janaab armaan munir saaheb,

aadaab arz hai!

bohat khuub aap Ghazal kah rahe hai.n aur musalsaal Ghazal kah rahe hai.n aur is kee wazah aihbaab-e-sukhan ke saath saath ham bhee jaan.na chaahate hai.n kii"aap kaun se chakki kaa aaTaa khaate hai.n' jo itne khuubsuurat Ghazal ataa kiye jaa rahe hai ...

Armaan bhaaii,

PraNaam,


aap kii yeh Ghazal behad achchhi lagii, kuchh alag sii aur haT kar, jo kee aap ke andaaz se mel khaata hai.. mujhe sabhii sher behad pasand aaye hai.n. yuu.n hii likhate rahe.n.

aaj kitanee nikhar gayee khushbuu,
seedhe dil me.n utar gayee khushbuu,

shaam hote hii uD ke ...

Urdubandhan ke ke sabhii dostoN ko mera salaam.. Dr. Bashidr Badr jee kee zameen par likhi huii ek taazhi Ghazal pesh karta huuN.... ummeed hai ehbaab-e-sukhan apni aara se nawaaZeNge... Shukriyah! beHr.e.hazaj, musamman, aKhrab, makfoof, meHzoof ...

Hashmat Usmani wrote:aadaab Mayank saaHib,

aapkii Ghazal nazar_nawaaz huii...maiN Zia saaHib kii raaye se muttafiq huN. shukria share karne ke liye.

Hashmat

Hasmat saaheb,

aadaab,

aap ne waqt nikal kar Ghazal paRha ess ke liye tah-e-dil se shukriya..

-Mayank

Mayanak Jee, aadaab

kaise haiN aap?

janaab aap ki Ghazal bahut pasand aaii, albatta beshtar asha'aar meiN aisa lagaa k miSra'e beHr se Khaarij haiN , aap dobaara check kejiye ! shukriya

Zia Baloch

Zia saaheb,

aadaab,

aap ko yahaaN deKh kar bohat KhuShi huii.. Kaafi dino ke baad aap se ...

Mayank sahib,

mein khud bilkul nauwarid hooN. meri ra-aye ki koi ahmiat nahi. aik oar baat kehtaa chalooN. Aik dunya Mcdonald ke burger ki shaidai hei. Laikin woh mujhe pasand nahi. iss ka ye matlab nahi ke woah ghazaiat ke aitbaar se bilkul naa kara ho ga. bus har shakhs ka apna apna mizaaj ...

DostoN,

'urdubandhan' ke sabhii dostoN ko Mayank ka salaam.. ek Ghazal peSh e Khidmat hai, paRhiye aur chaahe pasandagii ki ho chaahe na-pasandagii kii izhaar-e-Khayaal zaroor farmaaiye...

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Matla Arz Hai:-

zulm woh Dhaate haiN ham par aazmaane ke liye,
ham ...

Anmol saahiba,

bohat khoob Sher kahe haiN aap ne.. Kya khoob andaaz hai.. har Sher ess dil par chhuriyaaN chala rahe haiN .. aap ko Shaayad aaj pahli martaba paRhna huaa... haalaki, aap se guftgu kaii baar ho chuki hai... ek dilkaSh Ghazal ke liye mere jaanib se bharpoor daad qubool keejiye.. yuuN ...

Janab Aadaab
kia kahne ,wah wah bahut khoob

Mahtab Qadr

Mahtab saahab,

aadaab

Sab se pahle aap ne meri is haqeer koShish ko pasand kiya aur waqt nikaal kar hausal afzaayi ki yeH jaan kar bohat KhuShi huii.. ess liye sar-aa-paa mamnoon huuN... aap ki daad-o-mubaarak baad mere liye be-had ...

Daanish saahab,

pranaam:

bohat dilkash Ghazal sunaaii hai aap ne..

itni khuubsurat ghazal ke padh kar dil khush ho gaya.... Har Sher khud apna misaal hai aur maqta be-misaal hai...

meri jaanib se dili mubarak-baad qubool farmaiyen..

Mayank

MuHtarami
Manish Bansal 'Ghaafil'(Mayank) SaHib,

Aapki ghazal bahut pasand aayi jiske liye meri dili daad aur mubaarakbaad qubool farmaayiye.

MaqTeA ke pahle miSreA ko agar yooN kardeN tou behtar houjaayegaa kiyunkeh sirf "sakegaa" se baat vaaZeH nahiN hourahi hei.

Judaa houke ;GHAFIL; nahiN ...

Maneesh 'Ghaafil' saheb
Jigar ki zameen meiN kahi gayi aap ki Ghazal ek bohat hi kaamyaab koshish hai. rawaaN aur salees.
meri jaanib se daad Haazir hai. qubool farmaaiye.
basad Khuloos
Daanish

Daanish saahab,

Pranaam,

Aap ko meri yeH koShish pasand aaii, jaan kar behad achchha laga.. YuuN ...