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guzarish 42# k liye aik koshish hazir hai
Posted: Thu Jul 10, 2008 11:40 am
by mujahid
salam
Re: guzarish 42# k liye aik koshish hazir hai
Posted: Sat Jul 12, 2008 1:39 pm
by Khurshidul Hasan Naiyer
muHtaram mujahid Sb
assalaam a'laikum
bahut achhee Ghazal kahee hai aap ne. daad or mubaarakbaad Haz^ir hai qubool farmaayen
khair aNdesh
Khurshidul H. Naiyer
Re: guzarish 42# k liye aik koshish hazir hai
Posted: Sun Jul 13, 2008 12:12 am
by Muzaffar Ahmad Muzaffar
moHtaram Mujahid Khan SaaHib tasleemaat!
rawaaN mushae'rah Guzarish#42 ke liye aa ke asha'aar laai'q daad-o-teHseen haiN. so meree jaanib se dilee daad qubool keejiye. mushae'rah meN aap kee shirkat ham sab ke liye khushee kaa baae'c hai. aap kaa be Had shukriyah!
agarcheh Ghazal kee yeh Surat apnee jagah dilkash aor HaseeN hai. lekin aap ne radeef :naz^ar aaee: ko :naz^ar aaeY: likhaa hai. ya'nee miSra'-e-t^arH ko yooN likhaa aor deegar ashaa'r bhee us kee perawee meN yooN likhe gae haiN jesaa ke Mir kaa aSal miSra' hai. "shaayad keh bahaar :aaee: zanjeer naz^ar :aaee:" donooN jagah par aap ne :aaee: ko :aaeY: likhaa hai. khaer aap dekh leejiye gaa.
Wassalam
Muzaffar A Muzaffar
Re: guzarish 42# k liye aik koshish hazir hai
Posted: Sat Jul 26, 2008 3:04 pm
by Khurshidul Hasan Naiyer
muHtaram Jb. Mujahid Sb
Salaam-o-raHmah
ek achhee Ghazal pah daad qubool farmaaeN
khair aNdesh
Khurshidul H. Naiyer