Qabl-e-Sud Ekhtram Dosto, Assalam u Alikum,
aik nazm pesh-e-hidmat hai "Guzarish"

Atiq-ur-Rehman Saffy

Saffy saaheb,

aap kee ye nazm email meN aayee thee magar iss kaa font buhat baareek hone kee binaa par sahee taraH se paRh'ee naheeN gayee thee.
aaj idher kaa chakkar lagaa tau aap kee nazm ...

a'zeezah Naheed: salaam!

do teen din pc ke naKhre uThaataa rahaa. ab kaheeN jaa kar woh qaaboo meN aayaa hai! yeh pc bh`ee Urdu shaa,i'ree ke meHboob se kisee t^araH kam naheeN hai! agar rooTh jaaYe to jaan Z^eeq meN kar detaa hai! :-)

aap ne Ghazal kee beHr KhaaSee Ghair-maanoos muntaKhib kee ...

Aadaab,

Aaj kal masroofiyat kee binaa par inn mehfiloN meN zeyaadah aanaa naheeN ho rahaa hai aur na hee dostoN kee takhliqaat paRhne kaa moqa mil rahaa hai. mujhey poori umeed hai ke ye ghair haaziri aarzi caabit ho gee.

kaafi arse se kuch nayaa naheeN likhaa hai magar buhat din pehle kee likhee ...

janaab Munir Arman saahab,

aap kaa kalaam pehlee baar paRhne kaa moqa milaa hai.
aap kee ghazal saaf.suthree aik achee takhliq hai. meree jaanib se daad qubool kijiye! albattah she'r 3 kaa 2nd misra' kuch mazeed behtaree chaahata hai.

shukriya
Naheed

Dear naheed ji,

adaab arz hei.

baRe taweel intezar ke baad apka kalaam paRhne mila
aur paRh ker bohat acha laga. Masha Allah bohat hi manjha hua kalaam hai. poori ghazal hi lajawaab hai aur ye ashaar kuch ziyada pasand aaye hain.

1.
hai jis ke naam ye rehl.e.visaal haathoN meN
base huve haiN ...

janaab Jawaid saahab,

aap ne Faraz Saahab kee zameen meN kyaa bhar.poor kalaame salaam ataa kiyaa hai. mujhey umeed hai ke voh aap kaa ye nazraanah.e.salaam zaroor pasaNd farmaayeN ge kyoN ke ye unhee kee zameen meN likhaa geyaa hai, waisey tau daad dene meN voh khaase kanjoos vaaqe huve haiN ...

wah naheed sis wah itni muhskil zameen mein aap ne to kaafi achchi ghazal kahi hai..ustaadaana rang jhalak raha hai..waqaii ab to aap pakki shaayra ho chuki hain...ek ek sher ghaur karne laayaq hai...dili daad pesh hai is umda kaavish pe :-)

Shumaila

Shumaila,

allah itnee ta'rif. kaheeN mere ...

MuHtaramah
Naheed_Verk SaaHibah,

PurkhulooS tasleemaat,

Aapki yeh ghazal bahut pasand aayi jiske liye meri dili daad aur mubaarakbaad qubool farmaayiye. Aap ne bahut mushkil radeef "haathaoN meiN" isteAmaal ki hei aur us ke saath qaafiyaoN ko nibaane kaa mushkil kaam bhi aap ne bakhoobi ...

Naheed sahiba Aadaab
Aap ki ghazal nazarnawaz huvi behad shukria , hamesha ki tarah aapki ghazal ka apna aik achoota andaaz aik khoobsurat ehsasaat ka ghuncha e lajawaab , bahut haseen ghazal jo aaj ki bahut si haqeeqatoN ki akkasi bhi karti hai. pasand aai. har sher acha .
Mahtab Qadr

janaab ...

1.
hai jis ke naam ye rehl.e.visaal haathoN meN
base huve haiN usee ke malaal haathoN meN
2.
kisee niSaab meN jin ke jawaab mil na sakeN
baSaaratoN ne paRhe voh sawaal haathoN meN
3.
maiN suntee hooN tira be.taabiyoN bharaa lehjah
bane huve haiN tire khadd.o.khaal haathoN meN
4.
jo rezah rezah ho ...

Naheed sahiba
salaam e masnoon
bahut khushi huvi ke aapka majmue kalaam manzar e aam par aachuka hai. bahut bahut dili mubarakbaad
shukria
Mahtab Qadr

janaab Mahtab saahab, aadaab,

mubaarak baad kaa buhat shukriya!
aap apnaa mailing address muujhey email kar dijiye taa ke aap ko kitaab bhijwaa ...

Bohat bohat mubarak ho naheed ji :rose .............naam bhi bohat khoobsurat hai aapke majmuae ka aur aapki takhleeqat bhi utni hi khoob houngi. kya aapne iski runumaii ki koi taqreeb ki hai ya nahi?? aur ki hai to humein kyun bhool gayein? hum zaroor aate the :grin:

Sara ji,

buhat shukriya ...

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makaaN badlaa hai par manzar naheeN badlaa
miree tanhaayee kaa bistar naheeN badlaa

mat^la' achh`aa hai. pasand aayaa. daad! waise meraa Khayaal hai keh :bistar: kee bajaaYe aap ke qalam se koyee aur lafz^ nikaltaa to behtar hotaa!

daad kaa shukriya, aap kaa kehnaa ...

MuHtaramah
Naheed V. SaaHibah,

PurkhulooS tasleemaat,

aek ArSah baAd aapki yeh Haseen ghazal paRhne ko mili. BeHad luTf-andouz houaa. Saare ke saare ashAar bahut hii dilkash heiN aur aapke apne khaaS andaaz meiN kahe gaye heiN. Is beHr kii kam-yaabi aur mushkil ke baa-vujood aap ne iske vazn ...