meree aor digar ehl-e-bazm kee janib se aap ko meHfil meN tashreef par khushaamdeed.
aap ne meree ma'mulee see koshish ko pasand farma kar mazeed mashq-e-sukhan karne ka HaoSilah a't^a kiYa hai. is ke liye aap ka minnat pazeer hooN. khuda aap ko salamat rakh~e!
ham haiN maqroZ^-e-zeest kuch~ aese
zindagee musta'aar karte haiN.
Qiblah, aap ne is sh'r mein must'ar karte hein kaha hei jabke muhavirah "musta'ar lena" hei.
1,
HuZ^oor is she'er meN farsee maSdar:zindagee kardan: Ya'nee : zindagee karna: kee rie'ayat se :zindagee karte haiN: muraad liya hai. ya'anee ham zindagee karte haiN (guzarte haiN) aor phi~r kis kaefiyat meN karte haiN musta'aar karte hai.
:musta'aar lena bh~ee durust hai. lekin radeef "karte haiN ke taqaZ^ah ko khaat^ir nashaan rakh~te huwe Z^arurat-e-radeef khud is mushkil ka Hal faraham karne kee ehtamaam gar hai. aor Z^aruree naheeN keh mera kheyaal pukhtah ho. mukin hai meree khaam kheYalee ke zer-e-acar aesee taweelaat ban aaeeN haiN. leHaZ^ah in Hawalaajaat se aap ka ittefaaq-e-raeY Z^aruree naheeN.
2,
rang lae gee apnee mae naoshee
jaam par inHeSaar karte haiN.
Aap ne inhisar karte hein likhkha hei jabkike "inhisar houna" saheeh hei.
ise Typo kaha ja sakta hai.
aakhir meN aap ka dobarah marhoon-e-minnat hooN. keh aap ne ne itnee takaash se meree Gazal ka mut^ale'ah kiYa. aor kalam ko pasand farma kar mashkoor huwe!