Aek taazah Ghazal: Irfan Barabankwi, Jeddah.
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irfan barabankwi
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Aek taazah Ghazal: Irfan Barabankwi, Jeddah.
MuHtarameen Ahbaab-e-sukhan,
Tasleemaat,
Taif, Saudi Arab, ke aek adabi idaare kii jaanib se diye houe TaraHi misrea per apni ghazal mukammal karke use yahaN pesh karne kii saAadat Haasil karrahaa hooN.
Ummeed ke aap apne giranqadr tabsiraoN se navaazkar mujhe shukriyah adaa karne kaa mauqa denge.
GHAZAL
jo khud gharaz haiN uske samar dekh rahey haiN
be laus magar hal - e - shajar dekh rayey haiN
mehfil meiN sabhi unki nazar dekh rahey haiN
wo husn ke jadoo ka asar dekh rahey haiN
ik bar meiN hoti nahi is dil ko tasal l i
so unki taraf bar -e - digar dekh rahey haiN
jo teergi - e- shub se pareshan bahut they
"kis shauq se aghaz-e-sahar dekh rahey haiN"
darbar meiN jakar jo kabhi jhukte nahi thay
nezoN pa sajay aaj wo sar dekh rahey haiN
sajday kiye jatay nahi her aik ke dar per
jis se hameiN nisbat hai wo dar dekh rahey haiN
inAam-e-safar wo hai nigahoN meiN hamari
chehray pa jo ye gard-e-safar dekh rahye hain
darkar hai dastar ki izzat ko bahchana
nadan haiN wo log jo sar dekh rahey hain
wo dekh raha hai ke kahaN ja ke wo barsay
yaN hum kabhi badal, kabhi ghar dekh rahey haiN
jo su - e- waTan jaye hai Irfan yahaN say
us rah ko ba deeda - e- tar dekh rahey haiN
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Khair Andesh,
Irfan Barabankwi, Jeddah.
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iHtisab apne naqaayis ka mujhe aataa hei
Saare Aalam ki maiN taqseer kahaN tak dekhuN
Irfan Barabankwi.
Saare Aalam ki maiN taqseer kahaN tak dekhuN
Irfan Barabankwi.
moHtarami Irfan SaaHb, aadaab
janaab aap ki Ghazal bohut Khoob hai , girah bohut achchi lagaayee hai aap ne ! sabhi ash'aar pasand aaye maqt^a' bhi nehaayat u'mdah hai !
daad qabool kejeye ! shukriya
moKhliS :
Zia Baloch
janaab aap ki Ghazal bohut Khoob hai , girah bohut achchi lagaayee hai aap ne ! sabhi ash'aar pasand aaye maqt^a' bhi nehaayat u'mdah hai !
daad qabool kejeye ! shukriya
moKhliS :
Zia Baloch
Dikhaadi shaan, phir ahl-e-chaman ko, Be-niyaazi ki
Khamoshi se jhatak kar, aaj phir, dast-e-sabaa maiN ne
Zia Baloch
Khamoshi se jhatak kar, aaj phir, dast-e-sabaa maiN ne
Zia Baloch
Adaab, Irfan Sahib!!
Aap ki ghazal bohot Khoob hay, daad balke DheroN daad aap k liye..
Shukria.
Aap ki ghazal bohot Khoob hay, daad balke DheroN daad aap k liye..
Shukria.
My Poetry Website>> http://www.tanhaa.net/anmol
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irfan barabankwi
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bahut bahut shukriyah
janab zia saheb
ghazal ki pazirai ka bahut bahut shukriyah.
khair andaish
iran barbankwi
ghazal ki pazirai ka bahut bahut shukriyah.
khair andaish
iran barbankwi
iHtisab apne naqaayis ka mujhe aataa hei
Saare Aalam ki maiN taqseer kahaN tak dekhuN
Irfan Barabankwi.
Saare Aalam ki maiN taqseer kahaN tak dekhuN
Irfan Barabankwi.
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irfan barabankwi
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shukriya
mohtarmah
anmol sahibah
bahu dino bad aapse mukhatib ho raha hooN. ghazal ke pasandeedgi ka bahut bahut shukriyah
khair andaish
iran barabankwi
anmol sahibah
bahu dino bad aapse mukhatib ho raha hooN. ghazal ke pasandeedgi ka bahut bahut shukriyah
khair andaish
iran barabankwi
iHtisab apne naqaayis ka mujhe aataa hei
Saare Aalam ki maiN taqseer kahaN tak dekhuN
Irfan Barabankwi.
Saare Aalam ki maiN taqseer kahaN tak dekhuN
Irfan Barabankwi.
