EK GHAZAL=SUNTE HAIN, RAQEEBON SE MULAAQAAT KARO HO
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EK GHAZAL=SUNTE HAIN, RAQEEBON SE MULAAQAAT KARO HO
sathiyo!
aadaab!
ek ghazal ap sab ki nazr hay, pasand aey to zaroor aaggah farmaiye.
asaatizah-kiraam ki raey ki bhi muntazor rahoongii.
khair andesh
najma
arz hay
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saathiyo!
aadaab
aap meiN se kuch saathii hamarii ghazal ko urdu
hamarre kuch saathiyoN, khusuusi taur pe waqar sahib najm sahib aur khurram ko hamari ye ghazal urdu meiN nazar nahii aasakii, lihaza ab ham, un ke hukm ki ta,meel meiN, ise roman meiN bhi pesh kar rahay haiN.
sunte haiN, raqeeboN se mulaaqaat karo ho
phir jee ko jalane ki wohii baat karo ho
mazloom ko soolii pe chaRhaa dete haiN haalaat
aiy dosto! kya shikwa-e-haalaat karo ho
karne ko maiN wa,doN pe yaqeeN kalooN tumhaare
har roz magar tum to naee baat karo ho
is darjah sulagte huey mausim meiN bhi logo!
zondah ho agar tum, to karamaat karo ho
jannat se nikaale huey insaan ke beTo!
dunyaa ko bhi dunyaa-e-kharaabaat karo ho
apnoN ki sii chaahat hay na GhairoN ki sii nafrat
dunya se niraalii hiihar-ik baat karo ho
saawan ka guzartaa hua baadal tha wo NAJMA!
tum jis ke liye ash,koN ki barsaat karo ho
NAJMA ANSAR NAJMA
aadaab!
ek ghazal ap sab ki nazr hay, pasand aey to zaroor aaggah farmaiye.
asaatizah-kiraam ki raey ki bhi muntazor rahoongii.
khair andesh
najma
arz hay
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saathiyo!
aadaab
aap meiN se kuch saathii hamarii ghazal ko urdu
hamarre kuch saathiyoN, khusuusi taur pe waqar sahib najm sahib aur khurram ko hamari ye ghazal urdu meiN nazar nahii aasakii, lihaza ab ham, un ke hukm ki ta,meel meiN, ise roman meiN bhi pesh kar rahay haiN.
sunte haiN, raqeeboN se mulaaqaat karo ho
phir jee ko jalane ki wohii baat karo ho
mazloom ko soolii pe chaRhaa dete haiN haalaat
aiy dosto! kya shikwa-e-haalaat karo ho
karne ko maiN wa,doN pe yaqeeN kalooN tumhaare
har roz magar tum to naee baat karo ho
is darjah sulagte huey mausim meiN bhi logo!
zondah ho agar tum, to karamaat karo ho
jannat se nikaale huey insaan ke beTo!
dunyaa ko bhi dunyaa-e-kharaabaat karo ho
apnoN ki sii chaahat hay na GhairoN ki sii nafrat
dunya se niraalii hiihar-ik baat karo ho
saawan ka guzartaa hua baadal tha wo NAJMA!
tum jis ke liye ash,koN ki barsaat karo ho
NAJMA ANSAR NAJMA
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Dear Najma jee,
aadaab,
aap kee ghazal paRh kar mohtaram buzrug shaa'ir Kaleem Ajiz kee aik ghazal yaad aa ga'ee jiss kee bhee yahee zameen thee, voh ghazal tau mujhe yaad naheeN hai magar aik she'r kaa aik misra' yaad hai jo ke kuch yooN hai shaayad:
"daaman pe koyee daagh...........
tum qatl karo ho yaa karaamaat karo ho"
aap kee ghazal pasaNd aayee aur khar taur par matla' buhat khoob hai,
daad qubool kijiye!
mukhliS
Naheed
aadaab,
aap kee ghazal paRh kar mohtaram buzrug shaa'ir Kaleem Ajiz kee aik ghazal yaad aa ga'ee jiss kee bhee yahee zameen thee, voh ghazal tau mujhe yaad naheeN hai magar aik she'r kaa aik misra' yaad hai jo ke kuch yooN hai shaayad:
"daaman pe koyee daagh...........
tum qatl karo ho yaa karaamaat karo ho"
aap kee ghazal pasaNd aayee aur khar taur par matla' buhat khoob hai,
daad qubool kijiye!
mukhliS
Naheed
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Najma baji
salaam arz hai
aap ki ye ghazal dekhi aur bahot pasand aayee
matle ke misra-e-caani meiN "vohi" munasib nahin lag rahaa, ye sirf meri zaati raaye hai jo ghalat bhi ho sakti hai ;)
she'r no. 2 aur teen to paRh ker lutf aa gayaa :
mazloom ko sooli pe chaRhaa dete haiN Haalaat
ae dosto !! kia shikva-e-haalaat karo ho
karne ko yaqeeN kar looN maiN baatoN pe tumhaari
her roz magar tum to nayee baat karo ho
bahot khoob, deegar ash'aar bhi pasand aaye, maqta bhi khoob hai :)
amjad
salaam arz hai
aap ki ye ghazal dekhi aur bahot pasand aayee
matle ke misra-e-caani meiN "vohi" munasib nahin lag rahaa, ye sirf meri zaati raaye hai jo ghalat bhi ho sakti hai ;)
she'r no. 2 aur teen to paRh ker lutf aa gayaa :
mazloom ko sooli pe chaRhaa dete haiN Haalaat
ae dosto !! kia shikva-e-haalaat karo ho
karne ko yaqeeN kar looN maiN baatoN pe tumhaari
her roz magar tum to nayee baat karo ho
bahot khoob, deegar ash'aar bhi pasand aaye, maqta bhi khoob hai :)
amjad
Mire ash'aar ae Iqbal kyuN pyaare na hoN mujhko
mire TooTe hue dil ke ye dard.angez naale haiN
mire TooTe hue dil ke ye dard.angez naale haiN
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Ibn-e-siddique wrote:Najma baji
salaam arz hai
aap ki ye ghazal dekhi aur bahot pasand aayee
matle ke misra-e-caani meiN "vohi" munasib nahin lag rahaa, ye sirf meri zaati raaye hai jo ghalat bhi ho sakti hai ;)
she'r no. 2 aur teen to paRh ker lutf aa gayaa :
mazloom ko sooli pe chaRhaa dete haiN Haalaat
ae dosto !! kia shikva-e-haalaat karo ho
karne ko yaqeeN kar looN maiN baatoN pe tumhaari
her roz magar tum to nayee baat karo ho
bahot khoob, deegar ash'aar bhi pasand aaye, maqta bhi khoob hai :)
amjad
azizam amjad!
((matle ke misra-e-caani meiN "vohi" munasib nahin lag rahaa, ye sirf meri zaati raaye hai jo ghalat bhi ho sakti hai ;)))
shukriya. maiN is ke bare meiN sochoongii
aur baqi jo ash,aar aap ko pasand aey, main mamnoon hooN.
hausla-afzaaee ka bohat shukriya
khush rahiye
ab shukriya meiN aur kya kahooN?
kuch phool pesh karooN?
lol
lijiye
hazaroN----------lol
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waqar_masood wrote:najma ji abhi bhi nazar nahi a rehi ..ab to mein log in ho ker aya hoon phir bhi....................
herat hay waqar sahib!
auroN ko to nazar araha hay aur reply bhi kiya .
ek baat poochooN?
aap ne apne interner service k wajibaat ada kiye haiN ya naheeN :P
khair---mazaq bar-taraf
waqaee he herat ki baat hay.
deegar nazireen se guzarish hay keh agar unko nazar araha hay to bataiye pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeezzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz
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Re: EK GHAZAL=SUNTE HAIN, RAQEEBON SE MULAAQAAT KARO HO
najma wrote:sathiyo!
aadaab!
ek ghazal ap sab ki nazr hay, pasand aey to zaroor aaggah farmaiye.
asaatizah-kiraam ki raey ki bhi muntazor rahoongii.
khair andesh
najma
arz hay
Assalaam o alekum,
Najma baaaji aapki yeh ghazal sabko nazer aarahi lekin mujhe kyoon nazer nahin aarahi ???
RISK IS MY BUSINESS
DANGER IS MY GAME
DONT PLAY WITH ME
BCOZ KHURRAM IS MY NAME
DANGER IS MY GAME
DONT PLAY WITH ME
BCOZ KHURRAM IS MY NAME
Re: EK GHAZAL=SUNTE HAIN, RAQEEBON SE MULAAQAAT KARO HO
khurram_shaikh wrote:najma wrote:sathiyo!
aadaab!
ek ghazal ap sab ki nazr hay, pasand aey to zaroor aaggah farmaiye.
asaatizah-kiraam ki raey ki bhi muntazor rahoongii.
khair andesh
najma
arz hay
Assalaam o alekum,
Najma baaaji aapki yeh ghazal sabko nazer aarahi lekin mujhe kyoon nazer nahin aarahi ???
khurram!
sorry, keh apko nazar nahii aarahii.chashma laga ke dekhiye shayad------
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MuHtarama
Najma Saahibah,
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Aapka Mukhlis,
Nazir.