rukh se pardah uTh~a dijiYe!

Kuhnah mashq ShoAraa kaa kalaam jo beHr meiN hounaa zaroori hei

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rukh se pardah uTh~a dijiYe!

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Yaraan-e-meHfil aadaab!

abh~ee peTh~a Saef -ud-deen Saef marHoom kee Ghazal

"lazzat-e-Gham baRh~a dijiYe
aap YooN muskura dijiYe"

sun raha th~a. keh do GhazleeN isee zameen meN ho gaeeN.
aek z^areefanah hai jo "mazahiYah kaalam" kee laree meN laga dee hai. aor dusree Yeh jo pesh-e-khidmat hai.

aap sab kee raYe ka intz^aar rahe ga. beHer ke arkaan haiN.

faa e'lun........faa e'lun.........faa e'lun
212.................212....................212

bohot khubSurat aor narm zameen hai. dusre dost bh~ee t^aba' aazmaaeeN. bohot mazah aaeYe ga.

Ghazal

1,

rukh se pardah uTh~a dijiYe

z^ulmat-e-shab miTa dijiYe!


2,

gar e'naYat ke qabil naheeN

sakht koee saza dijiYe!


3,

jurm-e-ulfat kee padaash meN

meree hastee mita dijiYe!


4,

luT geYa shaoq ka karwaaN

raah zan ko dua'a dijiYe!


5,

be niYazee bohot ho chukee

mashq-e-joor-e-jafa kijiYe!


6,

maiN ne ch~eRa hai saaz-e-t^arab

koee naGhmah suna dijiYe!


7,

shaoq-e-nazz^arah kis ko naheeN?

aaj jalwah dikh~a dijiYe!


8,

dasht-e-furqat meN jaan-e-jahaaN

kh~o geYa hooN Sada dijiYe!


9,

bujh~ nah jaeYe charaaGh-e-wafa

YooN nah is ko hawa dijiYe!


10,

baRh~ geYa mera dard-e-jigar

mekade ka pata dijiYe!


11,

nakhl-e-ummeed murjh~a geYa

baGhbaaN ko dua'a dijiYe!


12,

aa rahee hai muz^affar kee na'sh

rastooN ko saja dijiYe!




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wah wah bahut khoob..mukhtasr si behr mein aap ki ye rawaan dawaan ghazal bahut pasand aayi..daad pesh hai muzaffar sahab :)

Koi pooche humse hamaari haalat ka sabab
to ashk baha kar bhi baat adhoori reh jati hai

Waqt jaise kahin thehar sa gaya hai
Na Gham jaata hai na khushi aati hai
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Post by Muzaffar Ahmad Muzaffar »

Shummu jee!! aadaab! :-)

aap ka mamnoon hoN keh aap ne kalam ko pasand
farmaYa mujh~e pata hai keh aap sab ke kalam par
dad naheeN deteeN aor jin ko dad deteeN haiN un
meN se aek maiN bh~ee hoN.

aap kalam pasand farmatee haiN to bohot HoSlah
baRh~ta hai!

Wassalam
muz^affar
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koshish yahi rehti hain sab ko paRhoon magar kambhakht waqt ki qillat maar deti hai..waise jo kalaam mujhe pasand aata hai use daad zaroor deti hoon:-)

Koi pooche humse hamaari haalat ka sabab
to ashk baha kar bhi baat adhoori reh jati hai

Waqt jaise kahin thehar sa gaya hai
Na Gham jaata hai na khushi aati hai
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