"mira mukhticar yeh shabaab hai"taza tarhi ghazal

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"mira mukhticar yeh shabaab hai"taza tarhi ghazal

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dosto

taza tarhi ghazal hum aapki bacaaratoN kay hawaalay kar rahay haiN.

gar qubool uftad zahay.....

arz kiya hai......

maiN hoon kaun,kya haooN,kahaaN hooN maiN,mujhay chaahiye yeh jawaab hai
miree zeest miclay hubaab hai,mira mukhticar yeh shabaab hai

aye hawaa bataaday tu kaun hai ,nahiN aati kyuN tu mujhay nazar
tire dam say mera wujood hai, tu nahiN tau zindagi khwaab hai

woh zameeN pe hoN ya tahay zameeN,unheN zindah rehnay kay waastay
nah samajh saka maiN yeh aaj tak,kyuN hawa kay baad yeh aab hai

jahaaN dekho nazm hi nazm hai,yeh nizaam kaisa nizaam hai
"nah kalaam hai nah payaam hai,nah sawaal hai nah jawaab hai"

suno mere haamid e baaqari,keh banaaya tumko hai jisnay bhi
woh hai aik us saa nahiN koyee,tumheN dena uskau hisaab hai

nateejaye fikr
haamidbaaqri
al hamdulillah
mai.n to karta nahi.n kuch aur ebaadat ke siwa
paas mere nahi.n kuch aur mohabbat ke siwa
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Janab Hamid Baaqri Saheb

Kya hi khoob beHr meiN ghazal likh daali hai aap ne. mubarakbaad qabool kijiaye. ye beHr mujhe sab se ziadaa dilkash lagti hai.

meiN hoon kaun,kya haooN,kahaaN hooN maiN,mujhay chaahiye yeh jawaab hai
miree zeest miclay hubaab hai,mira mukhticar yeh shabaab hai


bohat khoob. pehle miSra par agar kuch aor meHnat ho jaa-aye to sh'aer ka Husn baRh jaa-aye ga.

aye hawaa bataaday tu kaun hai ,nahiN aati kyuN tu mujhay nazar
tire dam say mera wujood hai, tu nahiN tau zindagi khwaab hai


pehlay miSra ka dooSra hiSSA naheeN aati kyooN to mujhe nazar ko agar too mujhe nazar naheeN aati kyooN? kar diyaa jaa-aye toa?

aor aisaa nazar aataa hai ke hawaa meiN koi kanyaa naheeN hai oar baat hawaa ki hi ho rahi hai to phir dooSre miSraa meiN agar wujood ki jagaa agar kissi taraH saans ka zikr kiyaa jaa-aye to kiyaa rabt ziadaa gehraa naheeN ho jaa-aye gaa?

aye hawaa bataaday tu kaun hai ,too mujhe nazar naheeN aati kyooN
tire dam say hi mira saans hai, tu nahiN tau zindagi khwaab hai


woh zameeN pe hoN ya tahay zameeN,unheN zindah rehnay kay waastay
nah samajh saka maiN yeh aaj tak,kyuN hawa kay baad yeh aab hai


miray khyaal meiN ishaara bohat bareek hai.


jahaaN dekho nazm hi nazm hai,yeh nizaam kaisa nizaam hai
"nah kalaam hai nah payaam hai,nah sawaal hai nah jawaab hai"


bohat khoob janab!

suno mere haamid e baaqari,keh banaaya tumko hai jisnay bhi
woh hai aik us saa nahiN koyee,tumheN dena uskau hisaab hai


bohat khoob janab,

aap ka mukhliS,
Muhamamd K. Siddiqui.
Muhammad K. Siddiqui.
+92 321 4435273

938-C-Faisal Town, Lahore.
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muhammad_19k wrote:Janab Hamid Baaqri Saheb

Kya hi khoob beHr meiN ghazal likh daali hai aap ne. mubarakbaad qabool kijiaye. ye beHr mujhe sab se ziadaa dilkash lagti hai.

meiN hoon kaun,kya haooN,kahaaN hooN maiN,mujhay chaahiye yeh jawaab hai
miree zeest miclay hubaab hai,mira mukhticar yeh shabaab hai


bohat khoob. pehle miSra par agar kuch aor meHnat ho jaa-aye to sh'aer ka Husn baRh jaa-aye ga.

aye hawaa bataaday tu kaun hai ,nahiN aati kyuN tu mujhay nazar
tire dam say mera wujood hai, tu nahiN tau zindagi khwaab hai


pehlay miSra ka dooSra hiSSA naheeN aati kyooN to mujhe nazar ko agar too mujhe nazar naheeN aati kyooN? kar diyaa jaa-aye toa?

aor aisaa nazar aataa hai ke hawaa meiN koi kanyaa naheeN hai oar baat hawaa ki hi ho rahi hai to phir dooSre miSraa meiN agar wujood ki jagaa agar kissi taraH saans ka zikr kiyaa jaa-aye to kiyaa rabt ziadaa gehraa naheeN ho jaa-aye gaa?

aye hawaa bataaday tu kaun hai ,too mujhe nazar naheeN aati kyooN
tire dam say hi mira saans hai, tu nahiN tau zindagi khwaab hai


woh zameeN pe hoN ya tahay zameeN,unheN zindah rehnay kay waastay
nah samajh saka maiN yeh aaj tak,kyuN hawa kay baad yeh aab hai


miray khyaal meiN ishaara bohat bareek hai.


jahaaN dekho nazm hi nazm hai,yeh nizaam kaisa nizaam hai
"nah kalaam hai nah payaam hai,nah sawaal hai nah jawaab hai"


bohat khoob janab!

suno mere haamid e baaqari,keh banaaya tumko hai jisnay bhi
woh hai aik us saa nahiN koyee,tumheN dena uskau hisaab hai


bohat khoob janab,

aap ka mukhliS,
Muhamamd K. Siddiqui.
mohtaram mohammed khawar saahib
Asslaam o alaikum

aapki purkhuloos daad ka hum tahe dil se shukriya ada karte haiN.

aapka mashwara sar aankhoN per.insha allah hum is per ghaur kerenge.

aapnay hamaare adna kalaam ko apne tabsere ke qaabil samjha yahi hamaaray liye khushee ka baaic hai.


der say jawaab denekeliye hum muaazirat chaahte haiN.

jazakallah
mukhlis
haamidbaaqri
mai.n to karta nahi.n kuch aur ebaadat ke siwa
paas mere nahi.n kuch aur mohabbat ke siwa
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