"dua maangt hai.n"tarhi ghazal peshe khidmat hai

[haamidbaaqri]

mohtaram abdullah nazir saahib
salaamun alaikum

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iltemaase dua
aapka mukhlis
haamidbaaqri

[Abdullah Nazir]

MuHtarami
Haamid Baaqri SaaHib,

PurkhulooS tasleemaat,

Aapki is TaraHi ghazal ke saare ashAaar mafhoom ke liHaaz se bahut achche heiN jinke liye meri daad aur mubaarakbaad qubool farmaayiye. Albattah beHr meiN aap se chook hougaie hei.

TaraHi miSraA hei"hum bhi jeene ki dua maangte hai.n"
Jiski beHr hei:
Faa'ilaa'tun...fa'i'laa'tun...fa'i'lun
=/0//0/0.....///0/0.........///0
=2122.........1122............112.

Is beHr meiN ijaazut hei ke aap ghair qaafiyah band miSraAoN meiN pahle rukn ko faa'i'laa'tun kii bajaye (fa'i'laa'tun) aur aakhiri rukn ko fa'i'lun ki bajaaye (fe'lun) isteAmaal karsakte heiN.

Aapke mandarja-e-zeil miSreAe doosri beHr meiN hougaye heiN:

fikre farda hame.n sataati hai
faa'ilaa'tun.....mufaa'i'lun.....fe'lun
=/0//0/0.....//0//0...../0/0
=2122.........1212........22 (yehi vazn aane waale miSraAoN meiN bhi hei)
bakhshte hi nahi.n jo auro.n ko

zindagi ek haseen tohfa hai

buzdilo.n ki yehi nishaani hai

log kuch hai.n jahaa.n mei.n aise bhi

daamane sabr thaam aye haamid

Ummeed ke aap taSHeeH farmaalenge.


Aapka MukhliS,
Nazir.

[haamidbaaqri]

MuHtarami
Haamid Baaqri SaaHib,

PurkhulooS tasleemaat,

Aapki is TaraHi ghazal ke saare ashAaar mafhoom ke liHaaz se bahut achche heiN jinke liye meri daad aur mubaarakbaad qubool farmaayiye. Albattah beHr meiN aap se chook hougaie hei.

TaraHi miSraA hei"hum bhi jeene ki dua maangte hai.n"
Jiski beHr hei:
Faa'ilaa'tun...fa'i'laa'tun...fa'i'lun
=/0//0/0.....///0/0.........///0
=2122.........1122............112.

Is beHr meiN ijaazut hei ke aap ghair qaafiyah band miSraAoN meiN pahle rukn ko faa'i'laa'tun kii bajaye (fa'i'laa'tun) aur aakhiri rukn ko fa'i'lun ki bajaaye (fe'lun) isteAmaal karsakte heiN.

Aapke mandarja-e-zeil miSreAe doosri beHr meiN hougaye heiN:

fikre farda hame.n sataati hai
faa'ilaa'tun.....mufaa'i'lun.....fe'lun
=/0//0/0.....//0//0...../0/0
=2122.........1212........22 (yehi vazn aane waale miSraAoN meiN bhi hei)
bakhshte hi nahi.n jo auro.n ko

zindagi ek haseen tohfa hai

buzdilo.n ki yehi nishaani hai

log kuch hai.n jahaa.n mei.n aise bhi

daamane sabr thaam aye haamid

Ummeed ke aap taSHeeH farmaalenge.


Aapka MukhliS,
Nazir.

salaamun alaikum
mohtaram abdullah nazir saahib

bahr mei.n hum se chook hoti nahi.n hai.yeh kaise hogaya hum khud hairaan hai.n.

bahrkaif ghalati ki nishandahi ke liye phir aik baar hum aapke behad mamnoono mashkoor hai.n.aaindah istarah ki ghalati hum se nahi.n hogi iska hum aapko yaqeen dilaate hai.n.insha allah.

ghazal ki nayee shakl baraaye mehrbaani aik baar dekhle.n.aapki qeemti aara ka hame.n intezaar rahega.

allah(sbhnwt)aapko salaamat rakkhe.aameen

aapka mukhlis
haamidbaaqri

[Abdullah Nazir]

MuHtarami
Haamid Baaqri SaaHib,

PurkhulooS tasleemaat,

Aap se mas'alah Hal nah housakaa. aap ne miSreAe tou badal diye lekin vazn waisaa hii hei. 2 beHraoN meiN aap farq nahiN kar paarahe heiN. Ba'z auqaat aisaa houtaa hei. Is Soorat meiN chaahiye ke doosre miSreA ko pahle paRhkar pahle miSreA ko paRheN aur dounoN miSraAoN ki muqaarinat kareN. Shukriyah.
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Aapka MukhliS,
Nazir.
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