Mohataram Janab Afzal Saaheb,

Masha'Allah aapki ghazal nehayat hi shaandaar aur laajawaab hai khaas kar mujhe ye ashaar behad pasand aaye:

Hawaadis zindagaani ke main aksar taal leta hoon
Kisi ki meherbaani se, kisi par meherbaan ho kar

Aur yeh sher (Maqta).... bohat bohat aur bohat hi khoob hai...

Usi Tootii hoyi kashtii ka 'Afzal' Naa-khuda hooN maiN
Dooboya jis ko Ik Qatre ne Bahr-e-BekaraaN ho kar


Taalib-e-dua,

Munir Armaan