Wow! aek aur khoobsurat takhleeq........waah Riz ji bohat khoob! "voh khushbu ki kalyaaN mehekne se pehle hi murjha gayein hain gulabon ke khilne ki naubat nahin aa saki hai abhi se bahaarein khizaan ki adavat ka kyunker nishana bani hain" bohat khoob! bohat saari daad qubool keejiye. sar...

aik nazm paish hay. aap ki ra,ay ka intizar rahay ga.

Dawood Rizwaan saaHeb: Aadaab-o-tasleemat, Aap ko iss bazm meN khush-aamaadeed. :) Aap ko yahaan deikh kar az-hadd khushi howee. hasb-e-mamool aap ki yeh nazm bhi bohat khoob hai. Mujhe bhi seekhaa deejiye ke iss tarhaa aazaad nazm meN jaan kaise daalte heN. :) ek khoobsoorat kawish per meree janib...

MuHtarami DAWOOD RIZWAN Saahib, Purkhuloos Tasleemaat, :) Kyaa kehne kitni khoobsoorat aazad nazm paish kii hei aapne! Yeh aap hii kaa haq hei ke aap ne isqadar dilkash alfaaz se is ko aaraastah kiyaa hei. Meri bharpoor daad aur mubaarkbaad Haazir hei. Ummeed ke aayindah bhii aap isi taraH se apne ...

AOA
aray yahan too saray urdustan walay doost hain !!!!!!!!!!!!!