Nasha badan mai utarta sharaab lafzoN ka

Post by **Mahtab Qadr** » Tue Jan 04, 2005 12:24 pm

Aik Ghazal :Nasha badan mai utarta sharaab lafzoN ka urdu script mai
:)

Post by **Hashmat Usmani** » Wed Jan 05, 2005 2:35 am

salaam Sarfaraz saaHib,

ummeed hai ki aapke mizaaj ba_Khair hoNge.

aapkii Ghazal paRhii aur paRh kar bahot maHzooz huaa. hamesha kii taraH aapkii yeh ghazal bhii bahot zabardast rahii. baRe chust Khayaal pesh kiye haiN. sabhii ash'aar ek dusre se sabqat liye huye haiN. Allah kare zor-e-qalam aur ziyaadah.

aapke agle kalaam kaa shiddat se intezaar rahegaa. Ghazal hamaare saath share karne ke liye maiN aapkaa mamnoon huN. shukria.

faqat Khaak_nashiiN,

Hashmat [MM]

Post by **Mahtab Qadr** » Tue Jan 11, 2005 10:56 am

Hashmat Usmani wrote:salaam Sarfaraz saaHib,

ummeed hai ki aapke mizaaj ba_Khair hoNge.

aapkii Ghazal paRhii aur paRh kar bahot maHzooz huaa. hamesha kii taraH aapkii yeh ghazal bhii bahot zabardast rahii. baRe chust Khayaal pesh kiye haiN. sabhii ash'aar ek dusre se sabqat liye huye haiN. Allah kare zor-e-qalam aur ziyaadah.

aapke agle kalaam kaa shiddat se intezaar rahegaa. Ghazal hamaare saath share karne ke liye maiN aapkaa mamnoon huN. shukria.

faqat Khaak_nashiiN,

Hashmat [MM]

shukria nawazish Hashmat sahab
MQ

Post by **waqar_masood** » Tue Jan 11, 2005 12:53 pm

assalam o alaikum janab mahtab sahib

khoob.... buhut hi umdaa ghazal .. buhut payaray ... maqtaa to buhut hi umdaa hay ..buhut si daad qubool kejay aur share kernay kay leye buhut buhut shukria

waqar masood

Post by **Shummu** » Tue Jan 11, 2005 8:01 pm

Wah Wah Wah bahut khoob Mahtab sahab....takraar-e-lafzi behad pasand aayi ghazal mein....ek ek sher lajawaab hai..dher saari daad haazir hai is khoobsurat ghazal pe :)

Shumaila

Post by **Star Mind** » Wed Jan 12, 2005 3:27 am

Assalam-o-a'laikum,

moHtarami M.Q SaaHib, aap ki yeh dil-kash ghazal paRhee to bahut pehle thee, magar bar-waqt jawaab na de saka, jis keleye maiN tah-e-dil se maa'zirat chaahta hoN .
aap ne to kamaal kardiyaa SaaHib !!
kyaa dil-kash payraaye maiN itne u'mdah mazaameen ko qalam-band kardiyaa hai aap ne ! waah SaaHib waah ! , kis kis she'ar ki taa'reef karoN k har shea'r hi dil nikaal kar hatheeli par rakh dey ! .
dheeroN daad qabool kejeye. bahut bahut shukriya

mokhliS : Zia Baloch

Post by **irfan abid** » Sat Jan 15, 2005 2:05 am

Mahtab Sb, aadaab!

aap kii Ghazal dekhii, aur lutf.andoz huaa. baRii naadir taraakeeb istemaal kii haiN aap ne, aur Ghazal qaarii par apnaa asar chhoRne meN kaamyaab hai. daad qubuul keejiye!

niyaazmand,
Irfan :Abid:

Post by **Mahtab Qadr** » Mon Jan 17, 2005 8:42 am

sara_j wrote:Bohat umdah mahtaab saahib bohat umdah, poori ghazal pasand aayi aapke aur bhi kalaam ka intezar rahega.

sara

saraji bahut shukria ishallah hazbe mauqa kalam pesh karne ki jasarat karta rahoNga.
Mahtab Qadr

Post by **Mahtab Qadr** » Mon Jan 17, 2005 8:44 am

waqar_masood wrote:assalam o alaikum janab mahtab sahib

khoob.... buhut hi umdaa ghazal .. buhut payaray ... maqtaa to buhut hi umdaa hay ..buhut si daad qubool kejay aur share kernay kay leye buhut buhut shukria

waqar masood

walaikum salaam mohatram waqar masood sahib

aadab , zarranawazi ka shukria huzoor

Post by **fatimah** » Mon Jan 17, 2005 10:43 am

aslaam_u_alikam

mehtab ji aap ki yeh gazal bohat pasand ayi.

khaas tor per sher no 4 our 5.

daad qubool kijiye.
shukriya

Post by **Mahtab Qadr** » Sat Jan 22, 2005 1:46 am

Shummu wrote:Wah Wah Wah bahut khoob Mahtab sahab....takraar-e-lafzi behad pasand aayi ghazal mein....ek ek sher lajawaab hai..dher saari daad haazir hai is khoobsurat ghazal pe :)

Shumaila

Shummu ji ,Nawazish , Karam , Shukria , Mahrbaani
Is walihaana aur purkhuloos daad ke lye mashkoor hoN.
Mahtab Qadr

Post by **Mahtab Qadr** » Sat Jan 22, 2005 1:49 am

Star Mind wrote:Assalam-o-a'laikum,

moHtarami M.Q SaaHib, aap ki yeh dil-kash ghazal paRhee to bahut pehle thee, magar bar-waqt jawaab na de saka, jis keleye maiN tah-e-dil se maa'zirat chaahta hoN .
aap ne to kamaal kardiyaa SaaHib !!
kyaa dil-kash payraaye maiN itne u'mdah mazaameen ko qalam-band kardiyaa hai aap ne ! waah SaaHib waah ! , kis kis she'ar ki taa'reef karoN k har shea'r hi dil nikaal kar hatheeli par rakh dey ! .
dheeroN daad qabool kejeye. bahut bahut shukriya

mokhliS : Zia Baloch

Baradar e azeez Zia sahib aapki mukhliasana daad o tahseen ke lye behad mamnoon hoN
Mahtab Qadr

Post by **Mahtab Qadr** » Sat Jan 22, 2005 1:55 am

irfan abid wrote:Mahtab Sb, aadaab!

aap kii Ghazal dekhii, aur lutf.andoz huaa. baRii naadir taraakeeb istemaal kii haiN aap ne, aur Ghazal qaarii par apnaa asar chhoRne meN kaamyaab hai. daad qubuul keejiye!

niyaazmand,
Irfan :Abid:

Mohatram Irfan Abid sahib, salaam e masnoon
aapki is napi tuli aur fankarana daad ke lye mshkoor hoN ke shukria ada karna aik riwayat hai jaise mushairoN mai shora ekraam daad pakar aadaab aadaab kahte haiN. :)

Mahtab Qadr