Yaaraan-e-bazm,
Aadaab!
Aap sab kii himmat afzaai ke nataaij dekhiye: ek aur ghazal pesh karne kii jurrat kar rahaa hooN.
Aap sabkii khidmat meiN:
khwaab leykar aaye tujhko
khwaab leykar aaye tujhko jab merii aaGhosh meiN
sochtaa hooN, aa sakuuN na phir kabhii maiN hosh meiN
yooN garebaaN thaa to pinhaaN shakl-e-malmal posh meiN
zikr-e-ulfat kar gayaa maiN, haif! aakar josh meiN
tuu nahiiN to yaad terii saath mere thii zaroor
the wajood-e-yaar key ehsaas chashm-o-gosh meiN
Hosh kaa pardah haTaayaa, to dikhaa ek gulsitaaN!
Zeest kaa sab husn hai us manzar-e-mad hosh meiN.
thaa saroor-e-wasl itnaa, khaak hotii guftagoo!
Khair bhii na poochh paayeN us dam-e-khaamosh meiN
yeh nashaa to, aye "Munawwar", mai se bhii chaRhtaa nahiiN!
YooN bahakne kii adaa hai kab kisii mainosh meiN?
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YaaroN, merii ghazal kaisii lagii bataa'iega?
Aap sabko Munawwar kaa salaam,
Mukhlis
Bhaswar Dasgupta "Munawwar"
Ghazal : Khwaab lekar aaye tujhko..
Moderator: Muzaffar Ahmad Muzaffar
Ghazal : Khwaab lekar aaye tujhko..
Bhaswar Dasgupta "Munawwar"
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Kabhii khursheed kii raunaq pe chhaayaa thaa nashaa yaaroN
Sunaa hai ke usii din ko "Munawwar" jee huyeN paidaa!
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Kabhii khursheed kii raunaq pe chhaayaa thaa nashaa yaaroN
Sunaa hai ke usii din ko "Munawwar" jee huyeN paidaa!
Re: Ghazal : Khwaab lekar aaye tujhko..
wah wah kya khwaaish hai..kya matla haiMunawwar wrote: khwaab leykar aaye tujhko jab merii aaGhosh meiN
sochtaa hooN, aa sakuuN na phir kabhii maiN hosh meiN
wah wah!bahut khoob kaha...!tuu nahiiN to yaad terii saath mere thii zaroor
the wajood-e-yaar key ehsaas chashm-o-gosh meiN
wah wah kya taarefe karna ka andaaz hai..bahut khoob janaab! 8)Hosh kaa pardah haTaayaa, to dikhaa ek gulsitaaN!
Zeest kaa sab husn hai us manzar-e-mad hosh meiN.
aaye haaye..kya khoobsurat shikwah hai khud sethaa saroor-e-wasl itnaa, khaak hotii guftagoo!
Khair bhii na poochh paayeN us dam-e-khaamosh meiN
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han jee ab aap daad qubool karein is pur suroor kalaam pe.....
zor-e-qalam aur ziyaada!
Shumaila