moHtaram Haafiz^ Muzaffar SaaHib aadaab! kaese mizaaj haiN. jawaab dene meN takheer hoee is ke liye naadim hooN. daraSl kuch maSrufiyat aaRe aate rahee. lekin aap kee nazm bohot pehle dekh lee thaa. aor khub lut^f andooz bhee huwaa thaa. mashAllah bohot khubSurat likhte haiN. aor aap ke qalam meN ...

sara je shukriyaa

shukriyaa

Adh Khilaa Gulaab Kaa Phool.. Payaar Se Thamaayaa Jab.. NAAK Se Lagaayaa Jab.. ZINDGGI Haseen Laggi.. Bohat Dilnasheen Laggi.. ----=====------=====--- Adh Khilaa GHULAAB Mujhhe De Ke Us Ne Farmayaa.. Muft Yeh Nahhi Aayaa.. DE Ke Ik Pachaas Kaa Not.. Pehlle Mujh Ko Faarigh Kar.. -------------- Baad ...

merre ham naam muzaffar bhai...................thanks aap ko yeh sab passand aayaa....men ab tak 300 nazmmen likh chukaa hoon....un men sec achhi achhi urdubandhan par pesh karoon gaa.

yeh sab tobohat achaa ha....welldone

Dear Merre haam Naam Sahib..Bohat shukriyaa....aap ne is qaddar khaloos se wellcome kahaa.....aur merri poem bhi pasaand ki...bohat bohat shukarguzaar hoon janb kaa,thanks a lot

Badaltte Mausammon Men Aik Maussam Payaar Kaa Maussam.. Kabhi Yeh Jeet Kaa Maussam Kabhi Ha Haar Kaa Maussam.. Yeh Maussam Jab Bhi Aaey Jaan Lo Yeh Phir Naa Aaey Gaa.. Jo Bichhraa Thaa Kabhi Us Yaar Ke Dedaar Kaa Maussam.. Andherri RAAT Men MOHSIN Yeh Maussam Jab Draattaa Ha.. To Ghabraa Kar Woh ...

sbashwar wrote:Mohtaram Hafiz Muzaffar Mohsin Sahib

Khush-amdeed. Aap apni aamad apne kalaam se ki hai jiske liye main tehdil se mamnoon houN.
Aapka kalaam bhi bohat pasand ayaa.
Shukria
Salem Bashwar

thanks for your nice comments

Woh Faasiloon Men Kammi Khud Hi Kar Giaa Hottaa...! Khushi Khshi Woh Khushi Se Hi Mar Giaa Hottaa... Jo Us Ki Raah Men Bethhe The Le Ke Moon Pay Naqaab.. Unhen Samaajh Ke Woh Khud Un Se Lar Giaa Hottaa.. Woh Subhoo Uth Ke Galli Men Kaheen Se Apnni Giaa.. Haaey Kaash..!Woh Bolaa Men GHAR Giaa Hottaa ...

Raahbar Neend Ki Aghoosh Men Ha.. Qaumm Sooi Ha Koi Baat Nahhi.. Aik LUQQMME Ke Waastte MOHSIN .. BETTI Rooi Ha Koi Baat Nahhi..? Hirso Laalach Ki Zehar Alood Fasal.. Phir Se Booi Ha Koi Baat Nahhi...? Terre Laalach Ke Waastte AAURRAT.. Bewaah Hoi Ha Koi Baat Nahhi.. Chand Sikkon Ke Waastte BASTTI ...