assalamoalaikum,
aik ghazal liay hazir hooN.........jahaN kahiN drustgee kee gunjayesh lagay kerdijiay gaaa.............aap kee araa ka muntazir
Apka
sAbeEh

is shehr kay bazaar meN kia kia nahiN milta
phir bhee mujhay koi tiray jaisa nahiN milta

jo kuch dil e nakam ne chaha nahiN milta
manzil ...

MuHtarami o Azeezi
SabeeH Shoaibi SaaHib

PurkhulooS Tasleemaat,

Aapki ghazal paRhkar bahut khushi houi jo aapke zindah iHsaasaat ki tarjumani karrahi hei. Is kaamyaab kaavish per meri dili daad aur mubaarakbaad qubool farmaayiye.

Ummeed kartaa hooN ke aap apna adabi safar jaari rakhte houe ...

sbashwar wrote:Mohtaram Sabeeh Sahib
ASAK
Vah bohat khoob. Aapki ghazal ka har sheir pasand ayaa.
Daad aur mubarakbaad qubool kijiye.
Salem Bashwar

waalaikumassalam salim bhaeee
bohat mamnoon hooN................ke aap ne meri kavish per naZr Dalee aru hauSla afzayee kee

assalamoalaikum,
aik ghazal liay hazir hooN.........jahaN kahiN drustgee kee gunjayesh lagay kerdijiay gaaa.............aap kee araa ka muntazir
Apka
sAbeEh

is shehr kay bazaar meN kia kia nahiN milta
phir bhee mujhay koi tiray jaisa nahiN milta

jo kuch dil e nakam ne chaha nahiN milta
manzil ...

sara_j wrote: tahree misre per aapki girah parhte hi besakhta hans paRi.........bohat khoob! is umda kavish per daad qubool keejiye.

meray aur dostoN ne bhee yehee kaha hay girah ke baray meN ...................ke mood se hut ker hay...................

sbashwar wrote:Mohtaram Sabeeh Sahib
ASAK
Aapki ghazal ka har shair bohat khoob hai. Meri daad aur mubarakbad
qubool keejiye.
Shukria
Salem Bashwar

walaikumassalam,
salem bhaeee............ghazal pasand kerne ka bohat shukriyaaa

aik ghazal kay saath hazir huwa hooN............ehbab kee araa ka muntazir rahoonga:::: khul ke qainchee chalayeay.............jo bura lagay nishandahee kijiay..................
aapka dost
sabeehuddin shoaiby




ye dil jo aaj bohat beqarar apna hay
naseeb aaj bhee phir intizaar apna hay

jo yaar ...

MuHtarami
SabeeH SaaHib,

PurkhulooS tasleemaat,

Apni Alaalat ke sabab aapki ghazal dekhne meiN takheer hougaie jis ke liye maiN muAafi chaahtaa hooN.

Bahut hi achchi kaavish hei aur aap fiTri shaayer bhi heiN. Is kaamyaab ghazal per meri dili daad aur mubaarakbaad qubool farmaayiye.

Is ...

Sabeeh sahib , salaam
Jumla 8 ashaar mai se 4 matle aik maqta aur 3 sher par mabni aapki ghazal pasand aai.kafi lambi baher hai aur aapki koshish baharhaal kamyaab hai. umeed ke aapki mazeed nigarishaat se bhi mustafeed hote rahne ka mauqa milega
shukria
Mahtab Qadr
kafee sanbhal ker tajziya ...

assalamoalaikum,
Urdubandhan per khushaamdeed.................ummeed kerta hooN ke forum per acha saath rahay gaa!

shukriya salem sahab.......bohat bohat shukriyaaa

shafeeq bhaee itnee achee ghazal se nawaznay per aaap ka mamnoon hooN

assalamoalaikum naheed baji
sub se pehle tu tere naam kee aahat per mubarak baad

ghazal bohat achee hay........................bachpan se aik naat sunte chalay aarahay heN...................""Ajab hay kaif ajab hay khumar aankhoN meN basa huwa hay nabi ka dayar ankhoN meN qasam khuda kee medina ...

assalamoalaikum,
aik baar phir aik aur khwab ke saath hazir hooN.........phir ik mulaqat kee rudaad...aap dosotoN ki aaraa ka muntazir rahoongaaa.
Sabeehuddin shoaiby

meN ne dekha hay kaisa ye sapna naya raat kay is pahar
mujh se bichRa huwa koi apna mila raat kay is pahar

neend kyuN uR gayee ...