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"hissay mei.n aayee hai"aik taaza ghazal peshay kh

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salaamun alaikum
dosto

mohtaram abdullah nazir sahib kee is zameen mei.n ghazal padhnay kay b'aad hamaara dil bhi chaaha keh hum bhi kuch kahe.n.lehaaza apni yeh taaza ghazal irsaal karnay ki sa'aadat haasil kar rahay hai.n.

gar qubool uftad zahay .................

arz kiya hai.....

rasoolallah(s.a.w.a.w)say waabastagi hissay mei.n aayee hai
keh hum sayyed hai.n humko sarwari hissay mei.n aayee hai

koyee aasaa.n nahi.n hai kaam yaaro shaayeri karna
badi mushkil say yeh deewaangi hissay mei.n aayee hai

bahut rau rau kay maangee rab say humnay fikr ki daulat
khuda kay fazl say yeh aagahi hissay mei.n aayee hai

munaafiq aur zaalim jitnay hai.n is dauray haazir mei.n
enhee.n logo.n kay dekho rahbari hissay mei.n aayee hai

utho aye naujawaanau khwaab say bedaar hau jaao
khudaara mat kaho keh baybasee hissay mei.n aayee hai

nikalta dam hai ab insaaniyat ka kuch karo haamid
bashar yeh keh nah day haiwaanagee hissay mei.n aayee hai

nateejaye fikr
haamidbaaqri
al ahamdulillah
mai.n to karta nahi.n kuch aur ebaadat ke siwa
paas mere nahi.n kuch aur mohabbat ke siwa
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Bahut khoob, subhaanallah

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MuHtaramai
Haamid Baaqri SaaHib,

PurkhulooS Tasleemaat,

Aapki mandarja-e-zeil ghazal nazar se guzri jo aapke makhSooS andaz meiN hei aur bahut dilkash hei. Is kaamyaab koushish per meri dili daad aur mubaarakbaad qubool farmaayiye aur :jazax:

rasoolallah(s.a.w.a.w)say waabastagi hissay mei.n aayee hai
keh hum sayyed hai.n humko sarwari hissay mei.n aayee hai

koyee aasaa.n nahi.n hai kaam yaaro shaayeri karna
badi mushkil say yeh deewaangi hissay mei.n aayee hai

bahut rau rau kay maangee rab say humnay fikr ki daulat
khuda kay fazl say yeh aagahi hissay mei.n aayee hai

munaafiq aur zaalim jitnay hai.n is dauray haazir mei.n
enhee.n logo.n kay dekho rahbari hissay mei.n aayee hai

utho aye naujawaanau khwaab say bedaar hau jaao
khudaara mat kaho keh baybasee hissay mei.n aayee hai

nikalta dam hai ab insaaniyat ka kuch karo haamid
bashar yeh keh nah day haiwaanagee hissay mei.n aayee hai



Aapka MukhliS,
Nazir,

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[align=center]mohtaram Hamid bh~aee! :salaam2:

aap ke makhSooS andaz meN aap ka kalam dekh~ne ka sharf mila jo keh baRa pur acar hone ke sath~ sath~ ieeman afrooz bh~ee hai.

aap kee in tamaam kawishooN ka khuda ke HuZ^oor baRa ajar hai.
meree janib se dilee mubarak baad aor dua'aaeeN qubool kijiYe!
:jazax:

Wassalam
muz^affar
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haamid baaqri sb,

ye daikh kar khushi hoee ke aap ke meelan islaahi shairee ki taraf hei. Ye shair bohat khoobsoorat laga,

**koyee aasaa.n nahi.n hai kaam yaaro shaayeri karna
badi mushkil say yeh deewaangi hissay mei.n aayee hai **
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Muzaffar Ahmad Muzaffar wrote:[align=center]mohtaram Hamid bh~aee! :salaam2:

aap ke makhSooS andaz meN aap ka kalam dekh~ne ka sharf mila jo keh baRa pur acar hone ke sath~ sath~ ieeman afrooz bh~ee hai.

aap kee in tamaam kawishooN ka khuda ke HuZ^oor baRa ajar hai.
meree janib se dilee mubarak baad aor dua'aaeeN qubool kijiYe!
:jazax:

Wassalam
muz^affar
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wa alaikumussalaam
muzaffar bhai

aapki purkhuloos daad aur duao.n keliye hum aapkay behad shukrguzaar hai.n.

allah(sbhnwt)aap per apni rehmato.n ki baarish kare.aameen

muklis
haamidbaaqri
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paas mere nahi.n kuch aur mohabbat ke siwa
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Re: Bahut khoob, subhaanallah

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WEBMASTER wrote:
MuHtaramai
Haamid Baaqri SaaHib,

PurkhulooS Tasleemaat,

Aapki mandarja-e-zeil ghazal nazar se guzri jo aapke makhSooS andaz meiN hei aur bahut dilkash hei. Is kaamyaab koushish per meri dili daad aur mubaarakbaad qubool farmaayiye aur :jazax:

rasoolallah(s.a.w.a.w)say waabastagi hissay mei.n aayee hai
keh hum sayyed hai.n humko sarwari hissay mei.n aayee hai

koyee aasaa.n nahi.n hai kaam yaaro shaayeri karna
badi mushkil say yeh deewaangi hissay mei.n aayee hai

bahut rau rau kay maangee rab say humnay fikr ki daulat
khuda kay fazl say yeh aagahi hissay mei.n aayee hai

munaafiq aur zaalim jitnay hai.n is dauray haazir mei.n
enhee.n logo.n kay dekho rahbari hissay mei.n aayee hai

utho aye naujawaanau khwaab say bedaar hau jaao
khudaara mat kaho keh baybasee hissay mei.n aayee hai

nikalta dam hai ab insaaniyat ka kuch karo haamid
bashar yeh keh nah day haiwaanagee hissay mei.n aayee hai



Aapka MukhliS,
Nazir,

salaamun alaikum
mohtaram abdullah nazir saahib

aapki hausalah afzaayee aur mukhlisaanah daad keliye hum aapkay behad mamnoono mashkoor hai.n.

jazakallah
mukhlis
haamidbaaqri
mai.n to karta nahi.n kuch aur ebaadat ke siwa
paas mere nahi.n kuch aur mohabbat ke siwa
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muhammad_19k wrote:haamid baaqri sb,

ye daikh kar khushi hoee ke aap ke meelan islaahi shairee ki taraf hei. Ye shair bohat khoobsoorat laga,

**koyee aasaa.n nahi.n hai kaam yaaro shaayeri karna
badi mushkil say yeh deewaangi hissay mei.n aayee hai **
:salaam2:
mohtarm mohammed saahib

hamaaray adna kalaam kau pasand farmaanay ka bahut bahut shukriya

jazakallah
mukhlis
haamidbaaqri
mai.n to karta nahi.n kuch aur ebaadat ke siwa
paas mere nahi.n kuch aur mohabbat ke siwa
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