Tarhi Ghazal 21..bardasht karte haiN.

[Mahtab Qadr]

Dosto aur azeezo, misra e tarha parhkar dil chaha ke kuch kaha jaye so chand lamhoN mai kahi gai ye ghazal pesh e khidmat hai. aap ki aaara aur tabsiroN ka intezar rahega
shukria
Mahtab Qadr

jo kal sahte the nakhre aaj bhi bardasht karte haiN
"jo ahle zarf hote haiN wahi bardasht karte haiN"

zara sa boojh parhta hai to pathar toot jaate haiN
na jaane boojh kitnaa, aadmi bardasht karte haiN

ujaale dekh kar aksar ghuta hai dam andheroN ka
andhere kab nisaab e raushni bardasht karte haiN

na zauq e dosti un mai , na halat dushmanoN wali
ajab ye kashmakash ham har gharhi bardasht karte haiN

zara si baat par unki, khafa hone ki adat bhi
hamhiN bardasht karte haiN hamhiN bardasht karte haiN

Mahtab Qadr

[Abdullah Nazir]

MuHtarami
Mahtab Qadr SaaHib,

PurkhulooS Tasleemaat,

Guz. 21 ke TaraHi miSreA per aapki ghazal bahut pasand aayi jisked liye meri dili daad aur mubaarakbaad qubool keejiye.

MULAAHIZAAT:

jo kal sahte the nakhre aaj bhi bardasht karte haiN
"jo ahle zarf hote haiN wahi bardasht karte haiN"

TaraHi miSreA per apni khoobSoorat gireh ke saath achcha maqTaA pesh kiyaa hei, waah waah.

zara sa boojh parhta hai to pathar toot jaate haiN
na jaane boojh kitnaa, aadmi bardasht karte haiN

Zara sa boujh paRtaa, waah waah kyaa kehne.

ujaale dekh kar aksar ghuta hai dam andheroN ka
andhere kab nisaab e raushni bardasht karte haiN

Bahut khoob, jamA-e-aZdaad se aap ne achchaa sheAr kahaa hei, waah waah.

na zauq e dosti un mai , na halat dushmanoN wali
ajab ye kashmakash ham har gharhi bardasht karte haiN

Yeh bhee bahut achchaa sheAr hei. Waah waah.

zara si baat par unki, khafa hone ki adat bhi
ham hi bardasht karte haiN ham hi bardasht karte haiN

Doosre miSreA meiN aap "hameeN" kee aawaaz isteAmaal karrahe heiN jo "ham hee" ke barabar hei HaSr ke liye. Lekin miSreA ke ibtidaa meiN tou Theek he albattah qaafiye ke liHaaz se durust nahiN maAloom hutaa. "hameeN" meiN noon-e-ghunnah hei. Is liye aapko is miSreA meiN tabdeeli laani paRegi.


Aapka MukhliS,
Nazir.

[Mahtab Qadr]

Mohatrami Abdullah Nazir sahib,
aapke irshaad ki tameel mai mai ne ghazal ke aakhri sher mai tarmeem kardi hai, aapki rahnumaai ke lye behad mashkoor hoN.

niazmand

Mahtab

[Star Mind]

janaab-e-mahtaab SaaHib, aadaab

waah bhai kyaa kehnye ! aap ne to baRee Khoob Ghazal i'naayat farmaayee hai ! mujhe Khaas tor par nisaab-e-raushnee waala she'r aur ye tarkeeb bohut pasand aaye ! daad Haazir hai ! shukriya

Zia Baloch

[Mahtab Qadr]

Baradar e Azeez Zia Baloch , aapki inayatoN aur khuloosbhari pazeerai ka shukria
Mahtab

[Mahtab Qadr]

Sara ji shukria

Mahtab

[Muzaffar Ahmad Muzaffar]

moHtaram mehtab qadir saHeb aadaab!

aap kee ghazal dekhne ka maoqa' mila bohot khubSurat she'er
keh kar aap ne bazm ko sajaya hai. sabhee she'er pasand aaee haiN.

meree t^araf se dad aor mubarak bad qubool kijiye.

Wassalam
mukhliS
muz^affar

[zaamin]

zara sa boojh parhta hai to pathar toot jaate haiN
na jaane boojh kitnaa, aadmi bardasht karte haiN

ujaale dekh kar aksar ghuta hai dam andheroN ka
andhere kab nisaab e raushni bardasht karte haiN

eik khoobsoorat kalaam,janaab mahtaab saahib

daad qabool farmaayein

zaamin

[Mahtab Qadr]

Muzaffar Sahib salaam e masnoon
Ghazal ki pasandeedgi aur hausla afzai ke lye mashkoor hoN.
niazmand
Mahtab

[Mahtab Qadr]

Zamin sahib
salaam e masnoon
purkhuloos pazeerai ke shukria janab

shukria
Mahtab

[haamidbaaqri]

salaamun alaikum
mohtaram mehtab qadr saahib

bahut acchee ghazal enaayat farmaayee hai.

hame.n bahut pasand aayee

lehaaza hamaari dilee daad haazir hai....qubool farmaaye.n

mukhlis
haamidbaaqri

[Mahtab Qadr]

walaikum salaam
Behad shukria Hamed baqri sahib
Mahttab