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tarhi ghazal guzarish #15 by haamidbaaqri

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salaamun alaikum
dosto

aapke diye hue misre per hamaari adna kaavish haazir hai

gar qubool uftad zahe.....

arz kiya hai....

khuda ka hokay bhi mai.n bandaye khuda nah hua
yeh dil haqeeqate yazdaa.n se aashna nah hua

jo bandah hota tau hota mai.n pairawe ahmed
phansaaya jaal mei.n shaitaa.n ne paarsa nah hua

wujood tha mira aamaadah bandagi keliye
hareef nafs ne behkaaya haq ada nah hua

kiya tha ^ahad keh banjaaoonga mai.n nek magar
hoo.n sharmsaar keh waadah mira wafa nah hua

khudaara sunlo hai faryaad shaaf^i-e mahshar
"tumhaare hijr mei.n kya kuch nah beeti kya nah hua"

badhaale nekiyaa.n khaate mei.n apne aye haamid
hai kya yaqee.n keh yeh lamha tira hua nah hua

nateejaye fikr
haamidbaaqri
alhamdulillah
mai.n to karta nahi.n kuch aur ebaadat ke siwa
paas mere nahi.n kuch aur mohabbat ke siwa
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Azeezi Haamid SaHab,
Aadaab

Bohat Khub. Mukammal Ghazal aapke apne rung meN hai. Wohee tableeghee andaaz, wohee haq ki aawaaz. Aaj ke daur meN achchee aur sachchee baat kahne waloN ka akaal hai aur aise meN aap ke zaat maal-e Ganeemat hai. Khoosh raheN aur aise hi likhte raheN.

MuKhliS
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jawaid badauni wrote:

Azeezi Haamid SaHab,
Aadaab

Bohat Khub. Mukammal Ghazal aapke apne rung meN hai. Wohee tableeghee andaaz, wohee haq ki aawaaz. Aaj ke daur meN achchee aur sachchee baat kahne waloN ka akaal hai aur aise meN aap ke zaat maal-e Ganeemat hai. Khoosh raheN aur aise hi likhte raheN.

MuKhliS
Jawaid
salaamun alaikum
azeez bhai jawaid saahab

aapki daad hamaare liye sanad hai.aap hamesha hamaari hauslah afzaayee karte aaye hai.n.aapki belaus mohabbat aur purkhuloos duao.n keliye hum behad mamnoono mashkoor hai.n.

allah(sbhnwt)hum jaise gunahgaar insaan se yeh kaam leraha hai yeh hamaare liye ek azeem nemat hai aur uski meherbaani hai jiska shukriya ada karna is haqeer se mumkin nahi.n hai.

har lamha apne saath saath apni qaum ki fikr hame.n sataati hai.

jo kuch hame.n us paak parwardigaar se mila hai uska sahi istemaal karna hum hamaara farz samajhte hai.n.

phir aik baar shukriya aapki mohabbato.n ka.

aapka apna
haamidbaaqri
mai.n to karta nahi.n kuch aur ebaadat ke siwa
paas mere nahi.n kuch aur mohabbat ke siwa
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Bahut khoob, waah waah

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MuHtaram
Haamid Baaqri SaaHib,

PurkhulooS Tasleemaat,

Aapki ghazal bahut pasand aayi jiske liye meri dili daad aur mubaarakbaad qubool farmaayiye.

MULAAHIZAAT:

khuda ka hokay bhi mai.n bandaye khuda nah hua
yeh dil haqeeqate yazdaa.n se aashna nah hua

MaTlaA bahut achchaa hei. Waah waah. Aap kehnaa chaahte heiN ke dil is Haqeeqat se waaqif nah housakaa jo hei "wa maa khalaqt-ul-jinna-wal-insa-illa-le-yaAbudoon" Sadaq allahul-Azeem. Yeh aapka makhSooS rang hei.

jo bandah hota tau hota mai.n pairawe ahmed
phansaaya jaal mei.n shaitaa.n ne paarsa nah hua

Yeh sheAr bhi aapke makhSooS rang meiN hei aur bahut khoob hei.

wujood tha mira aamaadah bandagi keliye
hareef nafs ne behkaaya haq ada nah hua

Aapki ghazal meiN aap sirf apnaa Haal nahiN bayaan karrahe heiN balkeh Aam musalmaanaoN kii Haalat ke baare meiN bayaan karrahe heiN. Bahut khoob.

kiya tha ^ahad keh banjaaoonga mai.n nek magar
hoo.n sharmsaar keh waadah mira wafa nah hua

Bahut khoob.

khudaara sunlo hai faryaad shaaf^i-e mahshar
"tumhaare hijr mei.n kya kuch nah beeti kya nah hua"

Waah waah, bahut khoob. Yeh tou naAt kaa sheAr hougayaa.

badhaale nekiyaa.n khaate mei.n apne aye haamid
hai kya yaqee.n keh yeh lamha tira hua nah hua

MaqtaA bhii khoob hei. Waah waah.


Aapka MukhliS,
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Re: Bahut khoob, waah waah

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WEBMASTER wrote:
MuHtaram
Haamid Baaqri SaaHib,

PurkhulooS Tasleemaat,

Aapki ghazal bahut pasand aayi jiske liye meri dili daad aur mubaarakbaad qubool farmaayiye.

MULAAHIZAAT:

khuda ka hokay bhi mai.n bandaye khuda nah hua
yeh dil haqeeqate yazdaa.n se aashna nah hua

MaTlaA bahut achchaa hei. Waah waah. Aap kehnaa chaahte heiN ke dil is Haqeeqat se waaqif nah housakaa jo hei "wa maa khalaqt-ul-jinna-wal-insa-illa-le-yaAbudoon" Sadaq allahul-Azeem. Yeh aapka makhSooS rang hei.

jo bandah hota tau hota mai.n pairawe ahmed
phansaaya jaal mei.n shaitaa.n ne paarsa nah hua

Yeh sheAr bhi aapke makhSooS rang meiN hei aur bahut khoob hei.

wujood tha mira aamaadah bandagi keliye
hareef nafs ne behkaaya haq ada nah hua

Aapki ghazal meiN aap sirf apnaa Haal nahiN bayaan karrahe heiN balkeh Aam musalmaanaoN kii Haalat ke baare meiN bayaan karrahe heiN. Bahut khoob.

kiya tha ^ahad keh banjaaoonga mai.n nek magar
hoo.n sharmsaar keh waadah mira wafa nah hua

Bahut khoob.

khudaara sunlo hai faryaad shaaf^i-e mahshar
"tumhaare hijr mei.n kya kuch nah beeti kya nah hua"

Waah waah, bahut khoob. Yeh tou naAt kaa sheAr hougayaa.

badhaale nekiyaa.n khaate mei.n apne aye haamid
hai kya yaqee.n keh yeh lamha tira hua nah hua

MaqtaA bhii khoob hei. Waah waah.


Aapka MukhliS,
Nazir.
salaamun alaikum
mohtaram abdullah nazir saahib

hum behad mamnoono mashkoor hai.n aapki purkhuloos daad ke.

allah(sbhnwt)aap per apni rehmato.n.ki baarish kare.aameen

aapka mukhlis
haamidbaaqri
mai.n to karta nahi.n kuch aur ebaadat ke siwa
paas mere nahi.n kuch aur mohabbat ke siwa
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Salam Haamid jee kaise hain aap?

MashaAllah hasb-e-maa'mool bahut umda ghazal hai.....!

Daad pesh hai!

Duaoon mein yaad rkahiyega,
Shumaila

Koi pooche humse hamaari haalat ka sabab
to ashk baha kar bhi baat adhoori reh jati hai

Waqt jaise kahin thehar sa gaya hai
Na Gham jaata hai na khushi aati hai
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Shummu wrote:Salam Haamid jee kaise hain aap?

MashaAllah hasb-e-maa'mool bahut umda ghazal hai.....!

Daad pesh hai!

Duaoon mein yaad rkahiyega,
Shumaila
wa alaikumussalaam
shumaila saahebah

al hamdulillah hum khairiyat se hai.n.

aur aap kaisee hai.n?

bahut bahut shukriya aapki purkhuloos daad ka.

allah(sbhnwt)aapki har pareshaani ko door kare.aameen

hum to yaad rakhte hai.n. aapko duao.n mei.n.

aap bhi hame.n duao.n mei.n yaad rakhiyega

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Re: tarhi ghazal guzarish #15 by haamidbaaqri

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sara_j wrote:
haamidbaaqri wrote:arz kiya hai....

khuda ka hokay bhi mai.n bandaye khuda nah hua
yeh dil haqeeqate yazdaa.n se aashna nah hua

jo bandah hota tau hota mai.n pairawe ahmed
phansaaya jaal mei.n shaitaa.n ne paarsa nah hua

wujood tha mira aamaadah bandagi keliye
hareef nafs ne behkaaya haq ada nah hua

kiya tha ^ahad keh banjaaoonga mai.n nek magar
hoo.n sharmsaar keh waadah mira wafa nah hua

khudaara sunlo hai faryaad shaaf^i-e mahshar
"tumhaare hijr mei.n kya kuch nah beeti kya nah hua"

badhaale nekiyaa.n khaate mei.n apne aye haamid
hai kya yaqee.n keh yeh lamha tira hua nah hua

nateejaye fikr
haamidbaaqri
alhamdulillah
haamid sahib,

adaab arz hei.

aapke apne makhsoos andaaz mien ye ghazal bhi bohat pasand aayi.

bohat umda ashaar likhe hain poori ghazal pasand aayi.

daad o mubarakbaad qubool keejiye.

sara
salaamun alaikum
azeez behan saara saahibah

aapne ghazal ko bahut pasand farmaaya hame.n badi khushee huee.

aapki mukhlissanah daad o mubaarakbaad keliye hum aapke behad shukrguzaar hai.n.

allah(sbhnwt)aap per apni khaas nazre karam farmaaye.aameen

mukhlis
haamidbaaqri
mai.n to karta nahi.n kuch aur ebaadat ke siwa
paas mere nahi.n kuch aur mohabbat ke siwa
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