Tarahee Ghazal...Guzarish # 13 (January 2006)

[jawaid badauni]

Dosto! Salam

Mujhe lagta tha iss baar maiN ghazal kah nahiN paaooNga. Yeh miSra Hazre Momin ki aisee ghazal ka hai jo unhoN ne apni KhaaS zubaan meN kahi thee. Har kisee ke liye is lahje meN ashAAr kahna mumkin nahiN.

BaharaHaal kuch ToTe-phooTe ashAAr ho gaye hain so bhej raha hooN. Ummid hai apni aara se nawazeNge. Mujhe Khooshi hai riwayat-e qadeem ko barqaraar rakhte howay sub se pahle Urdu Bandhan ke mushaaireh meN HaaZiree lagaa raha hooN.

Aapka MuKhlis
Jawaid Badauni
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Ishq tera abr banker mere dil per chhaaye hai
Kya karooN yeh abr bin barse hi akSer jaaye hai


Sare din ki GhaltiyoN per woh bahoot pachtaaye hai
SubH ka bhoola hoowa jab sham ko ghar aaye hai


Dekh lo tareeKh, har SufHa yehee dohraaye hai
Zulm karke ek din zaalim bahoot pachtaaye hai


Ishq ki rasmoN se jo Khood hai abhee naa-aashna
Baarha woh ishq ka matlab mujhe samjhaaye hai


Gham gaya, chaahat gaii, hasrat gaaii, wahshat gaii
“haaye kyaa kahiye keh dil ke saath kya kya jaaye hai


Hazrat-e Nazir! zara aasaan miSery deejiye
Sub ko Momin ki zubaaN meN guftagoo kab aaye hai


Shayad ai “Jawaid” soya hi nahiN ooska zameer
Kaisa mujrim hai Khata karte howey ghabraaye hai
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[zmufti]

Jawaid saheb
aap is zameen ko mushkil keh rahe haiN to ham jaisy kaisey keh paayieN ge
aap ki ghazal ke sabhi asha'ar achey haiN
meri janib se daad qabool kijye
regards
zmufti

[jawaid badauni]

Buhat buhat shukriya Sara bahin,,,aapne khubsurat "image" banaya aur woh bhi mere iltemas ke baghair khood se yeh kaam kiya. Buhat dil khoosh hoa.

MuKhliS
Jawaid

[Sarwar A. Raz]

edited by Raz

[Abdullah Nazir]

MuHtarami
Jawaid Badayuni SaaHib,

PurkhulooS tasleemaat,

Aapki aur Sarwar SaaHib kii naSeeHataoN ke liye beHad shukrguzaar hooN.


Aapka MukhliS,
Nazir.

[jawaid badauni]

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Jawaid