaa nazar aayaa

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Sarwar Raz wrote:mukarramee Jawaid SaaHeb: aadaab!

"Ek muKhtacar see ghazal bahut hi munfarid aur tung qawaa,if meN
hazir hai."---jahaaN tak mujh` ko i'lm hai (aur meree luGhat is kee taSdeeq bh`ee kartee hai) :qaafiyeh: kee jama' :qawaafee: hai. aap ne :qawaa,if: likh`aa hai. mumkin hai keh kisee luGhat meN aisaa hee ho. waZ^aaHat kar deN to logoN kee Ghalat^fehmee kaa imkaan naheeN rahe gaa.

Sarwar A. Raz "Sarwar"

Janab Sarwar Sahab, Tasleemat

Bahut Bahut shukriya.

MaiN abhi EDIT se durust kar leta hooN.

Kuch alfaz Ghalatul-awam ho jate haiN aur Ghalat saheeh lagne lagta hai.
LuGh'At bhi har waqt kahaN dekh milti hai is macroof zindagee meN..

Ek baar phir shukriya.

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Re: Meri munfarid Ghazal...................

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jawaid badauni wrote:

AaNkhoN ko kabhie oos ne bhigoya hi nahiN tha
Lekin yeh Ghalat hai keh woh roya hi nahin tha

Such poocho to Khuwab oos ne hi dekhe thay ziyadah
Aaram se ik lamha jo soya hi nahiN tha

Qismet ke dhanee hain jo milee fasl-e mohabbat
Yeh beej kabhie aap ne boya hi nahiN tha

DhooNdha hai oose hum ne shub.o.roz yeh such hai
Aur yeh bhi bajaa hai keh woh khoya hi nahiN tha


wahhhhhhhhh Jawaid bhai..bahut khoob.......aap bahut achcha likha hain...aap ki ye ghazal bhi bahut khoob hai aur bahut pasand aayi khaaskar quoted ash'aar...! Daad qubool karein. :-)

Shumaila

Koi pooche humse hamaari haalat ka sabab
to ashk baha kar bhi baat adhoori reh jati hai

Waqt jaise kahin thehar sa gaya hai
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Re: Meri munfarid Ghazal...................

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Shummu wrote:
jawaid badauni wrote:

AaNkhoN ko kabhie oos ne bhigoya hi nahiN tha
Lekin yeh Ghalat hai keh woh roya hi nahin tha

Such poocho to Khuwab oos ne hi dekhe thay ziyadah
Aaram se ik lamha jo soya hi nahiN tha

Qismet ke dhanee hain jo milee fasl-e mohabbat
Yeh beej kabhie aap ne boya hi nahiN tha

DhooNdha hai oose hum ne shub.o.roz yeh such hai
Aur yeh bhi bajaa hai keh woh khoya hi nahiN tha


wahhhhhhhhh Jawaid bhai..bahut khoob.......aap bahut achcha likha hain...aap ki ye ghazal bhi bahut khoob hai aur bahut pasand aayi khaaskar quoted ash'aar...! Daad qubool karein. :-)

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Dad .o. Tahseen ke liye bahut bahut shukriya.

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sara_j wrote:
jawaid badauni wrote:
Dosto! Aadaab

Ek muKhtacar see ghazal bahut hi munfarid aur tung qawaafee meN
hazir hai. Ummid hai pasaNd farmayeNge. Aapki aara ka muntazir hooN.

Mukhlis
Jawaid Badauni


Ghazal


AaNkhoN ko kabhie oos ne bhigoya hi nahiN tha
Lekin yeh Ghalat hai keh woh roya hi nahin tha

wah wah! bohat khoob!

Such poocho to Khuwab oos ne hi dekhe thay ziyadah
Aaram se ik lamha jo soya hi nahiN tha

wah! lajawaab!

Qismet ke dhanee hain jo milee fasl-e mohabbat
Yeh beej kabhie aap ne boya hi nahiN tha

nice!

Kuch aur hi kashtee ki tabahi ka sabab hai
ToofaaN ne kabhi hum ko duboya hi nahin tha

wah waah!

DhooNdha hai oose hum ne shub.o.roz yeh such hai
Aur yeh bhi bajaa hai keh woh khoya hi nahiN tha

bohat khoob!

Mumkin hai masarrat se nikal aaye hoN aaNsoo
“Jawaid” kabhie ranj meN roya hi nahiN tha

bohat khoob!


Jawaid Badauni
Muscat – Oman
Jawaid bhai aapki ye ghazal bohat pasand aayi,
sabhi shair aek se barh ker aek hain,
mujhe is ghazal mien jo pehle aur doosre misre mein
lafzi tazaad hai bohat pasand aaya.

mubarakbaad qubool keejiye.

mukhlis

sara
Azeezah Sara Sahibah,

Ghazal ki purKhuloos daad ke liye aapka behud mamnoon hooN.

Bahut din se aapka taza kalam nahiN dekha hai. Inayat kijiye.

Apka Bhai

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Bahut khoob waah waah

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MuHtarami o Azeezi
Jawaid Badayuni Saahib,

Purkhuloos Tasleemaat,

Aapki ghazal paRhkar bahut hii luTf aayaa. Bahut hii dilkash mazaameen heiN aur andaaz-e-bayaan bhii waaqaAi munfarid hei.

Is kaamyaab kaavish per meri dili daad aur mubaarakbaad qubool farmaayiye.


Aapka Mukhlis,
Nazir.
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shukria

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Jawaid Badauni sahib
Aadaab
aapki ye ghazal majmoi taur par bahut achi lagi aur baaaz sher to bahut khooobsurat haiN, jo hazb e zail haiN.

AaNkhoN ko kabhie oos ne bhigoya hi nahiN tha
Lekin yeh Ghalat hai keh woh roya hi nahin tha

Kuch aur hi kashtee ki tabahi ka sabab hai
ToofaaN ne kabhi hum ko duboya hi nahin tha

shukria
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wah..buhat khoob..such hai
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jawaid badauni wrote:
Dosto! Aadaab

Ek muKhtacar see ghazal bahut hi munfarid aur tung qawaafee meN
hazir hai. Ummid hai pasaNd farmayeNge. Aapki aara ka muntazir hooN.

Mukhlis
Jawaid Badauni


Ghazal


AaNkhoN ko kabhie oos ne bhigoya hi nahiN tha
Lekin yeh Ghalat hai keh woh roya hi nahin tha

Such poocho to Khuwab oos ne hi dekhe thay ziyadah
Aaram se ik lamha jo soya hi nahiN tha

Qismet ke dhanee hain jo milee fasl-e mohabbat
Yeh beej kabhie aap ne boya hi nahiN tha

Kuch aur hi kashtee ki tabahi ka sabab hai
ToofaaN ne kabhi hum ko duboya hi nahin tha

DhooNdha hai oose hum ne shub.o.roz yeh such hai
Aur yeh bhi bajaa hai keh woh khoya hi nahiN tha

Mumkin hai masarrat se nikal aaye hoN aaNsoo
“Jawaid” kabhie ranj meN roya hi nahiN tha


Jawaid Badauni
Muscat – Oman

Mashallah bohat khoob

SubHaan Allah

Daad Haazir hai

saaray k saaray ash'Aar pasand aaey

khush raheiN
live and let live

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WEBMASTER wrote:
MuHtarami o Azeezi
Jawaid Badayuni Saahib,

Purkhuloos Tasleemaat,

Aapki ghazal paRhkar bahut hii luTf aayaa. Bahut hii dilkash mazaameen heiN aur andaaz-e-bayaan bhii waaqaAi munfarid hei.

Is kaamyaab kaavish per meri dili daad aur mubaarakbaad qubool farmaayiye.


Aapka Mukhlis,
Nazir.

Mohtarmee Nazir Sahab,
Aadaab.

Aaap pasaNd farmayeN to sanad mil jati hai. Ab maiN apni ghazal se nut.ma,in hooN.

Doa,oN meN shamil rakhiyega.

Naacheez,

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Mahtab Qadr wrote:Jawaid Badauni sahib
Aadaab
aapki ye ghazal majmoi taur par bahut achi lagi aur baaaz sher to bahut khooobsurat haiN, jo hazb e zail haiN.

AaNkhoN ko kabhie oos ne bhigoya hi nahiN tha
Lekin yeh Ghalat hai keh woh roya hi nahin tha

Kuch aur hi kashtee ki tabahi ka sabab hai
ToofaaN ne kabhi hum ko duboya hi nahin tha

shukria
Mahtab Qadr
Aapki daad.o.tahseen ke liye aapka behud mamnoon hooN Mahtab Qadr Sahab.

Shukriya.

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nazneen_72 wrote:wah..buhat khoob..such hai

SHUKRIYA,

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tahira Masood wrote:
jawaid badauni wrote:
Dosto! Aadaab

Ek muKhtacar see ghazal bahut hi munfarid aur tung qawaafee meN
hazir hai. Ummid hai pasaNd farmayeNge. Aapki aara ka muntazir hooN.

Mukhlis
Jawaid Badauni


Ghazal


AaNkhoN ko kabhie oos ne bhigoya hi nahiN tha
Lekin yeh Ghalat hai keh woh roya hi nahin tha

Such poocho to Khuwab oos ne hi dekhe thay ziyadah
Aaram se ik lamha jo soya hi nahiN tha

Qismet ke dhanee hain jo milee fasl-e mohabbat
Yeh beej kabhie aap ne boya hi nahiN tha

Kuch aur hi kashtee ki tabahi ka sabab hai
ToofaaN ne kabhi hum ko duboya hi nahin tha

DhooNdha hai oose hum ne shub.o.roz yeh such hai
Aur yeh bhi bajaa hai keh woh khoya hi nahiN tha

Mumkin hai masarrat se nikal aaye hoN aaNsoo
“Jawaid” kabhie ranj meN roya hi nahiN tha


Jawaid Badauni
Muscat – Oman

Mashallah bohat khoob

SubHaan Allah

Daad Haazir hai

saaray k saaray ash'Aar pasand aaey

khush raheiN

Aapki purKhuloos daad ke liye behud mamnoon hooN Tahira Masoud Sahibah. Ummid hai aaindah bhi himmat afzaaii farmyeNge.

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nazneen_72 wrote:wah..buhat khoob..such hai

SHUKRIYA,

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