Radeef Pathar ki, aik ghazal
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Radeef Pathar ki, aik ghazal
Aik Ghazal , Radeef pathar ki , paish e khidmat hai aap sab ki aara ka intezaar hai.
bahut hi khoon bahaa ,tab kahiN uthaa pathar
Nahee haiN taupeiN jahaaN, unka aasra pathar
ye aik naiki bahut qeemti hai heeroN sey
kisi ki rah se jo tum ne hataa dia pathar
baney na bojh ghazal par radeef pathar ki
ye sochte hi , qalam ne uthaa lia pathar
na jaane kab se mai in patharoN ke gaoN mai hoN
dilo nigaah bhi pathar , har ek anaa pathar
muqaam barh gaya pathar ka , lams e kaaba se
magar khudaa to kabhi bhi na bansakaa pathar
tu apne chahre ki be raunaqi nazar mai rakh
phir uske baad hi mahtaab par uthaa pathar
bahut hi khoon bahaa ,tab kahiN uthaa pathar
Nahee haiN taupeiN jahaaN, unka aasra pathar
ye aik naiki bahut qeemti hai heeroN sey
kisi ki rah se jo tum ne hataa dia pathar
baney na bojh ghazal par radeef pathar ki
ye sochte hi , qalam ne uthaa lia pathar
na jaane kab se mai in patharoN ke gaoN mai hoN
dilo nigaah bhi pathar , har ek anaa pathar
muqaam barh gaya pathar ka , lams e kaaba se
magar khudaa to kabhi bhi na bansakaa pathar
tu apne chahre ki be raunaqi nazar mai rakh
phir uske baad hi mahtaab par uthaa pathar
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Waqar Masood sahib , hausla afzai ke lye mamnoon noN.
shukria
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Mahtab Qadr
waqar_masood wrote:wah wah mahtab sahib
kamal ki ghazal kahi
parh ke rlutf a gaya
matlaa intehayee khubsoorat sher hay
mubarak ho aisee khubsoorat ghazal kehnay per
waqar masood
wah wah MAhtaab sahab wahhhhhhhhhhhhhh.....kis khoobsurati se aap ne ashaar qalam band kiye hai..mashaALlah....itna zabardast radeef upar se itne zabardast ashaar....mazaa aa gaya paRhke.... bahut bahut daad-o-mubarakbaad haazir hai itna khoobsurat likhne pe :) Main to kho si gayi alfaaz ke hair phair mein...really very poetic!
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Re: Radeef Pathar ki, aik ghazal
Mahtab Qadr wrote:Aik Ghazal , Radeef pathar ki , paish e khidmat hai aap sab ki aara ka intezaar hai.
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moHtaram Sarfaraz SaaHib, aadaab
waaye hamaari kam-nigaahi k aap ki itnee KhoobSoorat Ghazal par naz^ar na paRsakee
janaab-e-a'aali , aap ne is radeef ka Haq hi adaa krdiyaa ! ham to wese bhi aap k hamesha se madaaH rahe haiN , wajh aap apnaa kalaam dekh kar pata karlejeye ! ;) .
majaal hai jo aek bhi Ghazal kamaal ki na ho !
maan gaye SaaHib !
dar Haqeeqat ham ne aap se bohut kuchh seekhaa hai aur inshaa Allah ye silsila ta dam-e-marg jaaree rahegaa !
hameN to aap k sabhi ash'aar ne muta'accir kiyaa hai ! meeri jaanib se DheroN daad qabool farmaaye !
shukriya
moKhliS : Zia Baloch
waaye hamaari kam-nigaahi k aap ki itnee KhoobSoorat Ghazal par naz^ar na paRsakee
janaab-e-a'aali , aap ne is radeef ka Haq hi adaa krdiyaa ! ham to wese bhi aap k hamesha se madaaH rahe haiN , wajh aap apnaa kalaam dekh kar pata karlejeye ! ;) .
majaal hai jo aek bhi Ghazal kamaal ki na ho !
maan gaye SaaHib !
dar Haqeeqat ham ne aap se bohut kuchh seekhaa hai aur inshaa Allah ye silsila ta dam-e-marg jaaree rahegaa !
hameN to aap k sabhi ash'aar ne muta'accir kiyaa hai ! meeri jaanib se DheroN daad qabool farmaaye !
shukriya
moKhliS : Zia Baloch
Dikhaadi shaan, phir ahl-e-chaman ko, Be-niyaazi ki
Khamoshi se jhatak kar, aaj phir, dast-e-sabaa maiN ne
Zia Baloch
Khamoshi se jhatak kar, aaj phir, dast-e-sabaa maiN ne
Zia Baloch
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Bradar e Azeez Zia sahib
walaikum aadaab
aray aap kuch ziada hi munkasir ul mizaaj ho rahe haiN aur phir mujhe itna na sharminda kijiye bhai mai sirf sher kahta hoN is se ziada mujhe kuch nahi maloom ke shayeri ke rumooz o asraar kia kia haiN seekhne ke lye sites par asatiza maujood haiN aur mai khud bhi aik talib e ilm hoN aapki mohabbatoN ka behad shukria . Allah aapko hamesha khush rakhay.
aapka bhai
Mahtab Qadr
walaikum aadaab
aray aap kuch ziada hi munkasir ul mizaaj ho rahe haiN aur phir mujhe itna na sharminda kijiye bhai mai sirf sher kahta hoN is se ziada mujhe kuch nahi maloom ke shayeri ke rumooz o asraar kia kia haiN seekhne ke lye sites par asatiza maujood haiN aur mai khud bhi aik talib e ilm hoN aapki mohabbatoN ka behad shukria . Allah aapko hamesha khush rakhay.
aapka bhai
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Mahtab saHib
salaam arz hai
aap ki ye ghazal ba.radeef-e-patthar vaaqai bahot umda hai.
is kaamiyaab kaawish per aap yaqeenan daad aur mubarak.baad ke mustaHiq haiN
reit se but na banaa ae mire ache fankaar
aik lamHe ko Theher main tujhe pathar laa dooN
umeed hai isi taraH apne kalaam se hameN mustafeez farmaate raheN ge
amjad
salaam arz hai
aap ki ye ghazal ba.radeef-e-patthar vaaqai bahot umda hai.
is kaamiyaab kaawish per aap yaqeenan daad aur mubarak.baad ke mustaHiq haiN
reit se but na banaa ae mire ache fankaar
aik lamHe ko Theher main tujhe pathar laa dooN
umeed hai isi taraH apne kalaam se hameN mustafeez farmaate raheN ge
amjad
Mire ash'aar ae Iqbal kyuN pyaare na hoN mujhko
mire TooTe hue dil ke ye dard.angez naale haiN
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