Aapki ghazal pasand aayi jiske liye meri dili daad aur mubaarakbaad qubool farmaayiye.
MULAAHIZAAT:
Sab se pahle is ghazal kee beHr kaa taAayyun aapke hee aek miSreA se kartaa hooN.
"gham chupaakar muskuraanaa chaahiye"
iskaa vazn hei: faa'ilaa'tun…faa'ilaa'tun…faa'ilun
=/0//0/0…/0//0/0…/0//0
=2122……..2122………212
ooper diye houe miSreA kee taqseem yuN hougi:
gham chupaaker ….. muskuraanaa…… chaahiye
Note: Radeef "chaayiye" aakhiri rukn "faa'ilun" kee jagah aarahi hei. Is TaraH se ghazal kehne meiN ziyaadah diqqat nahiN pesh aati hei.
keh dil k TooTne ko ikk bahaana chaahiye
mohabbtoN ko nahiN aazmaanah chaahiye
pahle miSreA ke shurooA meiN "keh" likhne se aapki muraad hei ke isko yuN paRhaa jaaye "kay" aur aisaa isteAmaal nahiN houtaa hei balkeh "k" + zer hee houtaa hei. Isi bunyaad per aapke miSreA kaa vazn hougaa:
=/0/0//0 = "keh dil k'Too" = mus'taf'ilun
, //0/0/0 = "T'ne ko'ik" = "mufaa'ee'lun"
. //0/0 = "bahaanah" = "f'Aoo"lun"
,/0//0 = "chaa'hiye" = "faa'ilun"
Iske maAni yeh houe ke aap is beHr per qaaboo nahiN paasakeeN.
Ab "faa'ilaa'tun" ke vazn per ghaur keejiye ke iske mumaacil kyaa alfaaz housakte heiN:
Mical ke Taur per (kyaa kareN ham, kuch nahiN hei, teri'khaa'Tir, ham's'pahle, zin'dagaa'ni, dil'k'baateN, kyaa'sunaa'eN, us'n'samjhaa, kyaa houaa thaa) waghairah. Agar aapko is BeHr per qaaboo paanaa hou tou pahle aise hee kayee alfaaz "faa'ilaa'tun" ke vazn per jamA kareN. Is beHr meiN 2 rukn "faa'ilaa'tun" heiN aur aek "faa'i'lun".
Ab aapke maTleA ke doosre miSreA ko dekhiye: mohabbtoN ko nahiN aazmaanah chaahiye
muHabbatoN = //0//0 = mufaa'ilun
ko nahiN aa = /0//0/0 = faa'ilaa'tun
z'maa'naa = //0/0 = f'Aoo'lun
chaa hiye = faa'ilun
Is TaraH se yeh miSraA bhee beHr se khaarij hougayaa hei. Baaqi ashAar ke baare meiN Sirf yeh likhoongaa ke BeHr meiN hei yaa BeHr se khaarij hei:
Aapki ghazal pasand aayi jiske liye meri dili daad aur mubaarakbaad qubool farmaayiye.
MULAAHIZAAT:
Sab se pahle is ghazal kee beHr kaa taAayyun aapke hee aek miSreA se kartaa hooN.
"gham chupaakar muskuraanaa chaahiye"
iskaa vazn hei: faa'ilaa'tun…faa'ilaa'tun…faa'ilun
=/0//0/0…/0//0/0…/0//0
=2122……..2122………212
ooper diye houe miSreA kee taqseem yuN hougi:
gham chupaaker ….. muskuraanaa…… chaahiye
Note: Radeef "chaayiye" aakhiri rukn "faa'ilun" kee jagah aarahi hei. Is TaraH se ghazal kehne meiN ziyaadah diqqat nahiN pesh aati hei.
keh dil k TooTne ko ikk bahaana chaahiye
mohabbtoN ko nahiN aazmaanah chaahiye
pahle miSreA ke shurooA meiN "keh" likhne se aapki muraad hei ke isko yuN paRhaa jaaye "kay" aur aisaa isteAmaal nahiN houtaa hei balkeh "k" + zer hee houtaa hei. Isi bunyaad per aapke miSreA kaa vazn hougaa:
=/0/0//0 = "keh dil k'Too" = mus'taf'ilun
, //0/0/0 = "T'ne ko'ik" = "mufaa'ee'lun"
. //0/0 = "bahaanah" = "f'Aoo"lun"
,/0//0 = "chaa'hiye" = "faa'ilun"
Iske maAni yeh houe ke aap is beHr per qaaboo nahiN paasakeeN.
Ab "faa'ilaa'tun" ke vazn per ghaur keejiye ke iske mumaacil kyaa alfaaz housakte heiN:
Mical ke Taur per (kyaa kareN ham, kuch nahiN hei, teri'khaa'Tir, ham's'pahle, zin'dagaa'ni, dil'k'baateN, kyaa'sunaa'eN, us'n'samjhaa, kyaa houaa thaa) waghairah. Agar aapko is BeHr per qaaboo paanaa hou tou pahle aise hee kayee alfaaz "faa'ilaa'tun" ke vazn per jamA kareN. Is beHr meiN 2 rukn "faa'ilaa'tun" heiN aur aek "faa'i'lun".
Ab aapke maTleA ke doosre miSreA ko dekhiye: mohabbtoN ko nahiN aazmaanah chaahiye
muHabbatoN = //0//0 = mufaa'ilun
ko nahiN aa = /0//0/0 = faa'ilaa'tun
z'maa'naa = //0/0 = f'Aoo'lun
chaa hiye = faa'ilun
Is TaraH se yeh miSraA bhee beHr se khaarij hougayaa hei. Baaqi ashAar ke baare meiN Sirf yeh likhoongaa ke BeHr meiN hei yaa BeHr se khaarij hei:
aap ki es inaayat per dil kee geraaiyoN se mamnoon-o-mutashakkir hooN. :rose
aap k tabSirae ki raushnee maiN
ghazal ki Surat kuch yuN huee hai. pehle misrae ko agar yuN likhoN tau kayaa yeh Surat Theek ho gee
dil TooTne ko ikk behaanah chaahiye
mohabbat ko nahiN aazmanah chaahiye
Note: MaTleA ko yuN kardeejiye: TooTne ko ik bahaana chaahiye
yuN nah dil ko aazmaana chaahiye
Nazir.
mujhay in forums ne bohat kuch sikhaaya hai jo aap jaise feraakh dil aur Urdu se payaar kerna waale Hazaraat ki merhoon-e-minnat hai. Jazaakomullaho Khairaa