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by Mahtab Qadr
Fri Oct 31, 2008 1:29 pm
Forum: Kalaam-e-Sukhanwar
Topic: aik Ghazal
Replies: 7
Views: 1125

Re: aik Ghazal

janab Anjum Akhtar sahib salaam e masnoon aapki ghazal ka her sher apni nauyat ke aitebaar se munfarid aur waqt ki zaban ban kar qari ke zahn o dil ko mutasir kar raha hai. bahut khoob meri dili mubarakbaad pesh e khidmat hai. is sher ne to poori qaum ki nabz par hath rakh dya hai, Allah aapko ...
by Mahtab Qadr
Wed Oct 22, 2008 6:32 am
Forum: Kalaam-e-Sukhanwar
Topic: PAHLI GHAZAL
Replies: 12
Views: 1779

Re: PAHLI GHAZAL

Janab Akhtar sahib salaam e masnoon

Ghazal nazarnawaz huvi, matla baraye matla hai. dosra sher khoob hai, khateeb e shahr wala sher bhi khoob hai, aur kabhi thi rukh pe nadamat bahut umdah hai, maqta bhi pasand aaya.
shukria

Mahtab Qadr
by Mahtab Qadr
Wed Oct 22, 2008 6:27 am
Forum: Kalaam-e-Sukhanwar
Topic: AIK GHAZAL AHBAB KI NAZR
Replies: 14
Views: 1912

Re: AIK GHAZAL AHBAB KI NAZR

Salam e masnoon Afzal shah sahib aap ki ghazal ka her sher apni tarakeeb aur fikr ke aitebaar se bahut pasand aaya. bataur e khas matla ,sher no. 2, 5 ,7, aur maqta bahut ziada achcay lage. sher no. 4 ke pahle misre mai typing error mahsoos hoti hai, ghaleban misra yoN tha vo kaun be adab tha kal ...
by Mahtab Qadr
Wed Oct 22, 2008 6:19 am
Forum: Kalaam-e-Sukhanwar
Topic: aik terhii ghazal
Replies: 10
Views: 1270

Re: aik terhii ghazal

Janab Ehtesham Anwer sahib salaam e masnoon aapki purehtesham ghazal nazarnawaz huvi. saray sher pasand aaye aur baaz ashaar ziada dil ko lage jo hazb e zail haiN. Junoo ki karfermai tu dekhoo KaheeN se chaak ab damaaN nahi hay junoN lagta hai bahut chalaak hogaya hai:) Hikayaat ek zara mujnooN ki ...
by Mahtab Qadr
Sun Jul 06, 2008 7:38 am
Forum: Kalaam-e-Sukhanwar
Topic: Indoor plant
Replies: 3
Views: 861

Re: Indoor plant

Zarqa ji salaame masnoon
aapki azad nazm khoobsurat ehsaasat ki ainadaar hai, bahut khooob
Mahtab
by Mahtab Qadr
Thu Aug 16, 2007 8:42 pm
Forum: Urdu Adabi KhabreN
Topic: Ek Shaam Abdullah Nazir Sahib Ke Naam
Replies: 11
Views: 5380

aap tamama ki mohabbatoN ke lye behad shukria, report bhi isi nacheez ne likhi jise aapne pasand farmaaya, mai mashkoor hoN.
by Mahtab Qadr
Sun Aug 12, 2007 2:37 pm
Forum: Hamd aur Naat e Rasool
Topic: Meraaj.ul Nabi* per mera toHfa.........
Replies: 9
Views: 1938

Jawaid Sahib Salaam e masnoon mashallah naat e shareef ne behad mutassir kia kya jazbaat haiN aapke , Allah har eimaan wale ko madeene ki ziarat naseeb kare balke wahaN ki aap o hawa uski sansoN ko muesser ho jaaye. aap saare sher pasand aaye. aur hazb e zail sheroN ne dil ko tarhpa dia, jab bayaaN ...
by Mahtab Qadr
Sun Aug 12, 2007 2:23 pm
Forum: Urdu Adabi KhabreN
Topic: Ek Shaam Abdullah Nazir Sahib Ke Naam
Replies: 11
Views: 5380

Salem Bhai aapka shukria ke aapne is mufasal report ko urdubandhan par pesh farmaya jo Sara Jabeen , Abdullah Nazir aur aapke alawa kai deegar urdu ke chahne waloN ki bhi site hai aur bataur e khas Abdullah Nazir sahib ki site hai jiska izhar site par chaspaN banner se bhi hota hai,, Allah isay ...
by Mahtab Qadr
Sat May 26, 2007 9:35 pm
Forum: Kalaam-e-Sukhanwar
Topic: shahsawari ke khar sawaari hai -Aik Taaza Ghazal
Replies: 4
Views: 896

Re: shahsawari ke khar sawaari hai -Aik Taaza Ghazal

Mohatrama Sara sahiba Salaam e masnoon daad ka shukria, jab sher daad ke qabil haiN to phir ye bedaad kioN..aapke tassuraat aapke zahn ki paidawar nahi lagte, baharhaal aapne kaha hai to jawaban arz ye hai ke, sara ji aap to khud achi khasi shayera haiN aap kia nahi samajhte ke shayer jis muashire ...
by Mahtab Qadr
Thu May 24, 2007 12:14 pm
Forum: Kalaam-e-Sukhanwar
Topic: shahsawari ke khar sawaari hai -Aik Taaza Ghazal
Replies: 4
Views: 896

shahsawari ke khar sawaari hai -Aik Taaza Ghazal

shahsawari ke khar sawaari hai -Aik Taaza Ghazal
by Mahtab Qadr
Thu Mar 08, 2007 12:58 pm
Forum: Taqreebaat
Topic: Jeddah mai mushaira
Replies: 0
Views: 564

Jeddah mai mushaira

Jeddah mai mushaira