Faraaz saaHib kii yeh bahot hii dil_kash Ghazal aur phir us par aapkii utnii hii dil_fareb 'akkaasii paRh kar aur dekh kar dil baaGh baaGh ho gayaa. aapkaa teh-e-dil se shukria. ummeed hai ki aap aise hii umda o urfa kalaam se hameN navaazte raheNge. shukria.
is Ghazal ko [paRH kar be_moHaala Ghaalib kii ek Ghazal zehn meN ubhar aayii:
'ishq vo Gham ki aashufta_bayaanii maaNge
isii taraHii Ghazal par janaab e Raj Kumar "qai's" saaHib kii bhii ek bahot hii a'alaa Ghazal yaad aagayii jo unhoN ne Toronto, Canada meN yaum-e-Ghaalib ke silsile se ek mushaair'e meN paRhii thii aur jise mausoof ne kaii adabii forums par chaspaaN bhi kii thii.
WAHHHHHHHHHHH FARAZ sahab ki bahut hi behtareen ghazal aap ne yahan chaspaaN ki hai...kya ash'aar hain..wah...khaaskar 3rd,5th aur 6th sher ke baare mein kya hi kehna...bahut bahut shukriya Raheel sahab share karne ka :)
Shumaila
Koi pooche humse hamaari haalat ka sabab
to ashk baha kar bhi baat adhoori reh jati hai
Waqt jaise kahin thehar sa gaya hai
Na Gham jaata hai na khushi aati hai