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"kaash"aik aur nazm aapki bacaarato.n ki nazr kar
Posted: Fri Jan 05, 2007 2:02 pm
by haamidbaaqri
Assalaam o alaikum
dosto
aik taaza nazm aapkay hawaalay
gar qubool uftad zahay.......
arz kiya hai.
"kaash"
"kaash ek aisa sher haujaaye
jis kay padhnay say aik qaari kay
zahn mei.n inquilaab aajaaye
daulatay fikr usko miljaaye
ba'amal ba'waqaar bankar woh
phir say eemaandaar hau jaaye
humko ash'aar say basaana hai
amn kay shahr saari duniya mei.n
yeh dua hai hamaari aye maalik
inquilaabi ho fikr shayer kee
woh jau haqqay qalam ada karde.n
qaum mei.n inquilaab aajaaye
daulatay fikr unko miljaaye
baa'amal ba'waqaar bankar woh
phir say eemaandaar hojaaye.n
''kaash ek aisa sher haujaaye
jis kay padhnay say aik qaari kay
zahn mei.n inquilaab aajaaye"
nateejaye fikr
haamidbaaqri
al hamdulillah
Posted: Fri Jan 05, 2007 7:27 pm
by Muzaffar Ahmad Muzaffar
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moHtaram Hamid bh~aee aadaab!
Ghaleba" pehlee baar aap kee naz^m se mustafeed haone kee taofeeq milee hai. jo keh bohot u'mdah aor pukhtah kaaree par daleel bh~ee hai.
Allah aap ke zaor-e-qalam ko baRh~ata chala jae aor fikr-o-kheYaal kee bulandiYaaN aap ka muqaddar ban jaeeN.
"kaash"
"kaash ek aisa sher haujaaye
jis kay padhnay say aik qaari kay
zahn mei.n inquilaab aajaaye
daulatay fikr usko miljaaye
ba'amal ba'waqaar bankar woh
phir say eemaandaar hau jaaye
waah! waah! =D>
humko ash'aar say basaana hai
amn kay shahr saari duniya mei.n
yeh dua hai hamaari aye maalik
inquilaabi ho fikr shayer kee
woh jau haqqay qalam ada karde.n
qaum mei.n inquilaab aajaaye
daulatay fikr unko miljaaye
baa'amal ba'waqaar bankar woh
phir say eemaandaar hojaaye.n
kiYa kehne!! waah! =D>
''kaash ek aisa sher haujaaye
jis kay padhnay say aik qaari kay
zahn mei.n inquilaab aajaaye"
waah! waah!
is kamyaab kawish par meree dilee dad aor pur khulooS mubarak baad qubool kijiYe!
Wassalam
Muz^affar[/align]
shukriya
Posted: Sat Jan 06, 2007 4:58 am
by haamidbaaqri
Muzaffar Ahmad Muzaffar wrote:[align=center]
moHtaram Hamid bh~aee aadaab!
Ghaleba" pehlee baar aap kee naz^m se mustafeed haone kee taofeeq milee hai. jo keh bohot u'mdah aor pukhtah kaaree par daleel bh~ee hai.
Allah aap ke zaor-e-qalam ko baRh~ata chala jae aor fikr-o-kheYaal kee bulandiYaaN aap ka muqaddar ban jaeeN.
"kaash"
"kaash ek aisa sher haujaaye
jis kay padhnay say aik qaari kay
zahn mei.n inquilaab aajaaye
daulatay fikr usko miljaaye
ba'amal ba'waqaar bankar woh
phir say eemaandaar hau jaaye
waah! waah! =D>
humko ash'aar say basaana hai
amn kay shahr saari duniya mei.n
yeh dua hai hamaari aye maalik
inquilaabi ho fikr shayer kee
woh jau haqqay qalam ada karde.n
qaum mei.n inquilaab aajaaye
daulatay fikr unko miljaaye
baa'amal ba'waqaar bankar woh
phir say eemaandaar hojaaye.n
kiYa kehne!! waah! =D>
''kaash ek aisa sher haujaaye
jis kay padhnay say aik qaari kay
zahn mei.n inquilaab aajaaye"
waah! waah!
is kamyaab kawish par meree dilee dad aor pur khulooS mubarak baad qubool kijiYe!
Wassalam
Muz^affar[/align]
Assalaam o alaikum
muzaffar bhai
aapnay kitni khoobsoorat daad say nawaaza hai hame.n.
aapka yeh andaaz hame.n bahut pasand hai.
hausalah afzaayee ka bahut bahut shukriya.
hamaari mehnat kaargar huee.
allah(sbhnwt)aap per apni rehmato.n ki baarish karay.aameen
mukhlis
haamidbaaqri