Insaan

[tahira Masood]

insaan
ashraf-ul-makhluqaat
akhlaaq ,aHsaas aur reh'm kaa majmuaa
tehzeeb-o-tamddun kaa manba-o-makhiz
masjud-e-malaaik?
jab apne maqaam se girtaa hai tau
drindoN aur HaiwaanoN ko bhi maat de jaata hai
uff yeh insaan

[Muzaffar Ahmad Muzaffar]

moHtarmah T^ahirah masa'ood SaaHibah aadaab!

aap kee nazm dekhee mashAllah bohot khubSurat koshish hai. Aap ko Ghazal ke saath saath nazm par bhee dastaras HaaSil hai. saadah alfaaz^ meN mudda'aa keh denaa zeyadah mushkil hotaa hai. aor khuSuSa" jab sehl-e-mumtina' ke daaei'rah meN reh kar she'er kehnaa hooN to aor zeyadah mushkil ho jataa hai.

insaan
ashraf-ul-makhluqaat
akhlaaq ,aHsaas aur reh'm kaa majmuaa
tehzeeb-o-tamddun kaa manba-o-makhiz
masjud-e-malaaik?
jab apne maqaam se girtaa hai tau
drindoN aur HaiwaanoN ko bhi maat de jaata hai
uff yeh insaan

Kiyaa kehne!!

is khubSurat nazm par meree dilee daad aor mubarak baad qubool keejiye!
khush raheeN
Wassalam
Muzaffar A Muzaffar

[tahira Masood]

MUzaffar bha'ee

salaam

aap ne mairee is saadah si nazm ko jis khoobSurat apzeera'ee se nawaaz hai woh maire liye nehaayat khsuh kun hai

aayndah bhi HauSlah afaz'ee fermaate rehiye gaa

aaj bohat dinoN k ba'd is teraf aana huaa hai is liye ajwaab takheer se de rehi hoN

wassalam