Mohtarmee Abdullah Nazir Sahab, Aadaab
Iss mushaaireh meN shayad pahlee baar aap ne behud dushwaar misAra tajweez farmaya hai. Qawafee nihayat tung aur dushwaar haiN aur mere liye iss zameen meN mere mizaj ki ghazal kahna dushwaar tha. Socha tha pahlee baar aap se mAzrat karna paRege magar phir kuch TooTe phoTe ashAAr ho hi gaye jo aapki Khidmat meN israal kar raha hooN.
Ummid hai aaindah aasan misArey tajweez farmayeNge. Yaad rakhiye sub aapki tarah kohna mashq nahiN hote, yeh zameen hamare liye itni aasan nah thee.
Khairtalab,
Jawaid Badauni
Muscat - Oman
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Maidaan-e a'shiqee meN sub kuch jo haarte haiN
Iss ishq meN wohee to maidaan maarte haiN
Dil tujhpe waarte haiN jaaN tujhpe waarte haiN
YooN husn-e yaar tera sadqa utaarte haiN
KitnoN ko ek pal meN bemaut maarte haiN
“Tan tan ke jab woh apna seena ubhaarte haiN”
Gesoo-e waqt yaro hote haiN jab pareeshaN
Hum shana-e amal se unko saNwaarte haiN
Aao ya tum nah aao lekin Sadaa to sun lo
Deevar.o.dar kisee ke tum ko pukarte haiN
Tareekh-e zulm paRh lo har jung men hameshah
Mazloom jeet ta hai zalim hi haarte haiN
AshAAr kub haiN yaro kuch naqsh haiN yeh dil ke
Jin ko qalam se :Jawaid: akSer ubhaarte haiN
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Meri tarahee ghazal (Guz # 10)
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Meri tarahee ghazal (Guz # 10)
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Hasan Bashir Sbhassan_bashir wrote:wahh wahh jawaid saaHib kyaa khub ash'aar nikaale haiN saare ke saare ash'aar khub hai matlaa behad pasaNd aaya
is khubsurat kalaam ke liiYe meri jaanib se daad qubul farmaayeN.
Dua'a-go
Hassan
Ghazal ki pazeeraai ke liye aap ka behud mamnoon hooN.
Khoosh raheN!
Apka Mukhlis
Jawaid
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Bahut khoob
MuHtarami o Azeezi
Jawaid Badayuni Saahib,
Purkhuloos Tasleemaat,
Aapki mandarja-e-zeil TaraHi ghazal bahut pasand aayi jiske liye khaaksaar kii daad aur mubaarakbaad qubool farmaayiye:
Maidaan-e ashiqee meN sub kuch jo haarte haiN
Iss ishq meN wohee to maidaan maarte haiN
Dil tujhpe waarte haiN jaaN tujhpe waarte haiN
YooN husn-e yaar tera sadqa utaarte haiN
KitnoN ko elk pal meN bemaut maarte haiN
“Tan tan ke jab woh apna seena ubhaarte haiN”
Gesoo-e waqt yaro hote haiN jab pareeshaN
Hum shana-e amal se unko saNwaarte haiN
Aao ya tum nah aao lekin Sadaa to sun lo
Deevar.o.dar kisee ke tum ko pukarte haiN
Tareekh-e zulm paRh lo har jung men hameshah
Mazloom jeet ta hai zalim hi haarte haiN
AshAAr kub haiN yaro kuch naqsh haiN yeh dil ke
Jin ko qalam se :Jawaid: akSer ubhaarte haiN
Nazir.[/i]
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Re: Meri tarahee ghazal (Guz # 10)
wah bahut khoob!!!jawaid badauni wrote:
Dil tujhpe waarte haiN jaaN tujhpe waarte haiN
YooN husn-e yaar tera sadqa utaarte haiN
KitnoN ko ek pal meN bemaut maarte haiN
“Tan tan ke jab woh apna seena ubhaarte haiN”
Gesoo-e waqt yaro hote haiN jab pareeshaN
Hum shana-e amal se unko saNwaarte haiN
Aao ya tum nah aao lekin Sadaa to sun lo
Deevar.o.dar kisee ke tum ko pukarte haiN
Koi pooche humse hamaari haalat ka sabab
to ashk baha kar bhi baat adhoori reh jati hai
Waqt jaise kahin thehar sa gaya hai
Na Gham jaata hai na khushi aati hai
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Re: Bahut khoob
WEBMASTER wrote:
Purkhuloos Tasleemaat,
Aapki mandarja-e-zeil TaraHi ghazal bahut pasand aayi jiske liye khaaksaar kii daad aur mubaarakbaad qubool farmaayiye:
Maidaan-e ashiqee meN sub kuch jo haarte haiN
Iss ishq meN wohee to maidaan maarte haiN
Dil tujhpe waarte haiN jaaN tujhpe waarte haiN
YooN husn-e yaar tera sadqa utaarte haiN
KitnoN ko elk pal meN bemaut maarte haiN
“Tan tan ke jab woh apna seena ubhaarte haiN”
Gesoo-e waqt yaro hote haiN jab pareeshaN
Hum shana-e amal se unko saNwaarte haiN
Aao ya tum nah aao lekin Sadaa to sun lo
Deevar.o.dar kisee ke tum ko pukarte haiN
Tareekh-e zulm paRh lo har jung men hameshah
Mazloom jeet ta hai zalim hi haarte haiN
AshAAr kub haiN yaro kuch naqsh haiN yeh dil ke
Jin ko qalam se :Jawaid: akSer ubhaarte haiN
Nazir.[/i]
Mohtarmee Nazir Sahab,
Aadaab
Ghazal aapko pasaNd aaii yeh mere liye baRa e'zaz hai aur merii bahut himmat afzaaii hoii. Ab mazeed ghazaloN ka Khususan aapki ghazal ka intezar hai.
Mukhlis
Jawaid Badauni
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salaamun alaikum
azeebhai jawaid saahib
aapki yeh ghazal bahut acchi lagi.lafzo.n se khelte hai.n aap.hame.n khaaskar aapka yeh sher bahut pasand aaya
"taareekhe zulm parhlo har jung mei.n hamesha
mazloom jeet ta hai zaalim hi haarte hai.n"
waah bahut khoob
hamari dili daad qubool farmaaye.n
aapka apna
haamidbaaqri
azeebhai jawaid saahib
aapki yeh ghazal bahut acchi lagi.lafzo.n se khelte hai.n aap.hame.n khaaskar aapka yeh sher bahut pasand aaya
"taareekhe zulm parhlo har jung mei.n hamesha
mazloom jeet ta hai zaalim hi haarte hai.n"
waah bahut khoob
hamari dili daad qubool farmaaye.n
aapka apna
haamidbaaqri
mai.n to karta nahi.n kuch aur ebaadat ke siwa
paas mere nahi.n kuch aur mohabbat ke siwa
paas mere nahi.n kuch aur mohabbat ke siwa
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haamidbaaqri wrote:salaamun alaikum
azeebhai jawaid saahib
aapki yeh ghazal bahut acchi lagi.lafzo.n se khelte hai.n aap.hame.n khaaskar aapka yeh sher bahut pasand aaya
"taareekhe zulm parhlo har jung mei.n hamesha
mazloom jeet ta hai zaalim hi haarte hai.n"
waah bahut khoob
hamari dili daad qubool farmaaye.n
aapka apna
haamidbaaqri
Aapko yahaN dekhkar bahut Khooshi hoii Haamid Baaqri Sb. Aapki daad.o.tahseen ke liye aap ka mamnoon hooN.
Mukhlis
Jawaid
moHtaram janab-e-Jawaid SaaHeb:
Aadaab-o-tasleemaat,
yeh zameen tu mujhe weise hee bohat psand thee aur aap kee ghazal ne tu kamaal hee kar diya paRh kar bohat lutf aaya. :) meree janib se DhairooN daad aur mubarakbaad qubool keejiye.
wassalam
Zahida Raees :Raji:
Aadaab-o-tasleemaat,
yeh zameen tu mujhe weise hee bohat psand thee aur aap kee ghazal ne tu kamaal hee kar diya paRh kar bohat lutf aaya. :) meree janib se DhairooN daad aur mubarakbaad qubool keejiye.
wassalam
Zahida Raees :Raji:
Meree sha'iree se mujhe jaan Lo
ke yeh aa'enaa hai meri zaat ka
(Raji)
ke yeh aa'enaa hai meri zaat ka
(Raji)
moHtaram janab-e-Jawaid SaaHeb:
Aadaab-o-tasleemaat,
yeh zameen tu mujhe weise hee bohat psand thee aur aap kee ghazal ne tu kamaal hee kar diya paRh kar bohat lutf aaya. :) meree janib se DhairooN daad aur mubarakbaad qubool keejiye.
wassalam
Zahida Raees :Raji:
Aadaab-o-tasleemaat,
yeh zameen tu mujhe weise hee bohat psand thee aur aap kee ghazal ne tu kamaal hee kar diya paRh kar bohat lutf aaya. :) meree janib se DhairooN daad aur mubarakbaad qubool keejiye.
wassalam
Zahida Raees :Raji:
Meree sha'iree se mujhe jaan Lo
ke yeh aa'enaa hai meri zaat ka
(Raji)
ke yeh aa'enaa hai meri zaat ka
(Raji)
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Mohtarmah Raji SahibahRaji wrote:moHtaram janab-e-Jawaid SaaHeb:
Aadaab-o-tasleemaat,
yeh zameen tu mujhe weise hee bohat psand thee aur aap kee ghazal ne tu kamaal hee kar diya paRh kar bohat lutf aaya. :) meree janib se DhairooN daad aur mubarakbaad qubool keejiye.
wassalam
Zahida Raees :Raji:
Ghazalki pazeereaaii ke liye mamnoon hooN.Bahut bahut shukriya.
Khoosh RaheN!
Jawaid