tanhaee main aik mukalim

[Dawood_Rizwan]

aik nazm paish hay. aap ki ra,ay ka intizar rahay ga.

[naheedv]

aik nazm paish hay. aap ki ra,ay ka intizar rahay ga.

Rizwan ji,

waah, buhat hi khoob aur buhat hi umdah!

aap ne aik ch`oTi si soch ko buhat hi pukhtagee se nazm kiyaa hai aur yahi aap ki shaa'iree kaa khaaSa rahaa hai. bilaa.shuba nazm ke maidan ke aap maahir kh`ilaaRi heiN.

aaj kal lagtaa hai aap kee takhleeqi SalaahiyateN urooj par heiN :)

iss haseen kaavish par daad paish karti hooN!

mukhliS
Naheed

[Dawood_Rizwan]

Wow! aek aur khoobsurat takhleeq........waah Riz ji bohat khoob!

"voh khushbu ki kalyaaN
mehekne se pehle hi murjha gayein hain
gulabon ke khilne ki naubat nahin aa saki hai
abhi se bahaarein
khizaan ki adavat ka
kyunker nishana bani hain"

bohat khoob! bohat saari daad qubool keejiye.

sara

sara g nazam pasand karnay ka shukriya.

[Dawood_Rizwan]

aik nazm paish hay. aap ki ra,ay ka intizar rahay ga.

Rizwan ji,

waah, buhat hi khoob aur buhat hi umdah!

aap ne aik ch`oTi si soch ko buhat hi pukhtagee se nazm kiyaa hai aur yahi aap ki shaa'iree kaa khaaSa rahaa hai. bilaa.shuba nazm ke maidan ke aap maahir kh`ilaaRi heiN.

aaj kal lagtaa hai aap kee takhleeqi SalaahiyateN urooj par heiN :)

iss haseen kaavish par daad paish karti hooN!

mukhliS
Naheed

naheed ji khilaRi too nahi aik adna sa talb a ilm hoon. koshish hooti hay ka kisi Zati tajurbay ko Zat say baRha ka buhat say loogoon ko sahre karwa sakoon. pata nahi kamyabi hooti hay ya nahi ????
ham sahiroon kay pass alfaz kay siwa hoota hi ki hay. koo chooT parTi hay too kuch misray kuch lainay hoo jati hain. kabhi unhain ghazal kah daytay hain kabhi namz warna ya too ........................
nazm aur ghazal hamaray bas main kahna

rizwan