"kaash"aik aur nazm aapki bacaarato.n ki nazr kar

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"kaash"aik aur nazm aapki bacaarato.n ki nazr kar

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Assalaam o alaikum
dosto

aik taaza nazm aapkay hawaalay

gar qubool uftad zahay.......

arz kiya hai.

"kaash"

"kaash ek aisa sher haujaaye
jis kay padhnay say aik qaari kay
zahn mei.n inquilaab aajaaye
daulatay fikr usko miljaaye
ba'amal ba'waqaar bankar woh
phir say eemaandaar hau jaaye

humko ash'aar say basaana hai
amn kay shahr saari duniya mei.n

yeh dua hai hamaari aye maalik
inquilaabi ho fikr shayer kee
woh jau haqqay qalam ada karde.n
qaum mei.n inquilaab aajaaye
daulatay fikr unko miljaaye
baa'amal ba'waqaar bankar woh
phir say eemaandaar hojaaye.n

''kaash ek aisa sher haujaaye
jis kay padhnay say aik qaari kay
zahn mei.n inquilaab aajaaye"

nateejaye fikr
haamidbaaqri
al hamdulillah
mai.n to karta nahi.n kuch aur ebaadat ke siwa
paas mere nahi.n kuch aur mohabbat ke siwa
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[align=center]moHtaram Hamid bh~aee aadaab! :-)

Ghaleba" pehlee baar aap kee naz^m se mustafeed haone kee taofeeq milee hai. jo keh bohot u'mdah aor pukhtah kaaree par daleel bh~ee hai.
Allah aap ke zaor-e-qalam ko baRh~ata chala jae aor fikr-o-kheYaal kee bulandiYaaN aap ka muqaddar ban jaeeN.


"kaash"

"kaash ek aisa sher haujaaye
jis kay padhnay say aik qaari kay
zahn mei.n inquilaab aajaaye
daulatay fikr usko miljaaye
ba'amal ba'waqaar bankar woh
phir say eemaandaar hau jaaye

waah! waah! =D>

humko ash'aar say basaana hai
amn kay shahr saari duniya mei.n

yeh dua hai hamaari aye maalik
inquilaabi ho fikr shayer kee
woh jau haqqay qalam ada karde.n
qaum mei.n inquilaab aajaaye
daulatay fikr unko miljaaye
baa'amal ba'waqaar bankar woh
phir say eemaandaar hojaaye.n

kiYa kehne!! waah! =D>

''kaash ek aisa sher haujaaye
jis kay padhnay say aik qaari kay
zahn mei.n inquilaab aajaaye"

waah! waah!

is kamyaab kawish par meree dilee dad aor pur khulooS mubarak baad qubool kijiYe!

Wassalam
Muz^affar
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Muzaffar Ahmad Muzaffar wrote:[align=center]moHtaram Hamid bh~aee aadaab! :-)

Ghaleba" pehlee baar aap kee naz^m se mustafeed haone kee taofeeq milee hai. jo keh bohot u'mdah aor pukhtah kaaree par daleel bh~ee hai.
Allah aap ke zaor-e-qalam ko baRh~ata chala jae aor fikr-o-kheYaal kee bulandiYaaN aap ka muqaddar ban jaeeN.


"kaash"

"kaash ek aisa sher haujaaye
jis kay padhnay say aik qaari kay
zahn mei.n inquilaab aajaaye
daulatay fikr usko miljaaye
ba'amal ba'waqaar bankar woh
phir say eemaandaar hau jaaye

waah! waah! =D>

humko ash'aar say basaana hai
amn kay shahr saari duniya mei.n

yeh dua hai hamaari aye maalik
inquilaabi ho fikr shayer kee
woh jau haqqay qalam ada karde.n
qaum mei.n inquilaab aajaaye
daulatay fikr unko miljaaye
baa'amal ba'waqaar bankar woh
phir say eemaandaar hojaaye.n

kiYa kehne!! waah! =D>

''kaash ek aisa sher haujaaye
jis kay padhnay say aik qaari kay
zahn mei.n inquilaab aajaaye"

waah! waah!

is kamyaab kawish par meree dilee dad aor pur khulooS mubarak baad qubool kijiYe!

Wassalam
Muz^affar
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Assalaam o alaikum
muzaffar bhai

aapnay kitni khoobsoorat daad say nawaaza hai hame.n.

aapka yeh andaaz hame.n bahut pasand hai.

hausalah afzaayee ka bahut bahut shukriya.

hamaari mehnat kaargar huee.

allah(sbhnwt)aap per apni rehmato.n ki baarish karay.aameen

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haamidbaaqri
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