bohat khoob janab

aisi shaandaar ghazal par bhalaa aap ko mubaarakbad na paise ki jaa-aye to kyaa kiaa jaa-aye? . zydaa khushi ki baat ye rahi ki tamaam ashaar aik hi standard par meHsoos huway jis se aap ki khonaa mashqi ka pataa chaltaa hai. darj zail sher mujhe sub se zydaa pasand aayaa.

lout aayaa hooN pardes ke zindaaN meN phir,
dil pe rishtoN ka baRa bojh uThaa-aye ghar se

umeed hai ke aap iss taraH apne kalaam se mustafeed farmateN rahaiN geN,

shukriya,

Muhammad K. Siddiqui.

muhammad_19k wrote: bohat khoob janab

aisi shaandaar ghazal par bhalaa aap ko mubaarakbad na paise ki jaa-aye to kyaa kiaa jaa-aye? . zydaa khushi ki baat ye rahi ki tamaam ashaar aik hi standard par meHsoos huway jis se aap ki khonaa mashqi ka pataa chaltaa hai. darj zail sher mujhe sub se zydaa pasand aayaa.

lout aayaa hooN pardes ke zindaaN meN phir,
dil pe rishtoN ka baRa bojh uThaa-aye ghar se

umeed hai ke aap iss taraH apne kalaam se mustafeed farmateN rahaiN geN,

shukriya,

Muhammad K. Siddiqui.

Janab Muhammad K. Siddiqui SaHib

sub say pahlay to main aap kay "instant" reply ka shukriya aada karna chahoonga......bahut bahut shukriya janab...

ghazal ki pasandeedgii aur pazarayii ka shukriya.....

quote karda shair ki bil khusoos pasandeedii per mamnoon hoon....ummid hai aap isi tarh himmat afzayii farmatay raheeNgaye...

waisay ik baat aur ki main abhi tilf-e-maktab hoon...
aap ki muhabbat o eenayat ka bhaut bahut shukriya..


Jazakallahu khaira..

farhan

Muhtaram Sara SaHiba

salam o rahmat

ghazal ki pasandeedgii ka bahut bahut shukriya.....ummid hai aap isi tarah housla afzayii farmati raheeNgii...

daad kay liye mamnoon hooN..

Farhan