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by Anmol
Sat Jul 31, 2010 5:48 pm
Forum: Abu Tariq Hijazi
Topic: دوستی کی خاطر :: ابو طارق حجازی
Replies: 4
Views: 1532

Re: دوستی کی خاطر :: ابو طارق حجازی

bahut Khoob.

Allah sab ko apni dosti aur muhabbat ke jazbe se sarfaraaz kare, ameen.

Abu Tariq Hijazi SaaHib, aap ki tehreer bahut umda hai.

anmol
by Anmol
Fri Jul 09, 2010 11:21 am
Forum: Urdu Adabi KhabreN
Topic: Raj Kumar SaaHib
Replies: 0
Views: 313

Raj Kumar SaaHib

aadaab!

Raj Kumar SaaHib ka kalaam paRhne ke liye is link per jayye.

http://rk-qais.bravehost.com/

Guestbook meiN apne comments dena mat bhooliye ga.

Anmol
by Anmol
Sat Jun 07, 2008 5:55 pm
Forum: Kalaam-e-Sukhanwar
Topic: Ghazal _ khataoN ki baateN
Replies: 9
Views: 825

Re: Ghazal _ khataoN ki baateN

Sohail SaaHib, aadaab! bhulaate nahiiN kyooN Khataa'oN ki baateN kiye ja rahay ho sazaa'oN ki baateN matla bahut pasand aaya. mujhe apna aik she'r yaad aa gaya, woh kyooN ranjishoN ko hawa de raha hai usey yaad kyooN haiN bhulaane ki baateN ---- by Ayesha :Anmol: junooN ke hawaale Khudii jab se ki ...
by Anmol
Sat Jun 07, 2008 5:36 pm
Forum: Kalaam-e-Sukhanwar
Topic: Nazm.......!!
Replies: 8
Views: 741

Re: Nazm.......!!

Dear Sara,

tumhaari nazm mujhe bahut pasand aayi, khusoosan aakhri 4 lines behad achchhi lageeN.

meri jaanib se daad qubool karo.

Anmol
by Anmol
Sat Jun 07, 2008 1:38 pm
Forum: Kalaam-e-Sukhanwar
Topic: raasta to ho
Replies: 3
Views: 269

Re: raasta to ho

Aadaab, Razi SaaHib!

aap ki ghazal bahut pasand aayi, daad qubool kijiye!

Anmol
by Anmol
Sat Jun 07, 2008 1:36 pm
Forum: Kalaam-e-Sukhanwar
Topic: Ghazal -- mumkin nahiN hay rokni yalghaar e media
Replies: 7
Views: 855

Re: Ghazal -- mumkin nahiN hay rokni yalghaar e media

Sohail SaaHib, aadaab!

aap ki ye munfarid si ghazal mujhe pasand aayi. aap ne bilkul sachchi aur khari baateN kahi haiN.

daad qubool kijiye!

Anmol
by Anmol
Sat Jun 07, 2008 1:28 pm
Forum: Kalaam-e-Sukhanwar
Topic: gazal .
Replies: 6
Views: 447

Re: gazal .

Muzaffar SaaHib, ye ghazal Sohail SaaHib ki nahiiN, balke Dilshad SaaHib ki hai.

Dilshad SaaHib, aadaab!

ye ghazal aap ke maKhsoos rang se qadre mukhtalif hai. ye kalaam bhi pasand aaya, meri jaanib se daad qubool kijiye!

Anmol
by Anmol
Thu Jun 05, 2008 11:48 am
Forum: Baat cheet
Topic: Nazir Saheb Ki Sehat ke Mutaliq
Replies: 8
Views: 1972

Re: Nazir Saheb Ki Sehat ke Mutaliq

Assalam Alekum, Salem Bhayi!

Nazir SaaHib ki sehat ke baare meiN aagaah kijiye, woh kaise haiN? online kab aa sakeNge? un se kahiyye k ham unheN bahut miss karte haiN aur unheN mera salaam pohnchaa dijiye ga.

shukria!
by Anmol
Wed Mar 26, 2008 4:41 pm
Forum: Kalaam-e-Sukhanwar
Topic: NAII GHAZAL
Replies: 10
Views: 677

tez suuraj maiN par ko jalaati raheeN shub ko murjhaa kay sub titliyaaN so gayeeN baap kii apnay ghar muflisi dekh kar bhook oRhay huwey bach~chiyaN sogayeeN bistar e margg per naa~tavaaN ik za~eef ghum mukammal huwa sis~kiyaaN so gayeeN jaa kay shahr e Khamoshaa maiN dekho SAMEER kya say kya bolti...
by Anmol
Tue Mar 25, 2008 10:15 am
Forum: Kalaam-e-Sukhanwar
Topic: meri taaza nazm, 'Khwaab'
Replies: 8
Views: 759

Re: Nazm pa daad qubul ho

Muhtarma Anmol sahiba Assalam Alaikum Achhi nazm pa dad qubool kijye. Hona is khwaab ke mutbique chahiye tha lekin afsos ke aise haalat naheeN haiN. Muje to yeh Duaiya khwaab lagraha hai Allah kare ke aisa hojaye. Allah Hafiz Khurshidul Hasan Naiyer Assalamo Alekum/Walekum Salaam! Naiyer SaaHib! ha...
by Anmol
Tue Mar 25, 2008 10:09 am
Forum: Kalaam-e-Sukhanwar
Topic: meri taaza nazm, 'Khwaab'
Replies: 8
Views: 759

Re: meri taaza nazm, 'Khwaab'

Anmol SaaHebah aadaab: ek a'rSah ke b'ad aap se hamkalaamee ka moq'a mil rahaa hai. is nazm ka andaaz aap ke maKhSooS andaaz se zaraa haT kar hai. Kher nazm achchee lagee daad qubool farmaaeN Ghareebi kaa nahiiN ehsaas baaqi hai ab tak sab diloN meiN aas baaqi she'r yeh bhee achchaa hai. lekin dosa...
by Anmol
Tue Mar 25, 2008 9:59 am
Forum: Kalaam-e-Sukhanwar
Topic: meri taaza nazm, 'Khwaab'
Replies: 8
Views: 759

Re: meri taaza nazm, 'Khwaab'

Anmol SaaHibah. aadaab. MASHA ALLAH Khoob naZm kahi hai aap nay, aur hum sub apkay is Khvaab kii taAbeer kay liye dua go raheNgay. bahat ach~chi naZm per naa cheez kii daad aur mubarakbaad HaaZir hai, aaindha bhi apnay kalaam say nawaaztay rahiye gaa. SAMEER Sameer Saahib, aadaab! mujhe Khushi hui ...
by Anmol
Tue Mar 25, 2008 9:57 am
Forum: Kalaam-e-Sukhanwar
Topic: meri taaza nazm, 'Khwaab'
Replies: 8
Views: 759

Re: meri taaza nazm, 'Khwaab'

Bohat Khub Anmol SaHibah. Sub kuch jo aaj ho raha hai aur nahiN hona chaahiye aap ne Khuwaab ki shakl meN bayan kar diya. mujhe yeh andaaz bohat pasaNd aaya. Aap bus yeh nah faramoh kijiyega keh" "Khuwaab sharminda-e tAbeer kahaN hote haiN...Taj har maut pe tAmeer kahaN hote haiN.'' Is Na...
by Anmol
Fri Mar 21, 2008 6:01 am
Forum: Kalaam-e-Sukhanwar
Topic: meri taaza nazm, 'Khwaab'
Replies: 8
Views: 759

meri taaza nazm, 'Khwaab'

http://www.tanhaa.net/anmol/khwaab-2.gif Khwaab chalo tum bhi zara ye khwaab dekho zara si der tum ye farz kar lo har ik insaan koshish kar raha hai woh phir jeene ki khwahish kar raha hai koi ab bhook se marta nahiiN hai koi ab zulm se darta nahiiN hai sabhi ke sar pe chhat hai, aasra hai yahaaN h...
by Anmol
Mon Mar 17, 2008 9:50 am
Forum: Kalaam-e-Sukhanwar
Topic: yeh laRkii Khushi ko tarastii rahe gi
Replies: 8
Views: 797

Re: yeh laRkii Khushi ko tarastii rahe gi

Dear Anmol, duaei.n jaise ke pehle bhi arz kar chuki hoon ke tumhari tehreer paRhne ki bohat khwahish ho rahi thi :-) , sach hai ke farishte hamesha 'ameen' kehte hain isliye meri khwahish poori hui :rose lekin tumhari nayi ghazal ka shiddat se intezar rahega. ghazal mukhtaser lekin bohat dilkash h...