Harf-e-'Daal' (Daali waala)se ash'aar bhejiye..shukriya!

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Harf-e-'Daal' (Daali waala)se ash'aar bhejiye..shukriya!

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Duub jaa_uu.N to ko_ii mauj nishaa.N tak na bataaye
aisii nadii me.n utar jaane ko jii chaahataa hai


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Koi pooche humse hamaari haalat ka sabab
to ashk baha kar bhi baat adhoori reh jati hai

Waqt jaise kahin thehar sa gaya hai
Na Gham jaata hai na khushi aati hai
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Dhaaye heiN uske taghaful ne sitam kitne hii

maiN ne phir bhii nah kahaa usko buraa meHfil meiN.

Meree sha'iree se mujhe jaan Lo
ke yeh aa'enaa hai meri zaat ka
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Raji wrote:
Dhaaye heiN uske taghaful ne sitam kitne hii

maiN ne phir bhii nah kahaa usko buraa meHfil meiN.


welcome raji sis..wah bhut khoobsurat sher ataa kiya hai aapne :-)

Koi pooche humse hamaari haalat ka sabab
to ashk baha kar bhi baat adhoori reh jati hai

Waqt jaise kahin thehar sa gaya hai
Na Gham jaata hai na khushi aati hai
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Daal kar Khaak mere Khuun pe qaatil ne kahaa
kuchh yeh mehandii nahii.n merii ke miTaa bhii na sakuu.N



Ameer Minai

Koi pooche humse hamaari haalat ka sabab
to ashk baha kar bhi baat adhoori reh jati hai

Waqt jaise kahin thehar sa gaya hai
Na Gham jaata hai na khushi aati hai
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Dagmagaajaate heiN jab raah-e-muHabbat meiN qadam

yaad aajaati hei mujhko tiri rukhSat kii qasam.



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Duboodiyaa mujhe meri hii apni ghaflat ne

wagarnah mauj-e-balaa kyaa bigaaRti meraa.



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Darta raha voh shaks zamaane se u'mr bhar
jisko bas ik khuda ka kabhi D'ar naheeN raha

(Zahida Raees :Raji:)
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Dhoond rahi ho jinse muhabaat duniya ke baazaaron meiN
Aye meri muflis ummeedon !! tum bhee kyaa deewaani ho!


Qaiser Jaafri

Koi pooche humse hamaari haalat ka sabab
to ashk baha kar bhi baat adhoori reh jati hai

Waqt jaise kahin thehar sa gaya hai
Na Gham jaata hai na khushi aati hai
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DhoonD rahe hou jinko meri bhooli bisri baataoN mein

wo jugnoo maAdoom houe heiN bekaifi kii raataoN meiN.



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duniyaa maiN eik shakhs bhi aisaa milaa nahiN
jis se jahaaN koee huee ho khataa nahin




Note:
Pahlaa Harf "daal" nahiN balkeh "Daal" hounaa chaahiye jaise "Dhaal" meiN.
Urdu hai jis ka naam hamiiN jaante haiN :Daagh:
saare jahaaN maiN dhum humaari zubaaN ki hai
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hassan_bashir wrote:duniyaa maiN eik shakhs bhi aisaa milaa nahiN
jis se jahaaN koee huee ho khataa nahin

'Daal' se ashaar bhejne hain.... 'daal' se nahi...

Koi pooche humse hamaari haalat ka sabab
to ashk baha kar bhi baat adhoori reh jati hai

Waqt jaise kahin thehar sa gaya hai
Na Gham jaata hai na khushi aati hai
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Shummu wrote:
hassan_bashir wrote:duniyaa maiN eik shakhs bhi aisaa milaa nahiN
jis se jahaaN koee huee ho khataa nahin

'Daal' se ashaar bhejne hain.... 'daal' se nahi...
maazrat Shumaila jee .. maine shaayad ghaur se nahiN paRha .. :grin:


duaaN ban ke fazaa maiN uRaa diyaa mujh ko
maiN jal rahaa tha kisi ne bujhaa diyaa mujh ko


ab Theek hai ?? :lol:
Urdu hai jis ka naam hamiiN jaante haiN :Daagh:
saare jahaaN maiN dhum humaari zubaaN ki hai
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hassan_bashir wrote:
Shummu wrote:
hassan_bashir wrote:duniyaa maiN eik shakhs bhi aisaa milaa nahiN
jis se jahaaN koee huee ho khataa nahin

'Daal' se ashaar bhejne hain.... 'daal' se nahi...
maazrat Shumaila jee .. maine shaayad ghaur se nahiN paRha .. :grin:


duaaN ban ke fazaa maiN uRaa diyaa mujh ko
maiN jal rahaa tha kisi ne bujhaa diyaa mujh ko


ab Theek hai ?? :lol:
ab bhi nahi :cry:


D se ...Dibba wala D ...got it??

Koi pooche humse hamaari haalat ka sabab
to ashk baha kar bhi baat adhoori reh jati hai

Waqt jaise kahin thehar sa gaya hai
Na Gham jaata hai na khushi aati hai
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Duubte Duubte kashtii ko ochhaalaa de duu.N
mai.n nahii.n ko_ii to saahil pe utar jaayegaa

Koi pooche humse hamaari haalat ka sabab
to ashk baha kar bhi baat adhoori reh jati hai

Waqt jaise kahin thehar sa gaya hai
Na Gham jaata hai na khushi aati hai
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Shummu wrote:
hassan_bashir wrote:
Shummu wrote:
'Daal' se ashaar bhejne hain.... 'daal' se nahi...
maazrat Shumaila jee .. maine shaayad ghaur se nahiN paRha .. :grin:


duaaN ban ke fazaa maiN uRaa diyaa mujh ko
maiN jal rahaa tha kisi ne bujhaa diyaa mujh ko


ab Theek hai ?? :lol:
ab bhi nahi :cry:


D se ...Dibba wala D ...got it??
:shock: :shock: :shock:


leejiye ab samjhaa...... :grin:

Daalaa hai be-khudee ne ajab raah par mujhe
aaNkheN haiN aur kuch nahiN aataa nazar mujhe


yaqeenan ab Theek hai :-)
Urdu hai jis ka naam hamiiN jaante haiN :Daagh:
saare jahaaN maiN dhum humaari zubaaN ki hai
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