Khurshid SaHeb, walaikum us salam. kaise heN aap? inheN bazmoN ki badolat aap ke naam aor kalam se shanashai ho chuki hai. kuch mazeed aap ke baare meN pataa chalay to bohat khusi ho gi. kyaa aap apne tuaraf ka link day sakte heN. chaliaye aate heN ghazal ki tara. sach to ye hai abhi paRhi nahi :). ...

Janab Rukhsaar SaHeb, aadaab. aap ki ghazal bohat shaandaar aor pur acar hai mubaarak baad qubool kijiaye. ashaar ka inifiraadi acar ye rahaa. jo mushkil raasta hay vohi hum nay chounaa hay-------------------------------------bohat khoob. kinaray par khRay ho vo koi doobtaa hay----------------------...

Mujahid SaHeb, khoob ghazal kahi aap ne daad qubool kijiaye. 1. sher achhcha aahi. --------------------------nahi mil rahaa ye moqa ke woh giRgaRa ke ro-aye--------woh ki takraar se bachne ke leeaye 2. kuch khaaS samajh nahi aayaa. 3. jo oar woh ki kuch gaR baR lag rahi hai. 4. ye bhi achchaa sher h...

ghazal kahaN hai?

Jawaid SaHeb,

kaafi 'arSaa ke b'aad Haazir huwaa hooN. laikin yaqeen hai ke meN ab bhi aap ki duaooN men hooN ga.

ghazal bohat achhchi hai aor maqta' shaandaar. daad qubool kijiaye.

mukhliS,

Mohtaram Janab khurshidul Hasan Naiyer SaHeb, meN aap ka bohat shukrguzaar hooN ke aap ne mairi ghazal par raa-aye di. aor umeed kartaa hooN ke aap ye shafqat jaari rakheN geN. 1 sha'r kaa pahlaa misra aapkee negaah daqeeq ka t^lib hai. ji meN dekh looN ga. 2 sha'r pasand aaya achhi tazmeen hai. abh...

'azeezan e bazm aek TarHi ghazal Haazir e khidmat hai aor hamesha ki taraH aap ke tabSaraa jaat ka intezaar hai. a. konsa sher aap ko pasandaa aayaa. b. konsaa sher halke meHsoosh huway c. konse sher ko kaise behtar kiyaa jaa saktaa hai, paishgi shukriyaa ke saath, mamnooN, Muhammad Khawar. 1. Mulaa...

Sohail SaHeb, bohat khoob. ghazal bohat achhchhi aor acar aNgez hai. sher no. 2, 4, 11 aor 12 boaht achhchhe lagay. mukhliS khawer bhaee ghazal pasand kernay ka bohat shukria waisay sach puchaiN to aap ki tareef say ziaadah aap ki nukta cheeni ka lutf aataa hay aur woh abhi udhaar hay :grin: wassal...

Sohail SaHeb,

bohat khoob. ghazal bohat achhchhi aor acar aNgez hai. sher no. 2, 4, 11 aor 12 boaht achhchhe lagay.

mukhliS

jaanaaN ji,




waah waah. kya zabardast sher kaheN heN aap ne. dil khush ho gayayaa. chooNke aap ne roman nahi likhi so iss par guzaara karnaa paRay ga.


mukhliS,

Salam Muzaffar SaHeb, aap se bhala kyaa takkaluf, leejiaye Haazir huwaa chaahtaa hooN. baGuleY dasht-o-SeHraa meN uReeN geY Chaar su barsooN baheY gaa gar dil-e-majrooH kaa naaHaq lahoo barsooN! zabardast! l Qafas meN reh ke beGaanah naheeN eHsaas-e-Gulshan se mujheY beshaen rakheY gaa kheyaal-e-ran...

khursheed SaHeb, mushaaira meN apni ghazal pesh kar ise ronaq bakhshne ke leeaye mubaarakbaad qubool kijiaye. ghazal behtareen hai aor paRhte huwaay mairi kafiat is t^araH rahi. unhaeN maeree mujhe unkee rahee hai justujoo barsoN sitam gaar e zamaana ho sake naa roo-ba-roo barsoN bohat khoob. muh^ab...

Tahira ji

aap ki shairy bataati hai ke aap ke seenay meN aek dard mand dil dhaRaktaa hai hai jo insaaniat aor watan e 'azeez ke dukhoN par afsurdaa ho jaataa hai. kash ke Allah t'aalaa har shakhS ko aisaa hi dil day. Allah t'aaalaa aap ko hamesha khush o khrumam rakhaay

regards,

Salam mujhaahid SaHeb, aap ki ghazal ka majm'ee ta,aacur bohat achchaa hai. daad qubool kijaiye. maazaameen aor bayaan dono hi mujhe pasand aa-aye. Sirf aek kami rahi to roman version ki [:)] 1. maTla meN mujhe rabt kuch kamzoor laga. 2. qiyaamat se nahi thaa kam tiraa deedaar ik lamHa. 3. zameen oa...

[quote/ janaab muhammad salaam-aaleikum bhai aap ki ghazal padhne ka bahoot mazaa aaya , behad khoobsurat alphaazo me aap ne apne jazbaato ko piiro kar jo yeh ghazal chhedi hai vo sidhi nigaah ke raastey ho kar dil me utar jaati hai, bahoot khoob likha haidil se mubaarakbad qubool farmaye yunhi likh...