Khawhish e tark e talluq ki namoo kaise huvi
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Khawhish e tark e talluq ki namoo kaise huvi
Aik Taza Ghazal Pesh e KHidmat hai. Aapki raye aur tabsiroN ka muntazir
Mahtab Qadr
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Bahut khoob, waah waah
MuHtarami
Mahtab Qadr SaaHib,
PurkhulooS Tasleemaat,
Aapki ghazal bahut hii khoobSoorat hei. Saare ashAar apne mafhoom ke liHaaz se qaabil-e-daad o teHseen heiN.
Is kaamyaab kaavish per meri dili daad aur mubaarakbaad qubool farmayhiye.
Aapka MukhliS,
Nazir.
mohtaram janab-e-Mehtab Qadr SaaHeb:
Aadaab-o-tasleemaat,
aap kee Ghazal bilashubah bohat dilkash hai. tamaam hee ashaar apnii jagah bohat ache heN.
meree jaanib se ek kaamyaab taKhleeq par dherooN daad aur mubarakbaad qubool keejiye.
mamnoon-o-taalibe--dua'a
Zahida Raees :Raji:
Aadaab-o-tasleemaat,
aap kee Ghazal bilashubah bohat dilkash hai. tamaam hee ashaar apnii jagah bohat ache heN.
meree jaanib se ek kaamyaab taKhleeq par dherooN daad aur mubarakbaad qubool keejiye.
mamnoon-o-taalibe--dua'a
Zahida Raees :Raji:
Meree sha'iree se mujhe jaan Lo
ke yeh aa'enaa hai meri zaat ka
(Raji)
ke yeh aa'enaa hai meri zaat ka
(Raji)
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Mahtab Qadr Sahib,
Aadaab
"Muddat ke bAAd aap ko dekha Khooshee hoii."Waise to maiN Khood dou maheney Gaaiib rahaa magar aap tou bohat pahle se Gaaiib haiN. Chaaliye, 'der aayad durust aayad." BaRee Hasen Ghazal se nawazah hai aaj aap ne. Jisqadar Khubsurat kalam hai utni hi Khusurat kitabat. Zindabad.
Ummid hai ab nacheez se aap ki mulaqaat hoti rahegee. BadauN meN is baar khaSa taweel qayam rahaa jis dauran Ehsan SaHib se bhi mulaqaateN hoti rahtee theeN.
Khulooskaar,
Jawaid
Muscat
Aadaab
"Muddat ke bAAd aap ko dekha Khooshee hoii."Waise to maiN Khood dou maheney Gaaiib rahaa magar aap tou bohat pahle se Gaaiib haiN. Chaaliye, 'der aayad durust aayad." BaRee Hasen Ghazal se nawazah hai aaj aap ne. Jisqadar Khubsurat kalam hai utni hi Khusurat kitabat. Zindabad.
Ummid hai ab nacheez se aap ki mulaqaat hoti rahegee. BadauN meN is baar khaSa taweel qayam rahaa jis dauran Ehsan SaHib se bhi mulaqaateN hoti rahtee theeN.
Khulooskaar,
Jawaid
Muscat
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Adaaab o Tasleemat
"Muddat ke bAAd aap ko dekha Khooshee hoii." " phir shamma jal gai jo parhi thi bujhi huvi":)
Chaliye is se ye to pata chala ke aapbhi ghaib the, ab laut ke donoN hi agaye haiN to yaqeenan mulaqateiN raheiNgi
Aap ki ghazal ki pazeerai ki , aur kitabat ko bhi sarahaa , bahut mamnoon hoN aapka. shukria
Mahtab Qadr
Adaaab o Tasleemat
"Muddat ke bAAd aap ko dekha Khooshee hoii." " phir shamma jal gai jo parhi thi bujhi huvi":)
Chaliye is se ye to pata chala ke aapbhi ghaib the, ab laut ke donoN hi agaye haiN to yaqeenan mulaqateiN raheiNgi
Aap ki ghazal ki pazeerai ki , aur kitabat ko bhi sarahaa , bahut mamnoon hoN aapka. shukria
Mahtab Qadr
wah wah wahhhhhhhhhh baRi hi munfarid ghazal kahi hai aapne..kam ashaar magar sab jaandaar...ye kamaal aap hi kar sakte hain Mahtaab sahab....bahut khoob...sabhi sher apni jagah hain...dili daad pesh hai itni khoobsurat takhleeq pe... :)
Koi pooche humse hamaari haalat ka sabab
to ashk baha kar bhi baat adhoori reh jati hai
Waqt jaise kahin thehar sa gaya hai
Na Gham jaata hai na khushi aati hai
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BHAI BAHUT KHOOB
JANA SABHI SHER BAHUT ACHE HAI N
MATALA AOR MAQTA MUJE ZIYADAH ACHHA LAGA HAMEN BHI IS FUN SE NAWAZ DEN TAKEY HUM BHI KUCH KITABAT KARNA SEEK JAYEN
GHZAL CHOTEE HO LEKIN ACCHI HO AAPNE IS RAWAAYE KO BAR QARAR RAKKHA HAI
EHSAN BADAUNI
MATALA AOR MAQTA MUJE ZIYADAH ACHHA LAGA HAMEN BHI IS FUN SE NAWAZ DEN TAKEY HUM BHI KUCH KITABAT KARNA SEEK JAYEN
GHZAL CHOTEE HO LEKIN ACCHI HO AAPNE IS RAWAAYE KO BAR QARAR RAKKHA HAI
EHSAN BADAUNI
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