Ek Ghazal - Ghazal Premion ke Naam !!

Fri Apr 07, 2006 11:48 am

Urdubandhan ke Dosto,

Salam-o-Rehmat!
Apni ek 'Ghazal' le kar haazir-e-khidmat hoon. Kaisi lagi ? Apni qeemati aara' se nawazein, nawazish hogi.

Aap ka apna,

Munir Armaan Nasimi
India

Post by **naheedv** » Fri Apr 07, 2006 7:36 pm

janaab Munir Arman saahab,

aap kaa kalaam pehlee baar paRhne kaa moqa milaa hai.
aap kee ghazal saaf.suthree aik achee takhliq hai. meree jaanib se daad qubool kijiye! albattah she'r 3 kaa 2nd misra' kuch mazeed behtaree chaahata hai.

shukriya
Naheed

Post by **munir-armaan-nasimi** » Wed Apr 12, 2006 2:19 pm

Bahut Bahut Shukriya Naheed ji,

Aap ki hosla afjayi mujhe aur bhi achcha kehne ke liye uska rahi hai. Insa'Allah, aap ko agli baar ek pyari si ghazal pesh karoonga. Intezaar karein.... Bye!

Khairandesh

armaan

Post by **Mahtab Qadr** » Wed Apr 12, 2006 9:57 pm

Wah wah bahut khoob munir arman nasimi sahib
aapki ghazal pasand aai, aur mazameen bhi bahut khoob nikaale haiN aapne. aapki mazeed nigarishat ka intezar rahega
shukria
MQ

Post by **munir-armaan-nasimi** » Thu Apr 13, 2006 7:47 am

Armaan nawazi ka tahe-dil se shukr guzar hoon. Aap jaise qadr-daanon ki wazah se hum hain warna..............

Insa'Allah aage bhi aap ki pasand ka khayaal rakhoonga.

Khuda Hafiz,

Aap ka apna,

armaan